Note: This story was dynamically reformatted for online reading convenience. Feedback. What a Lovely Thing! I thought I'd post some comments that you readers had sent me. Getting feedback from you all has inspired me, and the reason that it has taken so long to post another story, is that I have several on the go, and also, as I'm working, I find my time in front of the keyboard at a premium. I hate to leave my computer, especially when I have a flash of brilliance, and I have ideas coming thick and fast. I want to thank you all, those who have read my stories, and I am grateful for the feedback. ******************* Here's what some of you have said; "hi there, i have just started reading your story, iloveyoudebbie,and i have to say i think i,m going to really enjoy it" - A.B *** Congratulations on "Debbie". Enjoyed the story and hope their are additional chapters. Good plot and character development. Bonaire! - Fred. *** That was one HOT story! - BigJim8, 'Photographic Memories.' *** Don't know what to call you, but guess it really doesn't matter. I've read a lot of stories from ASSTR.ORG and occasionally you come across real talent. Your definitely a talented writer, but more importantly to me you are a great story teller. In all kinds of writing today people get caught up in the details of beginning-middle-end construction and lose the story (and this reader I might add). Thank you for the wonderful stories! - Jack. *** Hi 'Timberwolf', I have just finished reading your story "I Love You Debbie"from the Kristen Archives and felt compelled to write and tell you how much I enjoyed it! What a lovely tale; beautifully written and very erotic indeed.I shall certainly keep an eye out for some of your others on the site. I really enjoy reading erotica such as this. If you have others in a similar vein I would be thrilled if you were to send them to me. Many thanks,Graham *** I absolutely love this story. You have done something that hasn't happened since I was a kid, I stayed up very late to be able to finish it I couldn't stop until I read every word. The last time that happened I was in Jr. High and that was with "Were The Red Fern Grows". You've made all of the characters very believable even with the God and Goddess aspects added. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it comes soon. - Mike, I Love You Debbie. *** I have read all the stories you have written so far and I can't even begin to tell you how much I enjoyed them. Well done. - Richard. *** I just read it and loved it as much as "Debbie"! I enjoy your stories so much. Please keep up the good work. I promise I'll keep reading. - Terry, 'Rachel. *** Your story caught my eye. First because I share your sister's name. Second, because it is beautifully written. Third, because I have had a lifelong relationship with my twin brother. Thanks for posting such a beautiful essay. Part of me wants to know whether it's true, the rest of me just wants to believe it is. - Rachel, 'Rachel'. *** Just a short(ish) note on your stories and how much I enjoyed them. I was particularly interested in Tamara and I wonder if you have any plans to expand this story, for example do shape changers have sex whilst in their alternate state and if so, what would be the results? Best regards, Bill. *** Timberwolf, Excellent story, Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next installment. Oldwolf58 - 'I Love You Debbie.' *** Outstanding tale. A story of love. Sexy and erotic. Thank you for sharing. - Larry, 'I Love You Debbie.' *** Hallo Timberwolf; i like your Story okay is Fantasy but good Fantasy. Iam a Guy from Germany. you can realy good write and you have a good ideas please do it again. i read you over asstr.org and when you write back that was great. wish you all the best from Germany - Winfried, 'I Love You Debbie.' *** Timberwolf, What a great story! You handled somewhat unbelievable concepts in a very believable style. I enjoy a story with a solid, feel-good ending. I've read a couple of your stories; did not have the guts to correspond til recently. Well done! - Frank, 'Sitting In the Park.' *** Thanks for the great story, my wife and I really enjoyed it and look forward to the next chapters. - outdoornudist, 'Sam and the Weasel.' *** "Photograp?hic Memories" Kudos. Timberwolf, I have just read your story on kristenarchives. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Impressively written, with multiple subjects and directions. Besides the sex, the emotions and situations expressed were well written and had my interest all by themselves. Not intending to insult, but compliment, most stories posed as real actually are not, BUT, you presented the story so beautifully, and with personality, that it certainly seemed very true and genuine. I will look for you name, "Timberwolf," in the future, so that I can again experience a great story. Thank you, Grim. *** Timberwolf, I just want to say that I have read a lot of stories on ASSTR. And I think that "I Love You Debbie" is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Your writing abilities are great, to be able tell a story like this and to have me feel their feelings too is awesome. Thank you for writing this story, and allowing me to read it. - Christopher, 'I Love You Debbie.'