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I PROMISED MOM.
A short story by davidb234

I was sat on my old leather sofa with the TV on, 
but not actually watching or listening to whatever 
program was showing. I guess I'd been doing this 
for most of the past year and a half since my wife 
Jenny had died of cancer. Melissa, my daughter, and 
I had nursed my wife for almost two years before I 
finally agreed that she would be better looked 
after by specialised staff in a nursing home. Even 
then it was still a strain as I made a point of 
visiting every day she was there, and taking Mel 
with me at least twice a week. On what had been her 
final day of living I made sure that Mel was 
staying with her aunt and wasn't put through the 
trauma of watching her mother slip away. At least 
it was peaceful and she felt no pain, the massive 
doses of drugs saw to that. It was however the 
worst day of my life, and a day that I still 
relived over and over again. I had stopped crying 
whenever I thought about Jenny, only looking sad 
when I knew Mel wasn't looking, which is one reason 
for me having the TV on, hopefully telling her that 
I had my mind on other things.
The trouble is you can't kid kids, not all the 
time. By now Mel wasn't actually a kid, she was 
almost eighteen and had just graduated with grades 
suitable for her to attend college and get her MBA 
so she could come into the family Trucking 
business. I approved wholeheartedly, having no son 
to take over I always hoped Mel would be so 
inclined, especially as I used to take her on short 
trips when I was actually doing my own driving. Now 
I didn't need to, and only went out when I felt the 
need for a change of scenery. Mel had made a great 
hit with all the other drivers, and actually 
learned to drive a large panel truck without me 
knowing about it. No surprise then that she asked 
one day if she could go out with me on one of my 
joyrides, and actually drive most of the way. 
Anyway, it was the end of July, Mel was finished 
school until she started at the local college in 
September, most of the drivers were having their 
summer vacations as business was slack at this 
season, I was sitting at home and feeling very low 
as I sat with a drink in my hand thinking about 
going to bed, and wondering what we would have been 
doing had Jenny still been alive. That's when Mel 
came in, slamming the door behind her and stomping 
up the stairs as she made her way to bed. My 
reverie broken I tossed of the rest of my drink, 
switched off the TV and after locking up made my 
own way to bed. As I passed the bathroom I heard 
noises that told me Mel was in there, so I knocked 
and called out "Goodnight baby", "'Night Daddy" she 
called, sounding subdued, but I put it down to the 
thickness of the door, and went to bed. I was 
sitting up in bed with the light off, as I usually 
did for a couple of hours each night, when there 
was a gentle knocking at the door and Mel poked her 
head round the edge and said "Can I come and talk 
to you for a minute please Daddy?" "Of course you 
can darling" I replied and leaned over to switch on 
my nightlight. "No leave the light please Daddy, I 
can see OK" and she came over and slid under the 
comforter, snuggling up close to me as I put an arm 
round her shoulders. "Right baby, what can Daddy do 
for you, not got boy problems have you?" I felt her 
nod her head as she said softly "Yes Daddy, that's 
just it, I have" and she started to cry softly into 
my chest as she turned her head towards me. With 
some difficulty I slipped down, pulling Mel down 
with me, until we were laying rather than sitting 
and I had my arms round my sobbing daughter, 
rocking her gently until she finally quietened down 
and stopped crying. 
Bit by bit I got the picture, she had gone out, 
with her current boyfriend, to a movie, and then 
for a burger and coke, after that Jake, her 
boyfriend, took her out to a local parking spot and 
started to get more amorous that Mel was ready for. 
That when the trouble started, Jake came on a bit 
heavy, Mel repulsed him vigorously, and it ended up 
with blows being exchanged. That's when I switched 
on the light, and started to swear. Mel was covered 
with bruises all down her arms where she had been 
held tightly by strong hands, and she had a dark 
red patch on her cheek where she had been caught by 
a hand or fist. I was about to get out of bed and 
go and find Jake, when Mel caught hold of my wrists 
and pulled me down beside her once more, "No Daddy, 
please leave it until the morning. I told Jake to 
be prepared for you to come after him with a big 
club when you found out what he'd done, he was so 
scared he dropped me off at the corner and raced 
away without another word. You'll punish him more 
if you leave it lie for a while and let him worry, 
now please put the light off and listen to what I 
have to say, please Daddy." I did as she asked, 
mind you I'd been doing that for years and she knew 
it. She also knew she could wrap me round her 
little finger just by holding my hand and looking 
up into my eyes as she said 'please' in her own 
special way. As I lay down I said softly "I suppose 
you're going to tell me why it was mostly your 
fault and I shouldn't actually blame Jake at all", 
Mel lay her head on my bare chest and I felt her 
nod, "Well, actually you're right Daddy, it was 
partly my fault, you see I knew he wanted to get 
into my pants, he'd been hinting at it all night 
and I hadn't said NO, that's why he thought it was 
OK to try when we parked up. The trouble was Daddy, 
I was scared. Besides, I didn't want my first time 
to be in the back of some jocks car, I wanted to be 
warm and comfortable in bed, and with someone I 
felt safe with, someone that I knew wouldn't hurt 
me, someone I knew actually loved me and didn't 
just lust after my body." For a moment I was 
stunned, Mel was actually telling me she was still 
a virgin, that in itself was unusual in this day 
and age, that she was telling me how she wanted to 
lose her virginity was also astonishing, until I 
realised I had been mother and father to her for 
some years, that's when I went all paternal on her. 
I kissed her tenderly on her forehead and said 
softly Well darling, I'm glad you've been so 
discriminating for so long, I'm sure most of your 
friends have all had a lot of sexual experience, 
and I'm sure it's been very difficult for you to 
resist all the peer pressure you must have had." I 
paused for a moment as she snuggled closer to me, 
holding me a little tighter with her arm that she 
had put round me when she had calmed me down. "The 
thing is darling, if you want to bring some boy 
home and have a little privacy some time, all you 
have to do is tell me and I'd willingly go out to a 
movie or something. Just be careful who it is you 
bring home, remember it will be a very special time 
for you, and he'll have to be a very special person 
to make it good for you". That's when I opened my 
mouth and put both feet in it. "Is there anything 
you want to ask me darling, you know about the 
actual mechanics of sex, things you might have 
wanted to ask your mother?" 
That's when Mel sat up and I realised she was 
naked. All the wriggling about she had been doing 
as she told me her troubles had been her shedding 
her nightie and panties she normally slept in. It 
was also the first time I'd got an erection since 
Jenny had died, and the first time I'd got an 
erection whilst looking at my daughter, it was also 
the time she showed me just how smart she and Jenny 
had been. "Daddy" said Mel in a soft sexy voice, 
"Just what do you think Mom and I talked about all 
those hours we spent together when we visited her 
in the nursing home. She was telling me all about 
the wonderful sex life you two had enjoyed. How she 
was a virgin when she met you, and stayed that way 
until you plucked up the courage to proposition her 
the night her folks got stuck in a snow drift and 
you couldn't get home after visiting her." Pausing 
to wipe away a tear from her eye Mel smiled down at 
me, and smiled just like Jenny used to when we made 
love. "That's when I promised to make sure you 
ended up with someone that was going to be good for 
you, and would look after you as well as she did. 
That's why I've waited all this time for you to be 
in a situation where you would do for me what you 
did for Mom." Mel then bent down and placed her 
lips on mine in as sensuous and passionate a kiss 
as Jenny had ever given me, "What I'm saying Daddy, 
is that I'm waiting for you to come and make love 
to me, to be my first lover, and hopefully be my 
last one too. I want to take over where Mom left 
off, I want to be you one true love, even if I 
can't have your babies, I do want to have all your 
love, until you get fed up with me and find someone 
else. Then I'll go and find someone to give me 
children." By now she had stripped off my pyjama 
bottoms and was straddling my hips, holding her 
swollen and sopping wet pussy over the head of my 
hard throbbing erection as she waited for a sign 
from me to tell her it was OK. "Just be careful 
baby" I said softly, "I don't want to hurt you", 
and gave a gasp of pleasure as she touched the tip 
of my cock to her slippery vagina and lowered 
herself down on it in a single firm stroke. 
"Aggghhhh..." she cried as she felt, and I also felt, 
my penis destroy her virgin membrane, "God Daddy, 
that smarts" she gasped as she sat on my pelvis. 
"Well darling, I did try to tell you to be careful. 
The thing is baby, it had to be done some time, and 
it will soon feel better if you relax. Come and lay 
down on my chest for a minute or two and tell me 
what your mother said you should do for me." 
Mel lay forward, pressing her firm hard nippled 
breasts on to my chest and began to tell me all 
Jenny had spoken to her about. Things like how I 
liked to have her sit on my lap and just gently 
caress her naked body under a bathrobe, how she 
used to go to sleep with her naked breast against 
my chest and her pussy pressed up tight to my 
thigh. The way we would spend Lisa's day teasing 
each other with touches and caresses, but waiting 
until we were in bed before we actually made any 
overt move towards sexual contact. "What I really 
want to try Daddy, is the way you used to make Mom 
have multiple orgasm with you using your tongue on 
her pussy. That sounds really great." By now I was 
starting to relax a little, as was my cock and Mel 
knew it. "Damn" she said, blushing at having me 
hear her swear, "I'm sorry Daddy, but all this 
talking has made you go soft on me, what can I do 
about this?" "What!" I cried "Something your mother 
didn't teach you, goodness me I guess I'd better do 
something about that then, hadn't I?" and with a 
gently pressure I pushed Mel up until she was once 
more sitting on my pelvis, and looked at her from 
her bright green eyes, down her sweet face to her 
softly sloping shoulders and on to her firm young 
hard nipple tipped breasts. As I looked adoringly 
at her titties I put out my hand and placed my 
fingertips all round the base of each, cupping the 
both in my hands, as soon as I felt the nipples 
touch the palm of my hand Mel gave a cry of "WOW 
Daddy, that sure worked", and giggled as she began 
to gently bounce up and down on my now tumescent 
manhood. As she lost herself to the pleasure of sex 
Mel threw her head and body back, holding on to me 
by the forearms, as I did the same for her as she 
pulled her breasts from my palpating grip. At the 
top and the bottom of each stroke she gave a 
wriggle of her hips, and occasionally gave a short 
sharp cry of ecstasy as the head of my cock scraped 
across her G spot. Time and time again she 
struggled to repeat this movement, but only 
succeeded accidentally and not very often. 
Whatever, it did help to bring her closer and 
closer to her climax, and as she gave a final loud 
gasp of pleasure and rammed herself down hard on to 
my pelvic mound I pressed a thumb on to her clit 
and gently rubbed it round and round making her 
orgasm go on and on and she sat and cried out over 
and over again "YES... YES... YES... YEEESSS...". 
Eventually Mel had to stop, she was completely 
spent, as well as being exhausted, and as soon as 
she went quiet she collapsed on to my chest and I 
gently rolled her off my hips to lay gasping beside 
me, her firm young body twitching and shuddering as 
I took her in my arms and pulled her close to me to 
wait until she had calmed down once more and would 
be able to go to sleep at last. When I knew Mel was 
asleep I gently removed myself from her arms and 
went quietly to the bathroom where I got a warm 
washcloth and towel and, after cleaning myself up, 
returned to the bedroom and tenderly washed her 
loins clean of her blood stained orgasmic juices. I 
was soon back in bed with my daughter, and as I lay 
there I tried to examine my thoughts, what I'd just 
done was without doubt incestual, and also against 
civil as well as church law. It was also looked on 
as about the most immoral act a man could 
perpetrate. The only thing that made me push all 
this to the back of my mind was the fact that Mel 
was of legal age, knew what she wanted to do, and 
had actually instigated the whole thing. There was 
also the fact that she was doing it at the request 
of her dead mother. On top of all this was the 
simple, undeniable fact that it was the most 
wonderful act of lovemaking I had ever experienced. 
It was awesome to the extreme, nothing Jenny and I 
had ever experienced had ever come close to how I 
felt, and I hadn't even had an orgasm, all I had 
done was lay there as my daughter took her own 
virginity, then used me to bring herself to her 
first penetration orgasm, and what an orgasm it had 
seemed to be. Certainly Jenny had never collapsed 
so spent after making love, and I'd tried time and 
time again to make it so good she would faint, 
without any luck. I guess I could actually get to 
enjoy sleeping with Mel, assuming that's what she 
wanted to do, I guess I'd better ask her when she 
wakes up, problem is what if she say no, and 
decides to use her new found sexuality to go and 
get a couple of guys at college in tow, I guess I'd 
better not push things too quickly, better to just 
wait until she makes the next move and follow her 
lead...... "Daddy, are you listening to me?" I heard 
Mel say as she was shaking my arm vigorously, I 
turned to look down at her as she lay beside me. 
"I'm sorry darling, did you say something, I was 
miles away, thinking about things..." "YES Daddy, I 
did say something, I asked you why you didn't cum 
in me like I wanted?" I turned to her and lay 
beside her once more, touching her cheek tenderly 
with my fingertips as I said softly "I know 
darling, I didn't want to take the chance of 
getting you pregnant, it can happen you know, even 
if it's a girls first time." Giving me a wicked 
smile she replied "Yes Daddy darling, but not when 
a girls been on the pill for over a year. I told 
you Mom had been instructing me for a long time, 
she signed the forms authorising our doctor to 
prescribe then for me, over two years ago. You see 
Daddy, Mom was really worried you might try and 
find some excuse NOT to do this for us. I guess she 
forgot all about your control, and strength of 
will." Mel then scrabbled about until she was 
kneeling beside me, placed her hands on my 
shoulders and said firmly "Right Daddy, how do you 
want to do this, me on top, you on top, or moms  
favourite position, doggy style. Whichever it is I 
want you to come and fill my body with your 
wonderful hot thick creamy cum, and I want you to 
do it now please Daddy, it's the one thing I've 
been looking forward to ever since Mom told me how 
she felt when you came in her." 
Giving me no chance to argue Mel turned her back to 
me, opened her knees wide, leaned forward on her 
forearms and placed her head between her hands. 
This placed her in a position where she was 
displaying her virgin dark pink puckered rosehole, 
and below it her now swollen pussy lips, glistening 
with her juices that were lubricating her up in 
anticipation of having my hard throbbing penis 
enter her young body and fill it with my sperm 
laden semen. No matter what my state of mind I 
couldn't just lay there and disappoint my daughter, 
so I got up on to my knees, shuffled up behind her 
and touched the head of my penis to her moist lips. 
"Ready for this baby?" I asked gently, "Oh, yes 
Daddy darling, I'm so ready for it, you just 
wouldn't believe. Please Daddy, don't try to make 
me cum, I just want to feel you having an orgasm 
inside me, please promise me that darling?" I 
leaned forward and placed a tender loving kiss half 
way down her spine, "All right darling, I promise, 
this one is for me, but it's the last time I take 
your orders, understand?" Giving a little sex shake 
of her bottom she said softly "Yes Daddy, I 
understand...... Ahhhh... Ohhh... that feels sooooo great 
Daddy" as I slowly pressed my penis into her tight 
moist vaginal passage. I was so aroused I was 
tempted to bang away hard at her body, but decided 
instead to make things last a little longer by 
making long slow strokes in and out of her grasping 
pussy lips and cuntal passage, as Mel tested out 
her bodies capacity to arouse and excite. She did 
quite well because it only took me twenty odd 
strokes before I rammed my hard throbbing cock deep 
into her, clasped my hands on her hips and cried 
"I'MMMM CUUUMMMIIINNNGGG NOOOWWW......" and began to 
shoot a massive stream of hot sperm laden semen 
deep into Mel's  warm receptive young body. "Ohhh... 
Daddy, that's so good" cried Mel as my hips jerked 
over and over again and I shot another huge stream 
of cum into her. By now Mel's body was full, and 
all I was doing was shooting sperm into her vagina 
and having it blow back and run out between my 
cockshaft and her pussy lips and run down her legs 
and through the fingers of the hand she had placed 
at the junction of our bodies as she tried to feel 
what it was like when a cock was inside her cunt. 
Eventually even I, with all those months of pent up 
ardour had to stop shooting cum into Mel's body. I  
was completely drained as I collapsed back to sit 
on my heels and drop my head and shoulders with 
exhaustion. This of course meant I pulled my 
rapidly shrinking penis from Mel's cum soaked 
pussy, and also meant that it was followed by a 
torrent of my cum as it flooded out of her and 
dripped on to the bedclothes beneath her open legs. 
"Oh WOW, that's simply awesome Daddy, I never knew 
a man could have so much cum in him as you just 
did. Was that really good for you Daddy darling?" 
"Yes darling" I gasped "It was the greatest orgasm 
I ever had, bar none" and I lifted my sweat 
streaked face and smiled at Mel as she rolled on to 
her back and began rubbing what she could get of my 
cum, into her pussy lips and all over her abdomen, 
as if it was skin lotion. As I smiled at her doing 
this she grinned up at me and said "Well Daddy, Mom  
told me it was especially good for getting and 
keeping a good complexion. I'm going to try it on 
my face next time." When I was recovered enough I 
climbed off the bed, held out my hand to Mel and 
said "Come on baby, we both need a shower, and then 
we've got to change the bed before we can get to 
sleep." Our first shower together was blissful, it 
reminded me of those I took with Jenny, almost 
every night, until she was taken I'll. Now it 
looked as if it was going to start happening again, 
seeing as Mel seemed to enjoy it so much. When at 
last we were laying side by side in a clean bed, 
Mel kissed me tenderly on the lips and said "Daddy, 
was it all right, the way I made love to you, I 
mean?" I couldn't answer her for some time, I was 
too busy kissing her gently and lovingly. 
Eventually I was able to reply, "Yes darling, you 
were simply the very best any man could want in a 
loving partner, and I love you so very much my 
darling, almost as much as I loved your darling 
mother." Melissa looked at me with a tear in her 
eye, "I'm so glad Daddy, because you see I promised 
Mom I'd try to be as good for you as she had been".

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