Maragana Girl
Copyright 2004 by EC
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(warnings: judicial corporal punishment, forced public nudity, sex between adults, 
references to drug use, references to violence)

Chapter 8 – Eloisa

The weather quickly changed a couple of days after Kim's birthday. Cold rain and 
sleet constantly bombarded the dreary streets of Danube City, with the promise 
that there would be no let-up until next spring. The pavement was covered with 
cold water and the last of the bicyclists were driven off the streets and into the 
city's trolleys. The entire fleet of trolleys and trolleybuses was working non-stop, 
but all public transportation was packed with commuters at all times.

In spite of the cold weather, Kim learned from Sergekt that she really did not need 
to wear her criminal's cape during the day. The criminal's cape was a truly 
humiliating piece of clothing, to be used only during the most inclement weather. 
Sergekt and most other criminals took pride in wearing it as little as possible. At 
the beginning Kim had thought about wearing her cape, but over time peer-
pressure forced the American to leave hers at home as well.

Kim's orange boots kept her feet warm, and she quickly learned how to keep the 
rest of her body warm enough to move about in the city. Of course, the packed 
trolleys were so hot that the criminals actually were more comfortable than the 
average citizens who stood sweating in their coats. As a courtesy, average citizens 
usually allowed criminals to get on the trolleys first to let them get out of the cold 
as quickly as possible.

As for outdoors, the survival tactic adopted by Kim and the other criminals was to 
duck into stores as much as possible, warm up, and then dash to the next store, 
warm up, and keep moving. In Kim's case there really was no problem, since the 
music store was right next to a trolley stop. The store employees waited at the 
front door for the trolley to come by, then quickly dashed across the sidewalk to 
get in once it had stopped. The Socrates Club presented even less of a problem 
during the winter. The club had built an enclosed heated trolley stop right outside 
its main entrance to accommodate the patrons who did not want to wear their 
capes.

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Kim settled into a stable, peaceful relationship with Sergekt during November. 
They got to know each other better as Kim's ability to speak Danubian improved, 
they hung out at the Socrates Club, went to an occasional movie, ate at each 
other's houses, and just enjoyed being together. They made love every so often in 
one of the Socrates Club's "intimacy rooms", enough that Kim considered taking 
birth control pills to free Sergekt from the responsibility of always wearing a 
condom. Kim had established her routine with her boyfriend and felt very 
satisfied with that part of her life. Sergekt was the most serious relationship Kim 
ever had experienced, very different from the casual encounters and partying she 
had done the previous year.

During November another relationship opened up for Kim, her growing 
friendship with the singer Eloisa. Eloisa was by far the most unusual woman in 
the group. She was deeply philosophical and serious, but she could talk about 
anything and made a good conversation partner. There was something very sad 
and haunting about her, a pain in her soul that came out in both her conversation 
and in her music. 

Eloisa was dating one of the guys in the group, a very serious young man called 
Dima Chernákt. It was obvious they were very serious about each other and they 
planned to get married. Dima was with her constantly and she seemed to rely on 
him to give her protection. And yet, not once did Kim notice the couple ever 
touching each other. No hugs, no kissing, no physical contact whatsoever. The 
relationship was not platonic nor a simple friendship, but it was by no means a 
normal relationship either.

Kim asked Sergekt about Eloisa's strange behavior. He responded:

"Eloisa has been through a lot. She has suffered much more than anyone else I 
have ever known. That's why she sings the way she sings. She has been to the 
dark places of life, places I hope I never have to see."

"But what happened to her?"

"I can't tell you. If you get to know her better, maybe she might…but that's up to 
her. I can tell you that what happened to her is something that shouldn't ever 
happen to anyone…but it does, sometimes even here in this country."

Sergekt had given up very little information, but it was enough, together with 
Eloisa's obvious dislike of any physical contact, for Kim to figure out what 
happened. She guessed that Eloisa must have been raped. That was true, but when 
she later found out the full story Kim would much better understand, not only 
Eloisa, but also Dima, Sergekt, the group of classmates, and the social values of 
Upper Danubia.

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Kim's friendship with Eloisa began when one of the band's back-up singers 
completed her sentence at the end of October. The young woman was a fellow 
employee at the music store, and as a result the store shut down for a couple of 
hours to allow the employees to attend the de-collaring ceremony. The young 
woman left the courthouse wearing a traditional Danubian dress and a raincoat. 
She returned to work for a brief party, bade everyone a tearful goodbye, and 
disappeared from their lives.

Kim's co-worker had been accepted to study at Upper Danubia's most prestigious 
medical university, which was located at the other end of the country in the 
distant capitol of Rika Chorna Province. She needed to board a train immediately 
to attend an orientation and was out of Danube City by nightfall. The woman's 
departure left Eloisa with only three back-up singers, and for much of her music 
she needed four.

The next day Eloisa heard Kim humming a song that she had heard several times 
and liked. She listened attentively to Kim's voice, realizing its pitch was identical 
to the pitch of the voice of the friend who had just left. During lunch break Eloisa 
asked Kim to sing some notes...Excellent…Now deeper…From deep in your 
throat…Not bad…Try it again…Good…Now try this… By the end of lunch Kim 
had a new obligation in life, as a back-up singer for Eloisa.

It was obvious that Kim would not be able to sing songs with words because of 
her accent. However, Danubian music often relied on a group of women singing 
different notes, in the same way a band uses different instruments. Each female 
voice was part of the background music, unique and indispensable for the entire 
song to work. It was the pitch of Kim's voice that Eloisa needed, not her ability to 
sing actual words. It was as though Eloisa had lost a musical instrument and 
needed to replace it with another.

That night Kim found herself rehearsing with the other three back-up singers, 
closely following Eloisa's lead. The following Saturday night Kim was on stage at 
the Socrates club during the group's musical presentation. She now was more 
committed than ever to her new life in Danube City.

Kim spent increasing amounts of time with Eloisa when she was not at work or 
with Sergekt. As much as she participated in the Socrates Club, her group, and in 
her personal relationship with her boyfriend, the internal torments in Eloisa's soul 
set her apart from everyone else. She was part of the group, but at the same time 
different and somewhat apart. Kim was in a similar situation, being Asian, being 
an American, and being a convicted drug-user. She was part of the group, but at 
the same time she was "different". As a result Eloisa and Kim gravitated towards 
each other.

Eloisa seemed to understand Kim better than anyone else, including Sergekt. 
Sergekt understood Kim from a male perspective, but there were certain things 
about her he could not understand due to the barrier of sex. Eloisa did understand 
Kim and could even understand why Kim had done so many stupid things in her 
life prior to getting arrested. Even Kim couldn't understand everything about 
herself, but it seemed that Eloisa had her figured out.

At the beginning of December the morale of Sergekt and his friends began to 
decline. They were more moody, more quiet, and increasingly apprehensive. The 
reason was simple enough, on December 15 they faced returning to their old 
school to receive the next scheduled installment of their punishment. The school 
authorities wanted to switch the group at their old high school to set an example 
for the younger students who had not yet graduated. Since vacation started on the 
20th, the punishment needed to be moved up to the middle of the month, to make 
sure the younger students were on-hand to see what happens to criminals.

Kim sympathized, since the next installment of her own punishment would be 
January 2, six months to the date she had been punished in July, Kim was scared 
herself, and she was lucky. She only faced punishment every six months. Sergekt, 
Eloisa, and 26 others faced punishment every four months.

Just a couple of days before the 15th, Kim and Eloisa decided to have some 
Danubian fruit punch after a musical practice. They sat alone in the break-room of 
the store on a sofa, quietly sipping at their glasses. Eloisa sighed, thinking about 
the group's upcoming punishment.

"It never gets any easier," she noted sadly. "You think it will, that somehow you'll 
get used to it. But you never do. It hurts just as bad every time. And each time, 
before, I mean, you just get more and more scared, because you know, you know 
how bad they'll hurt you."

Kim nodded. Eloisa stared straight ahead. In a very distant voice she continued.

"You know, it's because of me the others have to do this. I'm the reason they're 
serving these sentences. It's because of me that 27 other lives got ruined. I should 
have just killed myself, and that would have saved them. Now I can't. Now I can't 
die. I owe it to the others to stay alive, even though that's not what I want."

Kim had no idea how to respond. She felt horrible about the consequences of her 
own decisions, but Kim had no desire to die. Quite the contrary, she realized how 
important it was to be alive. Kim treasured her life and the chance to remain on 
the planet. To hear Eloisa talk like this…

"You can't talk like that. Your life is a gift, and you can lose it real easily. I almost 
did. I mean…we all love you."

"I know. But to know what I did…and what happened…I mean it wasn't really 
my fault, but in a way it was…I mean…it wouldn't have happened if it hadn't 
been for me."

"What happened? You didn't do anything…"

"Kim, did Sergekt ever tell you why we all got these three-year sentences?"

"He tried to explain it to me when we first started going out, but I didn't 
understand Danubian enough to follow all of what he told me. I did get that it was 
all out of a sense of honor that you guys all stuck together and you all got 
punished. He made a big deal out of that, because he was real upset about what 
my friends did to me…you know, when they told the police they didn't know 
about the marijuana in my backpack. But anyhow, I didn't understand much…he 
said something about a riot at your school."

"Yes, there was riot. I guess you could call it that. It was because of me it 
happened."

"You? What did you do?"

Eloisa sat quietly for a few minutes. Finally she forced herself to speak.

"I didn't do anything except just be a stupid kid. I thought he loved me…that's 
what he always said…but he made me…I mean, for three years he made me…"

Eloisa struggled to catch her breath and push back the awful memories that 
suddenly had surfaced. Finally she was able to tell Kim her story.

It turned out when Eloisa was just 14, she was seduced by a male teacher at the 
school. The relationship quickly became very abusive, especially after the teacher 
took a series of pornographic photos and threatened to show them to Eloisa's 
parents if she ever said anything or tried to break off the relationship. What the 
teacher forced Eloisa to do apparently went way beyond ordinary sex, it left her 
feeling completely degraded and nauseated by the thought of any physical contact 
with anyone. On that point Eloisa did not elaborate and Kim really did not want to 
know the details. The abuse went on for three years and got worse over time.

Eloisa's life changed the summer before her final year in school. The teacher 
molesting her was on vacation in Germany, and she began seeing one of her 
classmates, Dima, the guy she was currently engaged to. Eloisa was completely 
traumatized by what was happening to her and felt too degraded to have any 
friends from the school. Dima spent time with her, and slowly got her to realize 
she did have value as a person. He fell in love with her, perhaps in part because 
she was so distant and he hoped to bring her back. 

The possibility that Eloisa could have a normal relationship with someone her 
own age gave her courage to start confronting her situation with the teacher. She 
quit seeing him after school. When he threatened her with the photos Eloisa 
responded. "Go ahead and show those photos. Then you get to explain why you 
have them."

Eloisa thought she had escaped her tormenter because she did not have any 
classes with him during her final year. However, he proctored a series of tests for 
the end of the autumn semester that Eloisa had to take. He saw the finals as a 
chance to get revenge against Eloisa for leaving him. He accused her of cheating 
and began a series of reports to get her expelled from the school and charged with 
insurrection. As a result of the accusations Eloisa was suspended from school, 
pending the resolution of the cheating charges.

The male students in Eloisa's class knew the accusations were false. They talked 
among themselves, trying to figure out how to save Eloisa from being expelled 
from school and possibly from facing a formal sentence. Finally youthful tempers 
started to flair, and 27 students, male and female, decided to directly confront the 
teacher and force him to recant his accusations. They filed into his classroom and 
surrounded him. When he tried to get away several students punched him in the 
stomach and pinned him against the wall. Dima struck him hard across the face, 
breaking his nose. Suddenly the teacher realized he was trapped in a room with 27 
angry students who were perfectly willing to kill him. 

The students extracted confession after confession from the teacher, including 
forcing him to reveal where he was keeping the photos he had taken of Eloisa. 
They were in a locked filing cabinet in the classroom with the tests, but the key 
was not in the school. That was not good enough for the students. The rage among 
the group was mounting. While Dima landed several more hard punches, several 
of his friends, including Sergekt, picked up the filing cabinet and heaved it 
through the window. Then several male students ran downstairs to retrieve the 
packages of photos. Sure enough, among the wreckage of the filing cabinet were 
several packets of very sick pictures. They ran back upstairs and waved a couple 
at the teacher.

"THIS IS WHAT YOU MADE HER DO?!…THIS IS WHAT YOU MADE HER 
DO?!"

The police arrived at that moment, screaming and pointing automatic weapons at 
the students. It was a terrible scene; a smashed window, desks and chairs kicked 
everywhere, 27 irate teenagers, and one bloodied teacher. The next few seconds 
were horrible chaos, as the police shot into the ceiling to get the teenagers to lie 
down. The teacher, hugely relieved at being rescued, headed towards the door, but 
the head police officer pointed his weapon at the supposed victim and snarled, 
"You're not going anywhere! Not 'till we get this straightened out!"

There was a lot to straighten out. The police were smart enough to understand that 
no group of students could have behaved in such a manner without being severely 
provoked. The answer was clear enough as soon as the police officers started 
picking up Eloisa's pictures, which had been strewn all over the room. The teacher 
ended up on the floor in handcuffs along with the 27 students. Vans arrived and 
everyone was taken to the Central Police Station.

Because Eloisa had been suspended from school pending resolution of the 
cheating charges, she did not learn about the riot until that evening. She took a 
trolley to the police station, identified herself, and quickly was dragged into the 
case. It was obvious she was the girl in the photos. She had to sign several 
statements discussing what had happened with her teacher, which were introduced 
later that night at his trial and helped condemn him.

What happened next was a very Danubian resolution to the case. Partly because 
what was in the pictures was so offensive, the teacher faced the death penalty for 
child molestation. His trial took place at midnight, as was the tradition for all 
death penalty cases. The teacher was dressed in a black robe and ordered to stand 
during his trial, even as he nursed his broken nose and bruised stomach. There 
was not much argument over guilt or innocence, the pictures and Eloisa's 
statements assured the verdict. The police also had searched the teacher's home 
and found yet more photos of Eloisa and three other high school girls.

The execution took place at sunrise. Still dressed in his black robe, the teacher 
was taken back to the central police station and ordered to stand at the end of the 
courtyard in front of a thick wooden wall. He stood with his hands untied, since 
any Danubian who faces death by execution is expected to greet it with dignity, 
no matter how heinous his crime might have been. The 27 students, still dressed 
in their school uniforms, were brought out in handcuffs to witness the execution. 
Very quickly five police officers pointed their rifles at the teacher, there was a 
whistle, and a second later he was reduced to a crumpled corpse.

The students then were led to the cement circle in the courtyard and one by one 
ordered to strip. They too, faced trial and punishment. However, they faced 
corporal, not capital, charges. 

Their cases were assigned to Spokesman Alexi Havlakt, who was the oldest 
member of Danube City's criminal defense team and on the verge of retiring. Now 
Spokesman Havlakt suddenly had 27 new cases thrust upon him and his 
retirement postponed indefinitely. Still, the path of his life was to help persons 
facing the Danubian court system and the fate of 27 high school students weighed 
on him more that his foregone years of rest. The old Spokesman prepared to 
mount as best a defense as he could, given the group's bleak circumstances.

The students faced multiple violations, including assault, attempted murder, 
disrespect for authority, vandalism, and insurrection. The police brought each 
frightened student in for questioning individually, but in the holding cell they all 
had previously agreed that whatever charges they faced they would face together. 
27 seven times the police asked the same questions and got the same responses:

"…Who punched your teacher?"

"All of us, sir. We all punched the teacher."

"Who threw the filing cabinet out the window?"

"All of us sir. We all are responsible…"

The police did not push the issue once they figured out all the students would give 
them the same responses. In the US the police would have tried to get some of the 
students to testify against the others. In Upper Danubia the police understood that 
attempting to get some of the students to turn on the others would have violated 
the society's social norms, something no one in the police department wanted to 
do. The questioning became a mere formality. The group would have to be judged 
by the facts, not by what any of the students had to say.

While the 27 students were being questioned, Eloisa demanded that she be 
arrested and charged with her classmates. She was innocent of any wrong-doing, 
but the riot had taken place because of her. Eloisa's friends had sacrificed their 
own lives for her, and her Danubian perception of honor demanded that whatever 
consequences they suffered she would have to suffer as well. 

Eloisa explained to Kim that under such circumstances the police chief had no 
choice but to arrest her. Eloisa would have lost honor had she not stood with her 
friends, especially in this situation where they had given up their freedom because 
of her. Danubian protocol demanded that, whether they had been right or wrong, 
it was her social duty to join them. Eloisa quietly undressed in front of the chief of 
police and was led in handcuffs to her classmates.

The students had confessed as a group, and they were tried as a group. Now 28 
with the addition of Eloisa, they knelt naked in the courtroom as charges were 
read against them. The case presented a very difficult dilemma for the trial judge. 
Their Spokesman pointed out that the students had done nothing more than defend 
a classmate's honor. However, as pointed out by the prosecutor, in doing so they 
had broken several laws and disrupted the peace of the community. As unfair as it 
was, they had to be punished. In the end they were convicted of vandalism and 
insurrection, the charges of attempted murder, assault, and disrespect for authority 
being dropped. They received a standard sentence of three years, with a corporal 
punishment every four months. They had to kneel in line as they were fitted with 
collars.

Most of the students in the group were still underage, so the court ordered they 
would be punished the following day at their school instead of in the courtroom. 
The police allowed them to get cleaned up and have dinner at the police cafeteria, 
and then they were locked overnight in a large room with mattresses. Early the 
following morning they were handcuffed and loaded into police vans to be 
transported back to their school to be punished. Following the punishment they 
would be released back into the custody of their parents.

Eloisa recalled with horror that second day, when she and the others were ordered 
to kneel in the cold school courtyard in front of 400 classmates. One-by-one they 
had to stand up and present themselves at the switching table. Each of them 
received 25 strokes, standard for someone under-age. As each student turned 18, 
later switchings would become the standard adult punishment of 50 strokes.

At the end of the day the school director gave a short speech, with the 28 students 
kneeling behind him. He announced that several serious crimes had been 
committed and all of them resolved. No one in the school, neither teacher nor 
student, would be permitted, under any circumstances, to ever mention the tragic 
events that led to this group punishment. The following day all 28 students would 
return to their classes and the matter would be closed.

Eloisa's parents were devastated. Over a four-year period they had known 
absolutely nothing about what had happened to their daughter. Eloisa had suffered 
in silence, her parents blissfully unaware of what was happening to her. Suddenly 
their bright daughter had ended up with a three-year sentence in the midst of a 
massive scandal. However, her father tried to make the best out of the bad 
situation. That afternoon he sought out Dima. Choking back the tears he had cried 
over what had happened to Eloisa without his knowledge, he addressed Dima:

"I would be very honored if you come to our house and sit at my table on 
Saturday. And you, and any of your friends, are welcome, very welcome, to sit at 
my table whenever you want."

Eloisa was allowed to re-take her semester finals and did quite well. A riot, an 
execution, and 28 three-year sentences were all it took to get Eloisa re-instated in 
her school as a student in good standing. The students considered that a victory.

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The riot changed Eloisa's outlook on life. She had always sought to avoid any 
attention and live quietly. She never trusted anyone except her boyfriend. And 
yet, when the moment came for her to be unjustly expelled from school, 26 other 
students had joined Dima to stand up for her. She was indebted to all of them. She 
had to come out of her world and join the others who had sacrificed for her. She 
always went with the group to the Socrates Club. Within two months, by pure 
chance, Eloisa discovered she had a natural talent for singing. Shortly thereafter 
she discovered that she had a real talent for organizing other singers and 
choreographing groups of other voices. She began singing on a regular basis. Just 
six months after her initial sentence, Eloisa was the lead singer for Sergekt's 
group and the most popular singer at the Socrates Club.

Eloisa's only release in life was singing. Standing on stage allowed her to release 
the sadness in her soul, a sadness well-suited to a society that valued music with 
morose philosophical overtones. She was a true Danubian singer, the living 
incarnation of the expression "to sing like a criminal".

There was another tragedy in Eloisa's life, a holdover from the abuse that she had 
suffered from her teacher. Eloisa loved her boyfriend in a manner that very few 
women could love a man. She loved him with all her spirit, all her soul. And yet 
the one thing she most wanted to do, to have him touch her and hold her, she 
couldn't. Eloisa was so nauseated by what had happened to her that she was 
repulsed by any physical contact with other people. No matter how much Eloisa 
loved her boyfriend, and no matter how much he loved her, he couldn't touch her.

"We keep hoping that, maybe someday it'll be different, that someday Dima can 
touch me. But Kim, I can't see how it ever will be any different. I'm broken, and I 
can't be repaired."

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Two days later, 28 young criminals reported to the small police station close to 
their old school. Spokesman Havlakt accompanied them to assure that they would 
not be injured and that any sexual fondling from the punishing officers was kept 
to a minimum. Fortunately for Eloisa, he had obtained a psychiatric release 
mandating that she could not be touched at all except for the switch. He vaguely 
hoped the officer punishing Eloisa would violate that psychiatric release, because 
if he did, her switching could be stopped immediately.

In spite of the unfairness of what had happened, there was very little pity for the 
group from the school officials and police officers assigned to punish them. The 
ex-students were forced to kneel while their collars were chained together. The 
police then handcuffed them and shackled their feet. The officer in charge walked 
down the line, kicking the kneeling criminals and striking them on the shoulders 
with his switch.

"Alright you little dishonored bastards...get your filthy bodies moving!"

The line of naked criminals struggled to stand up and slowly shuffled towards 
their old school. It was bitterly cold and most of them were shivering. They 
walked about two blocks and filed into the school's main doorway. From there 
they would go to the gymnasium (a concession to their Spokesman who had not 
wanted them to be forced to stay outside in the cold school courtyard), and one by 
one, each would receive 50 strokes of the switch. The terrible detail was the fact 
that Eloisa and Dima would be forced to witness each other's switchings. For 
Eloisa and her boyfriend to see each other suffer was a punishment far worse than 
being punished themselves.

Vladim Dukov and Kimberly Lee, for once dressed in her criminal's cape, quietly 
stood on the sidewalk across from the police station, sadly watching the group 
shuffle towards the school. Kim spotted Sergekt, who was fifth in line. She did 
not try to draw his attention.

"Spokesman Dukov, this is so wrong. At least I did something to get convicted. I 
mean…Eloisa…"

"No, it is not fair, but it is the way our justice system works. Laws were broken. 
Violators are punished. It has been this way for 1,000 years. In a situation like this 
fairness is of only minor importance."