Title: Becoming A Nudist
Author: Eskimo1958
Summary: A teen male discovers his girlfriend's family's nudist lifestyle, and 
learns how to adapt to that, as well as how to give his girlfriend some proper
love making.
Keywords: MF, virgin, romance

It was the beginning of summer, and I was seventeen, between my Junior and Senior years in high school. I was growing up in central Florida, which at the time, was far from being as over crowded as it is now. It was nineteen seventy-nine. I was into classical rock back then. And still am, for that matter. You know, Pink Floyd, Jethro Tull, Zepplin, the usual bands. And, I was sort of dating this girl. Her name is Terrie Jones. I'm not sure what attracted me to her, or her to me. But I sensed something was there. Our dates consisted mainly of me visiting her at her home, under the close supervision of her divorced mother, Mrs. Gladys Jones.

My parents, they were a bit open minded when it came to my four siblings and I. I was the middle child, and so I wasn't babied by them, and nor was most of the burden heaped on me either. For the most part, my parents treated all five of us kids in a somewhat normal and healthy way. Dad worked construction and Mom was a nurse, so we were of a working class family. The Jones family on the other hand, were more well off financially. Mr. Jones had left his wife years ago, but it seems her parents have lots of money. This is obvious by where they lived in town and the luxury's they possessed. Yes, they had a nice car, two in fact. Mrs. Jones drove a Mustang convertible, and she also had a nice brand new Cadillac. As for my family, we had two Chevy station wagons, and both were rather old. They had a large in-ground pool, and we had a small, twelve foot diameter above ground pool. Mrs. Jones didn't have to work, but she did, for her father as I would find out.

As for me personally, I'm just your average looking guy. About five-ten in height, maybe one-sixty at the time. Not muscled too much, but not fat either. I guess you could say I was a bit geeky, and I did pretty well in school, being on the Honor Roll all through high school and all. I had already decided on going to the University of Florida after graduating from college, and going for a degree in Mechanical Engineering. For the most part, I had a small circle of friends, whom I hung out with and did the normal teenage things.

Terrie was the same way. Just a bit over five feet in height, with straight long blonde hair, bleached by the sun and always well tanned, she was as skinny as a girl could be, not having much of a chest. Her face was blemish free, as was mine, and her smile was and still is, quite cute. As for brains, she too was the same age and grade as I and also on the honor roll, and was also looking forward to heading off to college the following year. She also was wanting to go to UofF. No, we didn't decided this so we could be together. We had made that decision long before we ever became an item. She was going into what was then the fledging computer field, so she is pretty damn smart herself.

School had just let out two weeks previous, when I went to visit Terrie at her house. Although I did have a drivers license, because of the family only having two cars, my main mode of transportation was my bicycle. I usually arrive at her place at about noon, spend the afternoon there, and peddle on home before it gets dark. It's only about a three mile trip each way, so we're not talking about a long bike ride. When I arrived, Terrie was acting a bit nervous, something which I picked up on right away. I didn't say anything, as we went into the living room and took a seat. So far, our romance had advanced to only a kiss a time or two, a step above holding hands. I wasn't about to push it, as she already had warned me that she wasn't going to let me move too fast with her. Besides, her mom was always around, just like this particular day. I had brought my swimsuit, and was expecting to swim, but when she brought me into the living room, I got that sinking feeling in my stomach that she was wanting to break up with me.

Before we could even talk, in walked Mrs. Jones. She smiled, saying "Good afternoon, Jeff."

I stood, being polite when a lady enters a room, saying "Good afternoon, Mrs. Jones."

She smirked, something which wasn't lost on me, as she said "Please, sit.", and as I did, she did likewise. I was sitting next to Terrie, and she reached over and took my right hand in both of hers, squeezing it tightly. Okay, my mind is racing. Mrs. Jones said "I'm glad you came over, Jeff, for we need to talk."

I nervously responded with "Okay, about what, Mrs. Jones?"

She smiled, "You're a very intelligent young man, Jeff. Something that I was hoping my daughter would find in a man. And, I do believe that you like my daughter a lot."

I smiled, albeit a bit on the scared side, wondering still if she was telling me for her daughter that this was it, that I was being dumped. "Yes, I do enjoy being with her." I interjected.

I can see where Terrie gets her smile. For Mrs. Jones has one that can knock your socks off. "Good. Now, you two are quite young, and very inexperienced in having a relationship. Tell me, Jeff, have you ever had other girlfriends?"

I squirmed, still wondering where this was going, "Well, a few. I went to a few dances with some other girls."

"What about sex?" she asked.

I felt Terrie's hand tighten onto mind, and I stuttered out "Pardon?"

She blushed, "Sorry Jeff, but I'm wanting to know how experienced you are, for both of your sakes, it's good to know what the other has experienced, or has not experienced. And, if your experience level is low, as is my daughters, I want to make sure that you learn the right way to please her, as well as she pleases you."

I had a hell of a time trying to find the words, "Well, I, um."

She giggled, "I know, it's hard to talk about. Tell you what, let me ask questions, and all you have to do is give yes and no answers, okay?"

"Uh, yeah, sure." I replied meekly.

She leaned back into her chair, and as she watched my face, she asked "I take it you've kissed a girl."

Terrie giggled, and I blushed, and said "Yes."

"Good. Now, have you ever felt a female's breast?" she asked.

I cleared my throat, "Yes."

Terrie blurted out "Who's?"

I was about to say, but her mother reprimanded her, "Terrie Lynn! It was before he started dating you, so you will not be concerned about it."

Terrie said "Yes, mother."

Mrs. Jones looked back at me, and asked "It was before you dated her, wasn't it?"

I chuckled, "I have not been with another girl since I started dating your daughter."

"So you two have only gotten to the kissing stage, right?" Both Terrie and I fidgeted a bit, and Mrs. Jones took note, and a slight smile came to her face. "Have you two touched each other in the groin area?"

I choked out a "Yes, a little."

"Did you do the touching, Jeff? Or have both of you?"

"Both, actually." I replied.

"Did it feel good, Terrie?"

Terrie croaked out a "Yes, sort of."

"Sort of? Explain."

Terrie had a hard time getting the words out "Well, momma. It felt good, but when he stopped, I wanted to be touched more, and because he didn't, I felt, well..."

"Frustrated?" asked Mrs. Jones. Terrie nodded her head yes, and Mrs. Jones giggled. "You see kids, you two have a lot to learn about sex. And of love. It's obvious that neither of you are familiar with pleasing the opposite sex. And, this is an important item in maintaining a long-term loving relationship." She turned to her daughter, and said "Terrie dear. You will have to show Jeff how to touch you, in ways to make you feel good. You and I will talk about this in private."

Terrie was blushing, and, I guess, so was I! I mean, here's my girlfriends mother giving us both a rather frank talk about sex and love. I thought maybe that this was the end of the conversation, but I was wrong. For Mrs. Jones spoke again, "Jeff, I would like to end this part of the discussion with this. My daughter is a virgin, just as you are. I know, I didn't ask if you were or not. But, being an older experienced lady, I can tell. Now, the best thing you can do is to observe my daughter. See and sense what makes her feel good. I'm sure that you're a smart enough young man to do this. And when the time comes for you two to loose your respective virginity to each other, it will be a pleasurable and happy experience."

I had a hard time saying it, but I said "Thank you, Mrs. Jones."

See smiled, "Now, for the other item to discuss." She looked at her hands first, and then she looked up, and without any emotion, she said "We're nudists."

I was a bit shocked, as I asked "Beg your pardon?"

"Nudists, Jeff. We tend to be naked when no one is around the house. And, Terrie and I discussed this together before you came over. As a matter of fact, that's why we had the first discussion. I want you to be comfortable in a setting where people do not wear clothes, and not take it as being sexual in nature. Of course, this may take a while to get use to. But I'm sure you would be a great nudist as time goes by." She got up, and I stood as well, and she said "Today is as good a day as any to start. If you've noticed, our pool is enclosed for privacy." She grinned, quickly adding "Now you know why."

I chuckled, and said "Yes, I do now."

"Good, Terrie will take you up to her room, and you two can undress there and come on out and join me at the pool. I'll get some refreshments and some snacks as well." She turned to her daughter, and said "Go on dear. Show him your bedroom."

Terrie tugged on my hand, and I let her lead me to the part of the house where the bedrooms are located. Entering her bedroom, I looked around. Typical bedroom of a teen girl in the nineteen-seventies. A few stuffed animals here and there, posters of popular teen heart-throb rock stars, and the occasional knick-knack. I heard a giggle, and turned and saw she was already down to her bra and panties, as she said "Hurry up, or momma will be a bit upset."

"Oh yeah, right." I replied as I pulled my shirt off, then my shorts. I tried not looking at her, which was difficult, as I sat on the edge of the bed and took my briefs off. There I sat, bare ass naked, with her standing in all her glory, and I saw her blushing. I stammered out "You're beautiful."

She smiled, reached with her hands towards me, and I grabbed them in mine. I stood, lowered my head and she kissed my lips, a sweet smile on her face, and eyes all sparkly. I took a deep breath, as she asked "Ready?"

"Ready as I will ever be." I said with a soft laugh. She pulled me towards the open door, and we walked down a ways. She stopped to go into the bathroom and retrieved two large towels. Then we went outside into the back yard. It was hot, and under the awning sat Mrs. Jones, naked as her daughter and I. Terrie pulled me by my arm towards her, and she said as she laid a towel down on the chair, "You will have to remember to place your towel down first wherever you sit. Okay?"

I said "Yeah, sure." I suddenly realized that I wasn't in an aroused state. I guessed correctly that

I was probably too damn nervous at the moment. I sat in the chair, and began to eat a sandwich that Mrs. Jones had brought out, and drink the Pepsi she had brought out as well. Neither Mrs. Jones or Terrie really allowed me much time to think about what type of situation I was in, for as we ate, both talked to me, asking me questions, all rather mundane, or just talking about what's happening around the area, nation and world. And once done eating, Terrie grabbed my hand and we went into the pool. We just floated around for the most part, with me stealing glimpses of her naked body. We were only in for about twenty minutes, when Mrs. Jones, who was still sitting in the shade, said "Terrie, don't stay out in the sun too long. I'm sure his momma would be quite upset if he woke up tomorrow with a sunburned peter."

I blushed, and Terrie said "Okay mom." So we got out and went back under the awning, where I sat on a lounge chair, after of course I had put my towel down on it first. Terrie just smiled, and she sat on the same chair as I, and laid down on her side next to me. I was a bit taken back by this, after all, we're both naked. But she laid her head down on my shoulder, and I leaned my head back, as I put my arm down along her backside. I was enjoying this, the hot summer breeze as it flowed over me, and Terrie's warm body pressing against my bare skin. I was very relaxed. So relaxed that I fell asleep after maybe ten minutes at most. The lounger had a thick cushion on it, so I was very comfortable laying there.

I woke gently to the feeling of someone kissing my cheek, soft and slowly the lips moved from in front of my left ear, until they were on my lips. I still had my arm along her back, and I pulled her tightly to me, feeling her small breasts on my side. I opened my eyes, and she raised up some, and smiled down at me. I said "I must have fallen asleep."

She giggled, "Yeah, laying out here will do that to you." I looked about, and asked "Where's your mom?"

"She left to go shopping, she said she'll be bringing us something to eat for dinner at about five." She said, and she kissed my lips again. I felt her fingers glide across my thigh, and attach themselves to my pecker. It started to swell rapidly, and I grinned.

"What time is it now?" I asked.

"It's only one-thirty." Then with a sly smile, she said "Looks like we've time to see what each other likes."

I pulled her down to her side, and I eased down her body, getting a good view of her tiny breasts, before I used my tongue to circle her left nipple. She sighed, her hand falling from my shaft and moving to the back of my head. She pulled my mouth to her teat, and I sucked it in between my lips. I moved my hand down her body, gently caressing her skin, before I edged my fingers into her damp slit. She raised her leg up, bending it at the knee, as I prodded her sex. Her hand reached back down and she placed it on the back of mine, and she guided one of my fingers to her clit. With her guidance, I began to rub it, and it wasn't long when I felt her hips start to buck against my hand. Then, a soft groan came from her mouth, and her body went stiff. She whimpered some, while I felt her juices flow from her crotch. I moved my fingers down and pushed them inside her steamy hole, feeling how wet, tight and slick she was.

I stopped sucking her nipple, and took a look at it. It was sticking out a good three-quarters of an inch, bright pink in color, and I saw the other one was as well. She pushed me over and our mouths were locked tight. My cock was at full mast, begging for relief, and I felt her hand grab hold of it, pulling on it hard.

Our mouths released from each other, and she sat up and moved down the lounge chair. She was grinning, and I asked "Are you sure?" She looked at me, and I said "I mean, this isn't moving too fast, is it?"

She smiled, tugging on my throbbing cock, and I knew that I was going to loose my load very soon. She didn't answer me, she just pulled my cock to her open mouth and engulfed the head. I felt her swirl her tongue along the sensitive underside area of my throbbing prick, and I groaned, my toes curling as I exclaimed "Oh fuck!", as I shot thick ropes of cum into the back of her mouth. I watched her face, the whole time her eyes were locked on my face, as she swallowed every strand. I was in heaven, as I reached down and ran my hands through her long blond hair.

After she was done sucking me dry, she sat up and released my cock from her grasp, and said "Come on, let's cool off."

She went jumping into the pool, and I went after her. We played in the water for three hours, our hands touching each other, and at times we would be holding our bodies tightly together. At one point, we were sitting in the shallow end, her sitting across my lap, facing my right. I slid my left hand down underneath her small round ass, and I rubbed a finger at her hole. She giggled, kissed me and said "Jeff, what are you trying to do?"

I grinned, as my right hand easily pushed her legs apart, and I rubbed her clit. "I'm going to make you feel good again." She just giggled, as I moved the finger of my left hand in and out of her tight pussy, while I stroked her clit with the finger of my right hand. Sighing, she leaned her side against me, and laid her head down on my left shoulder. I turned my head so we could kiss each others lips, then I leaned my head back against the edge of the pool, and concentrated on what I was doing. Her first orgasm took maybe five minutes to arrive. The next five were all within ten minutes, as her whole body shook while I played with her sex. I smiled, thinking that I do believe I was getting the hang of this.

Finally, she gasped out, "No, please Jeff, no more. Oh god."

I pulled my fingers out of paradise, and she whimpered somewhat. We kissed, and she settled down into my arms. I of course, had one raging woodie. But I decided that it was probably best if I just let it go for now. I was sure it would be taken care of sometime in the future. After about thirty minutes, I whispered into her ear, "Let's go lay down for a spell in the shade, okay?"

She opened her eyes, and nodded her head, that perfect little smile on her face. We stood and climbed out of the pool, and I laid on my side on the lounge chair. She laid down next to me, her back up against my chest. She rested her head on my arm, as I draped my arm about her, and soon I could hear her soft snoring. I just smiled, and laid there, enjoying the feeling of her warm body, and wondering what all was in store for me next.

Mrs. Jones finally showed up, and she said "Okay kids, I've brought dinner." We both sat up, and Terrie stretched her arms above her head, yawning. She turned and smiled at me, then she stood and went to the table. I got up, and I saw her mother glance at my crotch and smirk, before turning away. Looking down, I saw I was maybe half-hard, and I was somewhat embarrassed. And her saying "Terrie, try not to get the boy aroused. You know it's not polite for the men to have erections at the camp."

Yes, I was blushing, and Terrie was giggling, as she said "Oh mom, he's not hard all the way yet." Her eyes flew open, and she said "Whoops."

Her mother waved a finger at her, and she said "I told you to go slowly."

Terrie was grinning, saying "We are mom. Just not as slow as you would like."

I chuckled, as I laid my towel down and took a seat on the chair. "All right, Chinese." I said, as I checked out what she had brought. Mrs. Jones giggled, and soon we were eating away. I was expected to be home for the evening, so I knew that there wouldn't be much time left here for the day. After eating, Terrie and I swam around some. Of course, we couldn't do much, save for some discreet touching with her mom there. Which was just as well, as I didn't want my pecker to rear it's ugly head. We did spend some time in each others arms, kissing each other and holding on tightly to one another body. Finally, it was time for me to go, and Terrie went on inside with me to dress. I was pulling my shorts on, when Mrs. Jones entered Terrie's bedroom, and asked "Jeff, are you working this summer?"

I said "No, I've been trying to get a job, but not much has been available."

She lifted her hand, and she had a business card in it, as she said "Take this, and call the person on the card on Monday afternoon. Okay?"

I smiled, "Sure will, Mrs. Jones." I was surprised when she stepped forward, and took me into her naked arms, and planted a kiss on my lips. She stepped back, and said "Now go on and get on home. But please do come over tomorrow, okay?"

I stuttered out "Sure.", as Terrie giggled and walked me to the front door. We hugged each other, and kissed. I felt my tool come to life, and she giggled as she felt it through the clothes we wore. Another kiss, and a tighter embrace, and she said "I'll see you tomorrow, right?"

I grinned, "Right after I get home from church with my parents. About one?"

She smiled, saying "Okay.", before giving one more kiss for the road. Oh man, I floated on home on cloud nine! The three miles felt like nothing, as I finally reached my destination. And when I entered the house, mom asked how my day went, and I told her that it was okay. She smirked, as she saw my big grin. Mothers know better. And, years later, I found that mothers talk to each other as well. I slept well that night, with the image of my girl's naked body in my brain. You know, it's funny. Even though Mrs. Jones was there, I realized that I never really paid much attention to her.

The next day, after going to church with my family, I changed clothes, grabbed a swimsuit and peddled the three miles to Terrie's place. A repeat of the day before, as we lounged about and in the pool, naked as the day we were born. We didn't do much sexually, other than some heavy petting while in the pool, all under the close supervision of her mom. The next day, I did as Mrs. Jones had instructed, and I called the person on the business card. Well, he, a Mr. Smith, was expecting my call. He runs a small tool and die shop, and he had me come in that afternoon and he talked with me for a bit. He then took me to the workroom floor and introduced me to his employees. I correctly assumed that I had a job. It paid okay, for a high school kid anyway, as I was more or less a gopher. When someone needed something, I would 'gopher' it. I also learned how to read schematics better while working there that summer, as well as being allowed to operate a machine once in a while. I helped in setting a machine up as well, taking it down, cleaning, all the things needed in running a shop.

Meanwhile, my relationship with Terrie only got better. Two weeks had passed since that first weekend. Every night, I would talk to her on the phone, or ride my bike over to her place on my way home from work. No, I had no car. But Mr. Smith's shop was only about a half mile out of the way from Terrie's home, so I was pedaling on over to her place every chance I had. Which was usually every day. Needles to say, my legs were getting a hell of a workout. After the second weekend, it was a Wednesday night, and I was on my way home from Terrie's after a brief stop after work. It was a fine hour of spending it on the pool deck, with my fingers strumming her sex, making her body sing. She rewarded me with a fine blow job, swallowing it all before coming up alongside of me and snuggling against my body there in the shade. Mrs. Jones came out into the backyard right at that time, and I was a bit nervous, wondering if she saw her daughter sucking me off. But she didn't say anything, as she smiled slyly, taking in the sight of my cock, half-hard and still glistening from the wetness of Terrie's saliva.

She said it was getting late, and with a deep sigh from both of us, I got up and we went inside to get our clothes on. After kissing her good-bye, I peddled on home. Once home, after I settled down on the couch, mom came in, saying "Mrs. Jones just called, she was asking if it was okay to take you along with her and Terrie to their lake place." My eyes got big, and I was all smiles, as she said "I told her that I would pack an overnight bag for you."

I cheerfully said "Thanks mom." She just grinned, and left the room. The next day, I stopped by and saw Terrie and her mom, and they told me that they were taking me to the nudist resort that they belonged to. It is located about ninety minutes away, and they would pick me up from work. Mrs. Jones would also pick me up at my house in the morning to take me to work, so I wouldn't have to ride my bike while carrying an overnight bag. So at six-thirty in the morning, she pulled in the drive to pick me up, and away we went to the shop. Work went well, and at about one, Mr. Smith came out to see me, and said "Get washed up, Mrs. Jones will be here in ten minutes to pick you up."

I protested, saying "But I'm suppose to be working until four?"

Laughing, he shook his head, saying "That's okay, go on and have a good time."

I damn near fell over myself as I ran to the bathroom and washed up. Then after clocking out, I went outside just as her and Terrie pulled up to the door in the Mustang. I got in, and off we went. The two of them kept telling me what to expect, as we drove towards the camp. And as we approached the gate, I was all nerves. Being naked in front of my girlfriend and her mother, that was tough! But now, all these strangers? Actually, the men didn't bother me, for gym classes and all, I was use to being naked around other guys. But women, that's different. We checked in at a gatehouse, and then Mrs. Jones drove down a long lane. We passed trailers, the pool, a tennis court, a bathhouse, where two women were showering in the open, then more trailers. A large lake with a beach, a large building that looked like a clubhouse, and I saw a sign for a restaurant, then some smaller buildings. She pulled up to one of the smaller buildings, and she said "Well Jeff, we're here."

I smiled, somewhat nervously, as we got out of the car and went to the door. I don't know why I was surprised when I saw it was not locked. But quickly thinking about it, who would steal from inside the resort? It's not like you can hide anything in your pants as you walk away, because you're not wearing any. Entering, I saw a large room, with one very large bed, and a pair of recliners. There was one other door, and it led to a large bathroom. I placed my bag on the table, and looked around. Lots of windows, all open, with screens of course, and no air conditioning. So yes, it was quite warm. Mrs. Jones said "It's hot in here, let's get some air circulating to see if it cools the room off.", as she reached up and pulled on a cord that hung from a ceiling fan.

The fan started turning, and I heard Terrie giggle. Looking, she was already out of her shirt and shorts, and at the moment, was reaching behind her back to unclasp her bra." Well, there's other ways to keep cool." She said, causing both her mom and I to laugh. I stripped down, as did Mrs. Jones, and soon the three of us were naked. As they were digging out towels, it dawned on me, there's only one bed.

Mrs. Jones came over and patted my bare ass as I looked a the bed, saying "Yes Jeff, we all three can fit into the bed."

I sighed, "Okay, if you say so."

I wasn't going to argue, and besides, Terrie was now rubbing sun block all over me, giggling as she coated my ass with the cream. I grabbed the tube and started applying some on her as well, making her squeal with laughter as I did her fine ass. Mrs. Jones said "Don't get carried away, kids."

We laughed, as we finished coating ourselves with the lotion. Then, off out into the nudie world. It wasn't bad, actually. I soon found myself being introduced to everyone there as Terrie's boyfriend. And no, I hadn't a clue as to remembering names. I did a great job of keeping my eyes averted above the neck line of all I met, something that Mrs. Jones later congratulated me on. It took an hour of greeting people before we ever made it to the pool. And there, I enjoyed playing in the water with the girl I love. No, nothing went on in the water. Heck, I knew better. One wrong move, and my ass was history! We eventually got out to eat at the restaurant, in the nude, and then as Mrs. Jones sat by the pool, Terrie took me around for a tour. The place is actually bigger than I thought, as we went down a few rows of campers, saw the other motel units and cabins, and then the beach, where we laid side by side in the sand.

We finally arrived back at the pool just as the sun was setting, and Mrs. Jones, who was talking to another couple, smiled, asking how our walk went. We told her it was fine, and all what we had seen, then she rose and we went back to the room. It really had been an eye-opening tour that Terrie and I had gone on. I guessed there to be maybe two hundred people there, and of these, most were older than my parents. There were a few other teens, but not many. More pre-teens than teens. Maybe twenty young children, while I only saw at most five other's that were close to our ages. We did talk to them, as Terrie obviously knew them. All but one were female, and the lone guy seemed to be okay. Hell, I sure the hell would be! And what guy my age wouldn't? Of course, I knew that none of this was sexual in nature, as we finally got back to our room. Mrs. Jones went and showered first, then she suggested that Terrie and I go ahead and take one together. I tried to keep my smile at a minimum, as I followed her shapely ass into the bathroom. No, we didn't do anything in the shower, other than playfully run our hands over each others body's.

We both laughed when we heard her mom yell out from the room, "Okay guys, hurry up in there."

We turned off the water and dried each other off, causing us to giggle some more. Exiting the bathroom, we saw her mom in the bed and under the covers, reading a book while propped up against the headboard. Terrie came over and lifted the covers up, and I crawled in next to her mom, and sat up next to her, as Terrie then joined me. Her mom was to my right, and my girl to my left, and all three of us were naked. Suddenly, I felt a bit uncomfortable, as Terrie grabbed the remote for the television and turned it on. She pushed up against me, as she flipped though the channels, and I now had my left arm across the back of her shoulders, and my right hand was resting on her flat tummy.

This was back in nineteen-seventy-nine, and this part of Florida did not have cable yet, and you can forget about satellite. So selections were slim, as she finally relented to watching a movie. I couldn't tell you what movie it was, as I was thinking about the days events. This was my first real experience with social nudism. Yes, I've been naked the previous two-plus weeks with her and her mother. But now, I was in a nudist camp with them. I had seen well over a hundred people naked, and as I laid there, I realized that not once did I even come close to becoming aroused. Of course, now that my hands were on Terrie's body under the covers, that was about to change. She reached down with her hand and pushed my hand to her crotch. I resisted, and she giggled. She turned and kissed my lips, and tried pushing my hand down again. I glanced at Mrs. Jones, and she turned her head, and said "I'm not sure what's going on underneath there, but you two had better do it quietly."

Well, if that's the case.... I slid my fingers to her slit, and started rubbing her clit. She sighed, and I leaned to her and kissed her lips. She opened her mouth, and we ran our tongues together. I felt her hand reach for my cock, gently stroking it as I fingered her clit. I slid my finger down and pressed it into her tight hot hole, with the base of my thumb now rubbing her little nub. She moaned loudly, and I moved my head down under the covers, and suckled on her right teat. Her hips were moving slightly, and I could feel her hole get even wetter, not to mention tighter. Then, as her body went stiff, she gasped, her lungs exhaling as the air rushed out of her lungs, a soft moan came from her lips as her left hand rubbed my head.

While she regained her breath, I kept on plunging her twat with my forefinger, and I was enjoying the feel of her enlarge nipple in my mouth as I bathed it tenderly with my tongue. I felt movement to my right, and the voice of Mrs. Jones say "Was that good?"

With a raspy voice, Terrie declared, "Yeah, it was."

"Well, he's probably ready to burst. You better take care of it before he makes a mess on the sheets.", she said.

I laughed as she pushed my head away from her breast, and she went down and started sucking my cock. I sighed, enjoying the feeling of her mouth, as her tongue swirled around the head of my dick. I glanced to my right, and saw Mrs. Jones exposed breasts. Although they're probably just a bit bigger than Terrie's, they show their age, not standing out as firm as her daughter's. But she does have enormous nipples, and I smiled, thinking that this is a family trait. I looked down towards my feet, to where the blanket was rising and falling, showing Terrie's head working up and down my shaft. I leaned my head back, and closed my eyes, a big smile on my face, feeling my orgasm approaching swiftly. I felt Mrs. Jones lift the covers up and look at the sight, and she commented "My, he is rather large, isn't he!" I chuckled, and she gave her daughter the instructions, "Go ahead and cup his balls, but not too tightly." I moaned as I felt her fingers gently hold my nut sack, and then I groaned involuntarily, as my pecker throbbed. I heard her gag, as my cum flew out of my cock and into her warm, wet mouth. Hearing her swallow my load made it even more intense, as I had one of the best cums in my life.

My body was relaxed, and Mrs. Jones returned to reading her book, while Terrie nursed out the remnants of a few small strands of cum. She then released my hard cock and rolled up on top of me. We were both giggling as I scooted down onto my back, my head on the pillow as she had her mouth on mine, and I could taste my own seed as we kissed. My cock was pressing up along her slit, and she was rubbing her groin down against it. I said "You be careful, or else you'll make me cum again."

She had a devilish smile in her eyes, as she asked "Promise?"

Mrs. Jones snickered, saying "You be careful girl. You know you're not on any birth control."

Terrie sighed, and laid her head down on my chest, saying "I know, mom."

I was enjoying the moment. My cock, nestled along her warm moist slit, her young, firm breasts pushing into my skin, as I gently rubbed her back for a spell. And all the while, her mom just sat there, reading her book. Yes, I considered it strange. But then, I believe I was taking everything in stride. Terrie soon was snoring on top of me, and my cock was throbbing big time. But I dared not to move her, as I didn't want to disturb her. So, I just relaxed as best I could, and eventually I fell asleep. I had no idea when her mom stopped reading and turned out the light. Nor did I wake when my lover rolled off of me, and she cured up next to me.

In the morning, Mrs. Jones voice boomed out "Come on kids, time to get up."

I groaned, pulling Terrie closer to me, as she whined out "Oh mom, we're tired."

I heard her mom shoot back, "You hadn't even done anything."

I snorted whispering "No, but we would like to try!" into Terrie's ear.

She started giggling, and she rolled over to face me, and soon we were locked in a tight embrace as we kissed. Mrs. Jones was going into the bathroom, saying "Come on you two, I'm hungry. If you don't get out of bed, I'm going to throw a bucket of cold water on you both."

Terrie rubbed her snatch against my hard cock, and said loudly "Maybe that'll take care of his erection."

"He probably has to go pee. let him out of bed to go." was Mrs. Jones reply.

I grinned, saying "Or you could do something else!"

Terrie grinned, but it turned into a frown as we heard her mom say loudly, "I heard that, Jeff."

We both snorted, and I pulled the covers off of us, and said "Come on, we've another day and night yet." She moaned as she rolled off the bed and to her feet.

I stood and we embraced and kissed, as her mom came out of the bathroom. She smirked as she walked by, reaching between us and giving my cock a good pull, saying "Go relieve that thing dear. We don't need it leading you around all damn day."

I laughed as Terrie and I walked into the bathroom, and she sat on the toilet first. She grinned, reaching out and pulling me by my cock, and then to her mouth. I sighed, as she started sucking away. She hadn't been sucking for more than a minute, when her mom came into the bathroom, saying "Ah hah, just as I suspected." in a rather nasty voice.

Terrie stopped sucking, saying "Oh mom, come on."

I groaned as I felt my cock erupt, the first shot hitting Terrie smack between the eyes. Her mother was howling with laughter, as I smiled, relieved as the next two shots nailed her as well, one on her chin and the other on her left breast. Mrs. Jones turned to go, saying "Now get into the shower and wash him off of you."

We both were smiling, and Terrie stood and we climbed into the shower where I helped wash my cum off her body. Miraculously, my cock shriveled up into it's normal flaccid state as we dried off and went and found her mother sitting in a recliner. Then we went to have breakfast in the restaurant. The day was spent laying in the sun and swimming. We talked to others, as did her mom, and I found it interesting to talk to the lone teen guy, his name being Ron. Him and I hit it off well, and I soon found out that his girlfriend's family are also members. Later on I was introduced to her, her name being Margaret. She's a redhead, and is taller than Terrie, and a lot more busty. We had a great time hanging out with those two, and two other female teens after dinner. We both had a good time, talking to someone our own age and all. And we didn't get back to the room until almost eleven, which is quiet time. Her mom was still awake, and she smiled at us from over the book she was reading while laying in the bed.

She asked "You two have a good time?"

"Yeah mom." stated Terrie. "We were over at Margaret's parents place, shooting the breeze." We both got into bed, and just like last night, I was in the middle. We told her mom good night, as Terrie and I started to play with each other. We weren't really talking, as we nibbled on each others ears, her hand stroking my cock, and I was fingering her sex and playing with her breasts.

She whispered something finally, and I said "What?"

She grinned, and said it a bit louder, "Eat me."

I looked over my shoulder, and saw Mrs. Jones was still reading her book. Well, why the hell not?! I moved down her body, kissing her as I went, until I had my face in her furry snatch. New territory for me. Yes, I've gotten her off by hand, but by tongue was a whole new ballgame. I used my hands to part her beaver, and there was her pink pussy. The blankets were just thin enough, allowing me just a bit of light to see, as I pressed my tongue at her hole. She moaned, and her back arched, causing her wet pussy to press into my face. I knew where her clit was, and I slid my tongue up, and she gasped, her hands clutching my scalp. I started licking her clit, and I pressed one and then a second finger into her tight hole. It seemed the faster I licked, the harder she ground her cunt into my face. And I also found that if I was missing the right spot, she would pull or push on my head, depending on which way she wanted me to go.

Then she cried out. Not loud, but loud enough that I heard her mom chuckle. I kept attacking her wet cunt, thrusting my fingers into her vise like snatch, and I was enjoying the taste of her juices as I lapped them up around my probing fingers, before going back to nibbling on her clit. She went of again, only this time a bit louder, as she damn near broke my nose when she slammed her cunt into my face. I slowed down, barely gliding my tongue along her slit, listening to her whimper. I saw the light get turned off, and her mother push herself down under the covers. Then her mom asked Terrie "Well, how did he do, baby?"

Gasping for air, Terrie responded "Oh god, mom. That was incredible."

I assumed then that I had done a good job. I about died when her mom suggested to me, "Why don't you let her suck your dick while you go on eating her, Jeff?"

Hey, I wasn't going to argue, as I crawled up and spun my body around. I felt her hands grab my cock, and then the warm feeling of her wet mouth engulfed it, as I buried my face back into her bush, inhaling her girl scent, which just made my cock throb harder. I returned to licking away, sucking her juices out of her hole, which sent her onto another orgasmic trip. I do believe I was getting the hang of this, and I was most certainly enjoying it. I then groaned, as I felt my cock shoot it's payload into her sweet mouth, and then the wonderful vibrating feeling of her mouth as she hummed out an orgasm on my cock.

I didn't stop, for I kept on bathing her sex with my tongue, my fingers massaging the lips of her twat, as well as along the inside of her thighs. And then, I noticed it. A second pair of hands. Well, a third hand, actually. It was gently caressing my nut sack, and it felt awfully damn good. As Terrie sucked my shaft, with me pumping it in and out of her mouth, I then felt another wonderful sensation An extra tongue at the base of my balls. I reached to my right with my right hand, and found Mrs. Jones thigh. She didn't stop me, as I slid it over her thigh and into her snatch. Her legs parted, and I eased a finger into her steamy hole, the base of my palm on her clit, and I started working her sex like I had learned how to do her daughter. In ten minutes, as Mrs. Jones bucking hips increased in tempo, keeping in tune with both her daughter and I, we all finally had a much deserved cum, as Terrie glazed my face, and I blasted another load down her throat. Totally spent, I rolled onto my side, and fell asleep, and the other two did as well.

I woke up hot, and saw that only a sheet covered all three of us. My head was at the end of the bed, and sometime during the night, Terrie had turned around and crawled up next to me. I was facing her mother, with Terrie behind me, her front against my back. Mrs. Jones left leg was draped over my hips, and the first think I saw as I woke was her beaver. I felt Terrie kiss my cheek, and turning my head, we kissed each others lips. She reached over my hip with her hand and grabbed my morning hard on, giggling softly. I pointed to her mom's snatch, and she snorted. Then, she stopped tugging my cock and grabbed my hand, and pulled it towards her mom's sex. I recoiled my arm when I realized what she wanted me to do, and I turned to shoot her a nasty glare. She grinned, and I could tell she was laughing, as her body shook.

She whispered into my ear, saying "Go on, touch it. You fingered it last night." I decided to go for it, as I reached up between her legs, and put the tip of my finger at the top of her slit. I pushed lightly, and scraped downward. She moaned in her sleep, and her legs parted slightly more, and the thick lips of her pussy opened up just enough for me to see her pink flesh. I saw her large clit, and I ran a slow circle around it with my finger. She didn't react at first, but after my finger took about a dozen laps across and around her clit, her hips moved. I kept it up, until we heard her gasp, and her ass jumped up off the mattress, while she was cussing at Terrie and I, saying "You fucking little shits!" We rolled off the bed, taking the sheets with us, as we were laughing so hard.

She came to the edge of the bed, her face red with anger, and she swung a pillow down at us, clocking me in the head. Well, I pounced up at her, and landed on top of her, she was squealing as Terrie joined in, and all three of us were wrestling there on the bed. At first, it was me and Terrie against her mom, but soon Terrie switched sides on me, as she grabbed my legs and sat on them, and beginning to tickle my waist while Mrs. Jones sat on my chest. I protested, saying "Hey, two on one, that's not fair."

Mrs. Jones was facing away from me, and I had a great view of her round ass. She looked over her shoulder, and said "Did my daughter out you up to touching me down there?"

I just grinned, not saying a word. I eared Terrie go, "He's lying mom, I didn't tell him to finger your clit."

Mrs. Jones spun her head back a round, and said "Honey, you just proved you did. Jeff didn't say one way or another."

Terrie giggled, saying "Oops."

"Don't 'Ooops' me young lady. That�s not the way to treat your lover by pinning the blame on him when you were involved in something as much as him." she said, scolding her daughter.

Terrie replied "Sorry mommy."

"Don't apologize to me." Mrs. Jones stated.

Terrie got off my legs, and came up next to me, kissed my cheek, and said "I'm sorry Jeff. I shouldn't have tried pinning the blame on you."

I smiled, and reached up and pulled her mouth to mine, saying "Apology accepted." before we had a nice long hot kiss. Kind of hard to do with Mrs. Jones still sitting on my chest. Not that I was complaining, but why was she stroking my cock. I heard her mom sigh, and she rolled off of me, and then she got off the bed, saying "Shower time, kids. Let's go use the outdoor ones and then go have breakfast." I was a bit aroused, but she didn't seem to care, as she grabbed towels and Terrie and I followed her out the door towards the closest shower area. After showering, and having breakfast, we spent some time at the pool, swimming and sunning. After lunch, Terrie's mom said it was time to go, so we got into clothes and headed on home. Her mom asked how I enjoyed my first weekend at a nudist camp, and I replied that I was looking forward to doing it again real soon. She just grinned as we begun the long drive on towards home.

The week was spent with me working each day, then stopping by Terrie's place for dinner before riding my bike the rest of the way home. My parents just smiled at me every time I got back to sleep in my own bed, but they said nothing. Of course, whenever I was with Terrie, it seemed she would ask her mother if it was okay for her and I to get somewhere private, and Mrs. Jones would allow us the time for some intimate moments. After three weeks, she had learned lots of ways to suck my cock, and I her tasty sweet pussy. Mrs. Jones called my mother that third week, asking if it was okay for me to accompany her and Terrie to her summer place once again. Of course, mom said sure. If only she had a clue.

With a smile on my face, we left town that afternoon once I finished work. Upon arrival, Mrs. Jones went on inside the office, while Terrie and I took our clothes off out by the car. Ten minutes later, her mother returned to us, saying "Well, we're in the motel unit this time."

Terri said "Oh good." as we got back into the car and drove to the motel section. There were three doors, and we went into the middle one. It had a short hallway, with five doorways. Straight ahead was a bathroom, and two doors on each side. I didn't know it, but she had two keys. She handed Terrie one, saying "You kids get room three, I'll take room four."

I was a bit stunned. I was going to get to sleep with Terrie, without her mother in the same bed. In total shock, I entered the small bedroom behind Terrie. It was just big enough for the full bed, a dresser, and a chair. And that was it. She turned, and we were in each others arms, hugging tightly, when we heard her mother clear her throat behind us. We instantly broke apart, and Mrs. Jones said "Terrie, why don't you go get a spot for us by the pool? Jeff and I will be there shortly."

Terrie walked by me, letting go of my hand, as she said "Yes mother."

I watched as she left the room, and Mrs. Jones shut the door. She turned to me, took my hand, and pulled me to the bed, motioning me to sit as she did the same. She looked me and said "You've probably figured out that I'm allowing you to go all the way with my daughter this weekend."

I stuttered "Well, I wasn't totally sure, until you said that."

She smiled, and squeezed my hand tightly. "Jeff, I like you. You'll be a good mate for my girl. I just wish I had the opportunity like she did." She paused, and looked down at her hands, "You know, not everyone gets such an opportunity such as this. To start at such a young age at having hands on experience in starting a relationship. I've watched you two develop a sexual bond these past few months. It's been a joy observing you two as you both found ways to show how you love each other."

I exhaled, "Thank you, Mrs. Jones."

She smiled, "Please, from now on, call me Mother Gladys. I'll be a second mother to you, as I'm sure your mother will be to Terrie."

"Okay Mother Gladys." I said, a smile in my voice.

She smirked, and glanced at my privates. "Well Jeff, the only thing I have to say, is that I want you to go slowly tonight. And yet, I want you to make sure you make her feel real good as you give her your love, understand?"

"Sure, I'll do my best." I replied.

She smiled, "Good, I'm sure you will." Leaning towards me, she kissed my cheek. Pulling away, she then said "Now, there's something else. You're young, and very inexperienced. Especially in an environment such as this. There will be times when you might be tempted to stray away from your bond with Terrie, and her with you. When this temptation occurs, you two should sit down and talk about it between yourselves, so you can discuss how to handle the situation in a proper, adult manner. For instance, another woman might want to see how good a lover you are. She may not come out and say it, or ask it, but over time, you'll learn the signs of a woman other than Terrie wanting your, well, your companionship."

I protested, "I'll do my hardest not to go down that road, Mother Gladys."

She smiled, patting my bare thigh, "Yes, I know. I also know that men have a weakness for the flesh of women." I blushed. She giggled, "Don't worry, when the time comes, I'm sure you will handle yourself well." She stood up, pulling me to my feet, and said "Now come on. My daughter forgot to take some towels along, so we had best get to the pool before she finally decides to get out to lay in the sun."

She opened the door, and I followed her out into the hall. She went into her room and quickly returned with three towels, and we went on to the pool. We found Terrie in the pool, talking to another girl, and I joined her. She hugged me, and we kissed, and she went on talking to her friend. I more or less stood back, and listened for a while, before I got bored and started letting my eyes wander, taking in the surroundings. The pool is maybe twenty feet wide and about forty feet long. There is just enough concrete around three sides for lounge chairs, and at the north end sits the restaraunt. To the east sits the lake, which you can see from standing in the pool. There weren't too many people around at the time, so I wasn't really looking at the people. Gladys was talking to another couple, and there were six other couples, all older than Gladys. There were only four other people in the pool, two of them being brothers that were only about eight or nine.

Finally, at about seven, Gladys asked loudly, "Terrie, you and Jeff wanting to eat?"

I smiled, as Terrie replied, "Yeah mom." She took my hand and she said good-bye to her friend, her name being Amy, and we walked up the steps at the north end and walked to where Gladys sat, and we dried our bodies off. Dinner was inside the restaurant, and I ate plenty. Not much was said, save for Terrie telling her mom about her talk with Amy. I for the most part, stayed silent.

Once we were done eating, Gladys smiled, and said "Terrie, I'm sure you've something you want to get started on."

I grinned, and Terrie giggled, stood and grabbed my hand. We casually left the restaurant and didn't say a word as we walked back to our room. We were on the bed in a flash, with her on top of me, her snatch above my lips as I used my hands on her hips to pull her snatch to my face. She engulfed my rock hard cock, and we both moaned as we started to orally please each other. We both came together, as her body shuddered while my cock spewed a healthy load into her hot mouth. She collapsed on top of me, and we rested, enjoying a good post-cum glow.

Terrie slowly rolled off of me, and pulled on my hand. I sat up, and she spread her legs apart, inviting me between them. I moved over her, and took my member in my right hand, tugging the head of my cock against her slit. She was looking down at her groin, watching intently as I slowly pushed the head of my cock inside her cunt. She groaned as her tight cunt expanded to take me. She felt so wet, hot and tight, I thought I was going to cum for a second time in such a short time span. I sucked in a deep breath, trying to keep my throbbing pecker from shooting off so soon, and I lifted my head and lunged forward, sinking all the way in, hearing Terrie's sharp gasping groan at loosing her virginity. I looked down at her face, and she was looking back up at me, mouth hanging open wide, a slight look of discomfort on her face. I lowered myself down on top of her, and I put my open mouth over hers, and we kissed, before I lifted my face from hers, and asked "You okay?"

She nodded, "Yeah, it felt, well, different at first. But now I feel fine." A big smile came to her face, and she moved her hips, adding with a laugh "Real fine!"

I lowered my body down on top of hers, and we started to kiss, while our hips started to move. I felt incredible, my cock sheathed into her tight, hot twat, as we enjoyed our first time being entwined as one. And as we moved our hips, the pace eventually got to quicken, and after a good twenty minutes, Our pelvis's were slamming into each other at a tremendously fast rate. I had pushed my body up with the palm of my hands, looking down at her wonderful body. Her boob's were shaking, and I could see her skin ripple up her body from the force of the pounding of our sexual fun. She had her neck arched, mouth wide open and grunting. Then, her whole body stiffened, but I keep lunging into her, as she then let out a sharp, erotic cry, her tight pussy yanking hard on my cock, making me groan out "Oh man, damn!", as I felt my pecker erupt deep inside her body, sending hot ropes of cum into her convulsing womb.

I collapsed on top of her, and our mouths locked together as I felt my cock do some smaller spurts, her little cunt twitching, milking the last few droplets from my tight balls. We snuggled together, as I rolled off of her and onto my side, she whimpering at first at the sudden emptiness of her fuck hole. Our hands roamed slowly over each other, and I was kneading her lovely, tiny breasts, before I leaned over and suckled on a stiff nipple.

Our breathing was still rather labored, as she pushed me onto my back, and climbed on top of me. She guided my still rock hard cock into her wee bit of paradise, and she let out a satisfied sigh as she bottomed out on my shaft. I reached up and caressed her breasts softly as she placed her hands over mine, making me grip them tightly as she rocked her hips back and forth, grinding her clit into my flesh. I watched her face, studying it as the smile went to a look of wanting, her cunt tightening up on my cock, and her breathing become grunts for air. Her skin, from the top of her breasts and on up covering her neck, shoulders, and face, had turned a bright red, and I could see that her pussy lips were the exact shade as well. Then, her mouth opened up, her body went stiff, and a scream came from her mouth that was deafening, as her pussy felt as if it was going to rip my cock off. Her whole body started to convulse, as I pulled on her hard nipples, while my cock erupted, making me groan as I sprayed her womb once more.

My lover collapsed on top of me, mumbling something about how wonderful she felt, as I patted her backside. I could hear giggling and soft talking outside, causing me to suddenly remember the open windows, but by then it was too late. It didn't matter, for we drifted off to sleep, our first total love making, and we only lasted maybe an hour. But what an hour it was. But three more times during the night, I would wake with her sucking on my meat, wanting another go, which I would happily oblige her, softly pumping her twat with my prick until I would fill her once again, and get her off a few times as well.

We were awakened late in the morning by Mother Gladys, as she opened the door, saying "Good morning, kids." I opened my eyes and saw her carrying in a tray, and there was food. I smiled, as I sat up and moved so my back was up against the headboard, as she said "Well, you two must be starving."

Terrie giggled, saying as she sat up next to me, "Yeah, I know I am." as she took the tray from her mother, adding "We worked up a heck of a hunger mom."

I took a plate off the tray, and started eating. Scrambled eggs and sausage, plus a carton of milk. Gladys went to the window, opening it up more, and said as she turned towards us, "Whew, you two sure did make a mess out of the room. Smells like a whore house.". I chuckled, as she went and reached over the bed and pulled the cord for the ceiling fan, as she added, "You two, when you finish eating, go shower up down the hall and then join me at the pool, okay?"

Terry and I both smiled, as we said in unison, "Yes mom." We finished breakfast, and playfully toughed each other the whole time, before heading off to the bathroom, where we helped get each other clean. Then, back to the bedroom, where we grabbed towels and headed to the pool. Well, the sex must have worn me out, for I was in the shade and out like a light maybe ten minutes after we arrived. I do remember Gladys chuckling, telling one of her friends that it looked like I was a worn little puppy. And Terrie was just as lively, as the two of us slept the day away, only to be woken for lunch. Then when it was time for dinner, we ate in the restaurant, and Terrie and I met up with some of the others our age, where the girls kidded Terrie about last night. It seemed her vocal expressions were the talk of the camp, and my lover was a bit embarrassed.

Then, once back in our room, it was another night of sex. Slower paced, and longer lasting, but just as satisfying. We made love only four times during the night, but each time I was slowly pumping her for about an hour each time, getting her to the edge and over a lot. In the morning, breakfast in bed, and Gladys joined us. She sat down on the bed next to her daughter, and as we ate, she asked, "Well Jeff, how was your first weekend of sex?"

I chuckled, "Just fine, Mother Gladys."

She grinned, and asked Terrie, "Did you tell him?"

Terrie turned red, and shook her head, saying "No, not yet."

"Don�t you think you better?", her mom asked of her.

Terrie sighed, and turned to me, saying "This weekend, I'm at my most fertile."

I went "Oh." Then it hit me, as I blurted out "You mean, I may have gotten you pregnant?" My life was flashing before my eyes, as she had a scared look on her face. I saw that, and quickly leaned to her and planted a kiss on her cheek, and asked "But why didn't you say something before hand."

Her mom chuckled, saying "We didn't want to out any pressure on you, Jeff."

"Not that I mind, but why would you want me to get Terrie pregnant?" I asked, a bit bewildered by what has suddenly become knowledge to me.

Gladys smiled, "You want to move in with her?" I nodded my head yes, as I realized the answer, "How else you think your parents will allow it unless she's with child?"

I smiled, seeing her point. And that's how our life together began. We were successful that weekend, and just before school started, after a very interesting disclosure of my impending fatherhood to my parents, we married in a quick ceremony, and I moved in with the Jones family. And, after all these years, we're still together, with a heck of a lot of adventures. Adventures that would entail writting a few more stories.

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