A Golfer's Dream - Book Three The Real Education Begins    Written by TheCaddy

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Chapter Thirty-One – The Proposal

Final exams were difficult but after they were finished Dave was confident he 
had done well; he knew for a fact he had done his best.  The evening after his 
last exam he sat down with Anne and they had a long serious discussion.  She 
wanted to stay with him in his apartment while he finished the first summer 
session then move with him to wherever he was going to live after school was 
finished.  They talked about it extensively but Dave, after all was said and 
digested, insisted that she go home to the family ranch for the months of May 
and June.  He explained that he would be unbelievably busy with golf and his 
three summer classes – he wouldn’t have much time for her.  She feared that they 
were breaking up but he insisted that a little time apart would only prove how 
much they loved each other. She wasn’t totally convinced but in the end agreed 
to go home.  He drove her to the airport the next day and kissed her goodbye.

After he returned from the airport he went to see the twins and say goodbye.  It 
was a tear-filled departure; Jana again tried to talk to Dave about Jennifer but 
he adamantly refused.  He kissed them both goodbye and told them to have a 
wonderful summer.  He spent the rest of that day practicing – he had not spent 
much time at the practice range during his exams.  He worked hard at all parts 
of his game and was happily tired when he returned to his room that night.  He 
and Alec had another long discussion and Alec thought Dave’s idea that he and 
Anne take some time apart was a good one.  When Dave went to bed that night, he 
thought about Anne as he drifted off.

Both the men’s and women’s teams practiced intensely after exams.  The women 
started the regional matches on May 11th and the men were leaving for Orlando on 
May 17th, shortly after graduation ceremonies.  Dave spent some additional time 
with the women in his practice group helping them prepare for the regional 
tournament.  Danielle’s game was at her all-time best and she had high hopes for 
success in the tournament.  Dave spent a lot of extra time with her trying to 
show her little tricks to calm down and focus on her swing.  Leanne and Rachael 
were both playing well as were the two freshmen.

Coach Dawes gave the men’s team some time off practice to attend the women’s 
regional; with that permission Dave, Darcy, Alec, and Devin went to watch every 
day.  Dave followed Danielle the first day and it was obvious she was struggling 
with her putter.  She was hitting the ball extremely well and had potential 
birdie putts within fifteen feet on almost every hole but she couldn’t make a 
putt.  Dave noticed her frustration growing steadily.  After she had missed a 
short six foot birdie putt on the thirteenth hole, he intentionally positioned 
himself between her and the fourteenth tee.  She was upset and didn’t want to 
talk to him but he stood in front of her and insisted she listen.  “You are 
playing phenomenally.  I know you’re not making any putts but you are still only 
one over par and in great shape.  We can work on your putting after the round – 
just stay focused and keep making pars.  One over par will leave you in great 
shape to make a charge for the lead in the final two rounds.”

Dave heard her let out a huge sigh and she finally looked into his eyes and 
nodded agreement.  Dave’s talk helped and she calmed down immediately.  Her 
putting didn’t improve but she finished the round with five pars and a one over 
total.  As Dave had predicted there were only two women under par and two more 
women had shot even par.  Leanne was one of the two who shot even par and was 
tied for third.  Danielle was tied for fifth while Keisha was tied for twelfth.  
Rachael had a poor round and shot seventy-eight while Mia had gotten extremely 
nervous and shot eighty.  The team was sitting in second overall for the team 
title.  Dave congratulated the entire team before he and Danielle spent the 
promised two hours on the practice putting green.  She eventually started to 
feel a little better about her putting but for some strange reason she just 
could not get a good feel for these greens.

Danielle’s second round was similar to her first; she hit the ball very well but 
with only average putts she finished with an even-par total.  Leanne had a great 
second round of two under par and moved into second place for the individual 
title, two strokes behind Sheri.  Keisha struggled and shot seventy-six while 
Rachael rebounded with a solid seventy-four.  Mia improved slightly to seventy-
nine.  The team remained in second place behind Sheri’s Georgia team.  After the 
second round Sheri pulled Dave aside and asked if he still had a girlfriend.  He 
explained that he did and apologized for not being able to spend some special 
time with her.  Sheri simply shrugged and replied, “It’s probably for the best.  
I now actually have a boyfriend too, but I would be very tempted to cheat on him 
with you, my special Sasquatch.”

Dave wished her luck on her final round before he drove back to campus.  His 
classes weren’t due to start for another week but he had visited two of the 
professors and gotten an overview of what would be covered during the first two 
weeks.  He wanted to get ahead because he would miss some time because of the 
regional and then even more time for the NCAA Championships and the US Open.  He 
studied hard all evening before going to bed thinking about Anne.

Danielle’s putting didn’t improve for the final round of the women’s tournament 
and she shot two over par.  She was disappointed with her ninth place finish but 
Dave told her she had played very well and finished quite high considering she 
hardly made a birdie putt all tournament.  Leanne played well again but had to 
settle for a runner-up position behind Sheri.  Sheri led her team to the 
regional title just five strokes ahead of the Wake Forest team.  Rachael and 
Keisha had both had good final rounds of seventy-five while Mia finished with 
seventy-seven.  The second place finish did, however, assure the women a trip to 
the NCAA Championships in Columbus, Ohio.

Dave took Alec and Shauna out to dinner that evening to celebrate their 
graduation.  Alec and Shauna were both very pleased to spend the evening with 
Dave.  They went to a modest restaurant where they could have a delicious meal.  
After the meal they returned to the campus and joined the women’s golf team’s 
celebration of the regional.  Dave had a little too much to drink and a slightly 
tipsy Danielle thought she might be able to seduce him – but he simply told her 
that, although he would always care for her deeply, he would not cheat on a 
steady girlfriend.  He kissed her on the forehead before he went to bed, alone.

He practiced golf and studied hard the next four days; he only took time off to 
swim and to attend the graduation of Alec and Shauna.  Patsy was so proud of her 
son that she was in tears and she appreciated having Dave at her side for 
support, literally.  Alec’s father didn’t bother to show up but Alec had 
expected that and didn’t really care.  Shauna’s parents were very proud of her; 
they had warmed to Alec and actually hugged him to congratulate him as well.  
Dave watched as Shauna and Alec interacted with their parents and he thought 
about Anne again.

After a hard day of practice on Tuesday, the team flew to Florida on Wednesday 
to play their practice round.  The lineup was the same as it was for the ACC 
with Devin, Alec, Dave, Darcy, and Keith.  Dave liked the course immensely and 
played the whole tournament fantastically.  He won easily with rounds of sixty-
five, sixty-six, and sixty-six.  The only player to really challenge him was 
Darcy who finished two strokes behind Dave for the individual title.  Darcy 
teased Dave telling him, “I’m going to beat you once before you turn pro.”

Dave laughed.  “Well, it will have to be at the NCAA competition then because 
that will be my last amateur tournament.”

“I’d hate to see you finish with a loss but I’m going to do my best.”

Dave had sat through numerous interviews after his final round of the regional 
but he never told the media that he planned to turn pro after the NCAA 
tournament.  He celebrated the victory with his team that night at the hotel 
even though he didn’t drink very much – he only had two beers.  The team had to 
fly back to Wake Forest on Sunday but celebrated late into the morning.

On Sunday, Dave found the coach in the airport and asked him if he and Darcy 
could have the week off to drive to Columbus and watch the women’s final.  They 
promised to take their clubs and find a practice range.  Coach Dawes agreed and 
Darcy was elated when Dave told him.  They packed the car as soon as they 
arrived back at campus.  Dave was going to attend his three classes the next day 
and they could leave immediately afterward.

They got away mid-afternoon and the six hour drive passed quickly.  They talked 
about their golf and their futures for a while but eventually the car became 
very quiet and Dave thought for a long time about Anne, himself, and their 
future.  He continued to think about what he wanted to do and after a lot of 
thought he made a final decision.

He decided he was ready for marriage and he would go out the following week and 
order a ring – a very special ring.  He felt wonderful; as soon as he made up 
his mind, his heart was filled with love and he was ready to go to the next step 
in his relationship.

They arrived late in Columbus and checked into the hotel Dave had booked.  They 
called the girls as soon as they got in the room and Leanne reported that she 
didn’t have a very good practice round but Danielle played amazingly well.  Dave 
spoke to Danielle who was clearly ecstatic about her round; Dave gently reminded 
her to remain focused.  She giggled and told him she was very focused.

Dave and Darcy slept well that night and in the morning drove directly to the 
golf course.  Darcy followed Leanne, of course, while Dave followed Danielle.  
He spent a little time with the other three girls but most of his time was spent 
watching Danielle.  Her fantastic ball-striking from the previous week was back 
but so was her putter and she shot an unbelievable sixty-five.  She had broken 
her personal best by three strokes and was also leading the tournament by three 
strokes.  She hugged Dave enthusiastically after she finished and Dave enjoyed 
feeling her in his arms.  She was a truly special girl and he knew she would 
make some man very happy someday.  The rest of the team played fairly well and, 
with Danielle’s extraordinary round, Wake Forest was in first overall for the 
team title.  Coach Lloyd spoke to the girls before they went back to the hotel, 
she reminded them that there were more holes to play.

Dave and Darcy went to a local driving range and hit balls for two hours.  Dave 
was interrupted eight times by people who recognized him and requested an 
autograph.  He happily gave them the autographs and talked to several of them 
for a little while.

Dave spent the evening studying while Darcy took his car and drove to the girls’ 
hotel where he spent some intimate time with Leanne.  The women’s team was 
teeing off late the second day so Dave and Darcy practiced for two hours the 
next morning before going to watch the second round.  Leanne followed her first 
day score of one over par with an even par round while Danielle shot another 
good round of two under par, seventy.  She was still holding her three-stroke 
lead and the team was still five strokes ahead of Sheri’s Georgia team.  Sheri 
was tied with a girl from Texas for second place behind Danielle.

The women tried to convince Dave to go to back to their hotel with them but he 
said he had to study so Darcy again dropped him off at his hotel before he went 
to meet Leanne.  Dave spent the evening studying and was happy with how much 
work he accomplished.  He was asleep when Darcy returned.

For the third round, the women had to go head-to-head with the Georgia team and 
the Texas Longhorns team.  Leanne had to play against Sheri and she shot a very 
good seventy-one but still finished two strokes behind Sheri who was determined 
to defend her national title.  Danielle wasn’t giving up without a fight though 
and she shot seventy to remain two strokes ahead of Sheri.  Rachael, Keisha, and 
Mia also played well and the team increased their lead to nine strokes.

Dave again spent the evening studying while Darcy was with the women.  They both 
woke early the next morning and practiced for several hours before going to 
watch the women’s final round.  The same three teams were in the final groups; 
Wake Forest held a nine stroke lead over Georgia and twelve strokes over Texas.  
Sheri and Danielle were in the final group of the day and Dave followed them 
intently.  Sheri came out of the blocks fast with a couple of birdies but 
Danielle fought her off with one of her own.  Danielle was still holding a one 
stroke lead early on the back nine when she hit a very poor tee shot into a 
water hazard.  Dave had noticed she was getting increasingly tense with each 
hole; when the ball splashed into the water he watched her slam her club into 
the ground.  He gave her a few minutes to see if she could compose herself but 
she seemed to be very distracted.  Dave suspected she was thinking too much 
about the possible outcome and not about her next shot and the current hole.

She dropped a ball next to where she had gone into the water hazard; that lie 
left a long shot to the par-four green.  The penalty stroke meant she was now 
hitting three and Dave knew she was still fretting over her errant tee shot.  
She was just starting her pre-shot routine when she heard Dave clapping in short 
sharp pops.  She looked at him and he cheered, “Okay, Danielle, focus on this 
shot.  Take it one shot at a time – you can do this.”  She looked at him and he 
pointed two of his fingers to his eyes and then to ground in front of himself.  
All of the group practice had prepared her for this moment; she knew that Dave’s 
motion meant for her to get focused and she obediently shrugged off the previous 
shot and concentrated on the long three-wood shot ahead.  She took a smooth 
practice swing before she relaxed her breathing and settled over the ball.  She 
swung her three-wood and hit it perfectly.  The ball launched off the face of 
the club and flew towards the green.  It bounced just short of the green then 
rolled to within six feet of the hole.  The sparse crowd around Danielle cheered 
appreciably.  Sheri hit a great second shot to twelve feet from the hole then 
sank the putt for birdie to put the pressure on Danielle.  Danielle took her 
time with her putt and hit it smoothly into the hole.  She made par and was 
still tied with Sheri.

Sheri and Danielle both went one under par over the next few holes and stood on 
the final tee tied for the lead.  Sheri was up first and hit a long, straight 
drive.  Danielle also hit a good drive, which finished only twenty yards short 
of Sheri’s.  The Texas player had fallen well back of Sheri and Danielle and she 
hit a good drive just past Danielle.  Danielle hit a great approach shot leaving 
ten feet for a possible birdie on the last hole.  After the Texas player missed 
the green, Sheri hit her second shot just inside Danielle’s.

After strolling to the final green, the Texas player chipped close to the hole 
then tapped in for par before Danielle stood over her putt.  Danielle stroked 
the ball smoothly and it rolled straight at the hole but started to break as it 
lost speed.  The ball rolled across the lower lip of the hole and lipped to the 
top of the hole; then it paused and simply dropped to the bottom of the cup.  
Danielle jumped in delight before she quickly regained her composure.  The crowd 
cheered appreciably.  Dave was still watching Sheri as Leanne walked up beside 
him and whispered, “With that birdie, we won the team title by six strokes.”  
Dave hugged her quietly to congratulate her before they both resumed watching 
Sheri putt.

Sheri hit a solid putt but she misread the break slightly and missed the hole by 
two inches.  She dejectedly walked to the hole and tapped in for par.  She 
turned and congratulated Danielle for winning the individual title.  Danielle 
also shook the Texas player’s hand before she sprinted to Dave and jumped into 
his arms.  She wrapped her legs around his body as if she were climbing a tree.  
He hugged her as she kissed him on the lips.  After their lips separated she 
dropped her legs to the ground and said, “Thank you, Dave.  Winning the NCAA was 
a dream I never really believed would come true but thanks to you, I did it.  
You helped me so much, especially today.  You’ve helped me since New Years and 
you helped me incredibly last year.  Thank you!  Thank you! Thank you!”  With 
each thank you, she hugged and jumped at the same time.

Dave hugged her tight.  “I’m really happy for you.  You worked very hard to earn 
this and I couldn’t be happier.”

The rest of the team quickly surrounded Dave and Danielle and even Coach Lloyd 
joined the group hug.  They celebrated for five minutes before going to check 
the scoreboard.  After final scores were posted and confirmed the team and 
individual victories, Dave hugged each woman on the team before he hugged Coach 
Lloyd.  They hugged so tightly that her mouth was very close to Dave’s ear.  She 
whispered, “Dave, your Midas touch has brought us a championship that I never 
imagined we would win – and we have every member of the team returning next 
year.  What you have done in two short years for the Wake Forest golf program is 
truly amazing.  Coach Dawes told me you are turning pro after the NCAA 
Championships and I wanted to wish you all the best.  Thank you for helping 
develop a program that hopefully will be dominant for many years to come.”  Dave 
thanked her for the kind words and he promised to join the team celebration at 
the hotel after the banquet.

Dave, the mentor, celebrated success with the women that night – he was really 
happy for all of them.  Each team member took some time to thank him for his 
help and he really appreciated their heartfelt thanks.  All the women were 
fairly inebriated when he left shortly after midnight.  He hadn’t been drinking 
so he could drive back to his hotel.  Darcy was very drunk and he kept thanking 
Dave as they motored back to the hotel.  “Dave, you the greatest friend a person 
could ever have.  You have helped the entire golf group and Leanne loves you to 
death.  You’re lucky I’m not the jealous type; she talks about you non-stop but 
I know it’s just because you have helped her and the rest of the women’s team.  
She always growls at me to thank you for everything you have done for me as well 
– but I tell her you know how I feel.  Well, just in case you don’t, I owe 
everything I am to you.  Last year when I started at Wake Forest I was just a 
scared kid but you helped me become a man.  I know you are turning pro in a few 
weeks and I look forward to trying to lead the team next year.  I have huge 
shoes to fill but I look forward to the challenge and I hope I don’t let you 
down.  I have learned so much from you and not just about golf.  That incident 
with the fire in Vegas last year changed me forever.  I think that one event 
will define the rest of my life.  Thank you for everything, Dave.”

Dave knew his friend was getting maudlin in part because of the alcohol but Dave 
appreciated his kind words.  “Darcy, you are a great golfer and a great person.  
You and Leanne will have a wonderful life together and I’m proud to have known 
you both.  As far as trying to fill my shoes, just be yourself and don’t ever 
worry about trying to make me proud because I’m already incredibly proud of 
you.”

Dave put his hand out and his friend shook it enthusiastically before they both 
became quiet, deep in thought.  Darcy fell asleep the moment his head hit the 
pillow in the hotel room and Dave lay in bed thinking about his future.  He had 
the next two weeks completely mapped out and he was anxious to get back to the 
campus.

They slept late the next morning and ate a large breakfast before getting on the 
road.  Darcy slept most of the day in the passenger’s seat and they arrived at 
Wake Forest shortly after dinner.  After Dave dropped Darcy off, he spent an 
hour with Alec giving him all the details from the tournament.  Dave then logged 
onto Win and checked his final marks from the winter session.  He was very proud 
that he had made two A+s, four As and one A-.  He called his parents immediately 
to give them the results; they were very proud of him.  He also told them all 
about the women’s team winning the NCAA.  He eventually hung up then spent the 
evening studying.

The men’s team flew to Sunriver, Oregon on Sunday for the NCAA Championship.  
They got in early in the evening and settled into their hotel.  Dave was very 
relaxed and ready for his final collegiate golf tournament.  Before they went to 
bed, he and Alec talked briefly about the US Open, which was only two weeks 
away.  Dave tossed and turned for a short time as he thought about how quickly 
his career at Wake Forest had come and gone and how happy he was that he was 
turning pro the following week.  He was naturally nervous about the jump to the 
professional level but he knew he already had two professional victories 
including a Major and a second-place showing at The Masters.  He was confident 
he was ready.

The practice round the next day went well and Dave found the course very 
challenging.  Darcy had a great day and shot sixty-nine, beating Dave by one 
stroke.  Alec played well but he confessed to Dave that his bad hand was really 
bothering him.  Dave encouraged his best friend to stick it out.  Alec assured 
him he would.

Dave went for a long swim that evening; he was tired but relaxed when he went to 
bed.

He and Alec woke at the same time the next morning and went for breakfast 
together.  The team eventually went to the course and they practiced for an hour 
before their tee times.  The first day went well for the entire team and Darcy 
pulled into a first round lead with a six-under-par score.  Dave was one stroke 
behind with a sixty-seven and Devin shot seventy.  Alec and Keith both shot 
seventy-one to finish tied for twentieth.  The team jumped to a huge fifteen 
stroke lead with all five players in the top twenty.  Rounds two and three were 
a repeat of the first round with the WF team absolutely dominating the 
tournament.  Darcy extended his lead to two strokes over Dave while Devin closed 
to within three strokes of Darcy.  The media were abuzz with the fact that Wake 
Forest held the top three places in the tournament.  Keith and Alec both 
continued to play well with Keith tied for fifteenth place and Alec tied for 
twenty-second.  The team was thirty-five strokes ahead and almost assured of 
their second straight national title.  Coach Dawes was overwhelmed with the 
team’s results.

Dave made a late charge on Darcy in the final round, making birdie on three of 
the last four holes for a sixty-five but Darcy battled him hard and finished 
with a sixty-six to win the National Individual title by one stroke.  When he 
finished he looked at Dave sheepishly – he wondered if his friend would be angry 
for beating him in the last collegiate tournament Dave would ever play.  He knew 
he didn’t have to worry when Dave rushed across the final green and hugged him 
in celebration.  He whispered, “I’m sorry I beat you, Dave.”

Dave shook his head.  “Your game was awesome; don’t ever be sorry.  We won the 
national title again and you are an NCAA Champion.”  Dave hugged him again and 
the rest of the team joined the celebration.  Dave hugged Alec then said to his 
best friend, “I’m so happy you’re here to enjoy this.  I really missed you last 
year.”

Alec was bouncing with delight as he replied, “I wanted to be here so bad last 
year – but this year is even better.  This has been a great year and winning the 
title is unbelievable.”

Dave nodded agreement before he moved to Devin.  “You have a great future, 
Devin.  You and Darcy will have to lead the team next year because I’m turning 
pro this week.  I know the two of you will work hard to defend our title next 
year.”

Devin smiled at Dave before he replied, “I have learned a lot from you this past 
year and I look forward to helping Wake Forest win many more titles.  Thank you 
for everything, Dave.”

Dave then walked to Keith.  They shook hands and Dave spoke softly to his former 
nemesis, “We didn’t see eye-to-eye when I started at Wake Forest but we overcame 
that and won two straight national titles.  You’re a great golfer, Keith.  Good 
luck in the future.”

Keith nodded to Dave.  “You’re an amazing golfer and I’m lucky to have been able 
to play with you.  You taught me a valuable lesson and I hope I have become a 
better person for it.  Good luck on the tour.”

Dave thanked him before he walked to Coach Dawes and gave him a huge hug.  
“Thanks, Coach, for giving me another chance.  I promised that you wouldn’t 
regret it and I think two straight national titles are sufficient payment.”

Coach Dawes laughed.  “Not only do I have two titles but I have the best two 
collegiate golfers in the country in Darcy and Devin plus I have two very 
promising freshman coming to Wake Forest next year, thanks to you.  You 
definitely delivered on your promise and thank your beautiful friend in Canada 
for talking me into giving you that second chance.  Don’t be too hard on my 
brother and nephew on the tour this summer.”

Dave shook his hand as he thought again about Jennifer’s visit to sort things 
out when he was in big trouble.  His heart did a flip as he remembered her naked 
in his arms that memorable night.  He still regretted not telling her then and 
there that she was his true life partner and he wanted her in his life.

The team celebrated that night and Dave joined in wholeheartedly.  He was very 
drunk when he finally went to bed.  The day had been another award-filled day as 
he received his second straight Hogan Award for top collegiate golfer and a 
first-team All-American Award.  Darcy also received a first-team All-American 
award and Devin received a second-team award.  The media interview lasted over 
an hour and the media were very excited when Dave finally announced he would be 
turning pro the following week.

Dave woke late on Sunday; after packing he wished Alec and the team farewell 
before he boarded a separate flight from the team.  After a brief detour Dave 
eventually landed in New York.  He checked into the hotel he had booked; then he 
called his Uncle Alan and asked him to pull together all the offers he had 
received and to fax them to Dave at the hotel.  They talked for fifteen minutes 
about the offers and Dave thanked his uncle for again being there for him.  Dave 
promised Alan a nice reward but Alan said he was simply proud to help his now-
famous nephew.

Dave then called Mike Weir and got the number of his recommended agent.  Mike 
had told Dave that he had hinted to his agent that there might be a special call 
coming to him the evening after the NCAA Championships were completed.  Dave 
thanked Mike before he promised to see him at the US Open.

Dave then called Mike’s agent, Jack Power, who, even on a Sunday evening, was 
happy to hear from Dave.  When Dave hung up, he had a nine o’clock appointment 
the next morning.  Jack’s office was only two blocks from Dave’s hotel.

As Dave lay in bed he thought about his life moving to the next stage he was 
confident he was ready but he was also understandably very nervous.  Alan had 
good leads on numerous sponsors who had even made preliminary offers to Alan, 
which he quickly said he could not consider or even discuss until later.  Dave 
knew the offers were significant and he would be set for life financially.  Dave 
then thought about his often-erratic love life and how he was also now ready to 
take that to the next step.

The meeting the next morning involved a major negotiation.  Jack Power wanted a 
much larger commission than Dave was willing to offer; the kind of agent you 
want negotiating on your behalf can be tough when it’s between the two of you.  
Dave patiently explained the offers he had already semi-received and how, as the 
new agent, one simply had to complete those deals, but Jack Power wouldn’t bend 
to Dave’s wishes until Dave stood up and started to leave.  Dave knew that the 
commission he was proposing to the agent on the existing offers would be worth 
millions of dollars.  Convinced it was a real attempt to walk, Jack suggested 
they renew discussions. They finally came to an agreement on Dave’s terms and 
they shook hands before going to lunch.  After lunch all the paper work was 
completed and Dave signed his life away.

Jack went right to work on the offers and assured Dave he would be in touch 
very, very soon.

Dave flew back to Wake Forest and arrived late Monday evening.  He and Alec 
talked briefly before Dave studied for a couple of hours.  He slept-in the next 
morning but wasn’t late for his first class.  He worked hard in class and was 
pleased that he was only slightly behind.  All the studying during the evenings 
had paid off.

Dave’s cell phone rang late in the afternoon as he studied for his three 
midterms the next day.  Jack had called to confirm that he had come to terms 
with five of the companies Alan had fielded.  The biggest contract, with Adidas-
Taylormade, was an easy negotiation and Jack explained he could have gotten a 
lot more if Dave hadn’t insisted on only slightly modifying their initial offer.  
Dave was pleased to hear he would receive thirty million dollars over four years 
including a six million dollar signing bonus.  Dave assured Jack that if he 
played well over the next four years the next contract would be much larger.  
Jack definitely agreed.  Three of the other four contracts were for ten million 
dollars each over four years, each including a two million dollar signing bonus.  
The final contract was for five million dollars including a one million dollar 
signing bonus.  Dave quickly added the money in his head and was still shocked 
by the figures – sixty-five million dollars in total.  He would receive thirteen 
million dollars immediately in signing bonuses and the same amount each year for 
the next four years.  These were only half of the offers Dave had presented to 
Jack and Jack was confident he could get additional ones himself.

Dave had a hard time studying as he thought about the number and size of his 
contracts but he eventually refocused and worked hard the rest of the evening.  
He wrote all three exams the next day and, while he knew there weren’t going to 
be any A+s, he was happy with his effort.  He studied all evening again but took 
a break to talk with Alec.  They made arrangements to spend some time together 
the next afternoon.  As Dave lay in bed he called Jack to confirm that the 
additional signing bonus package Dave had negotiated would be ready the next 
afternoon.  Jack assured him that the details were fully worked out.  Dave 
thanked him; then they booked five meetings for Friday to sign the negotiated 
contracts in separate sessions.

Dave then called his father and explained all the details of the contracts.  
Roger was very happy for his son and frankly amazed at the bottom line total.  
Dave then spoke to his mother to share the good news.  He also had some things 
he needed her help with, and after a lengthy discussion she promised Dave she 
would look after his requests.  Dave spoke to his father again briefly and Roger 
assured Dave he would go to the bank the following day.

Dave fell asleep as happy as he had ever been in his life but he knew there was 
still one major issue pending.  He was looking forward to placing a ring on the 
finger of his future bride.

As soon as classes were over the next day Dave and Alec drove to the jewelry 
store.  Before they got out of the car Dave touched Alec’s arm and explained, 
“Can we talk for a minute before we go in.”  Alec wondered what was up but just 
nodded so Dave pulled an envelope out of his pocket and passed it to Alec.  When 
Alec opened the envelope and looked at the check his jaw dropped.  Dave chuckled 
before he explained, “I told you if I signed good contracts I would guarantee 
you at least $100,000 a year for caddying for me.  Half the year is nearly gone 
so that check is simply $50,000 for the first part of the year.  Before you try 
to argue, you caddied for me last summer and in The Masters so you have earned 
it.  I don’t want any argument.”

Alec looked at his friend and softly replied, “This is too much, Dave.”

Dave shook his head, “It is just the start, my friend.  I hope to have a really 
good year on the tour and ten percent of my earnings will all be yours.  Now 
let’s go get my rock.”

Alec simply shook his head as he climbed out of Dave’s Honda and walked into the 
store with his friend.  As they walked through the door Dave whispered, “Now you 
can buy a nice ring for Shauna.”  Alec nodded enthusiastically.  Alec went 
looking at diamond rings while Dave talked to the manager of the store.  The 
manager went into the back room and returned with a ring case.  Dave called Alec 
over to see the ring he had ordered.  As the velvet box opened, Alec looked at 
the huge diamond and gasped, “Holy fuck, that thing is enormous.”  Not bothering 
to be cool, he continued, “How much does it cost?”

The manager explained in a short sales spiel, “This is a very fine diamond at 
3.5 carets in an Ideal Brilliant cut, it’s an E grade with a color of the finest 
water, and is flawless.  It is set off by two single caret side diamonds mounted 
in an 18-carat yellow-gold ring.  You are not going to find a better ring 
anywhere and is priced at $42,000.”

Dave simply smiled while Alec looked at him as if he were crazy.  Alec asked, 
“Are you sure you’re not rushing this?”

Dave shook his head.  “I’m not rushing it.  I’ve spent a lot of time thinking 
about this and I am absolutely positive I am making the right decision for the 
right reasons.”

Alec shook his head again before he went back to looking at rings for Shauna.  
He picked out a beautiful $10,000 ring and knew Shauna would love it.  He had to 
have it laid away until he could get Dave’s check into his bank account and 
arrange payment.  Dave had already transferred the money for his ring so he 
placed the small box carefully in his pocket before walking out of the shop with 
his friend at his side.

While they were driving back to campus, Dave explained, “I have to stop and 
check on one of my signing bonuses.”  Alec looked at his friend curiously then 
again simply nodded.  Dave pulled into a large Ford-Lincoln-Mercury dealership 
and said to Alec, “One of the contracts I will be signing tomorrow is with Ford 
and I negotiated a new vehicle as part of the signing bonus.  I simply have to 
pick it out.”

Alec shook his head in surprise.  He chuckled before he said, “This feels like 
Christmas shopping.”

Dave laughed and agreed, “You have no idea.”

Alec looked at him strangely but he dutifully followed him into the showroom.  
The showroom was filled with beautiful new vehicles and Dave walked directly to 
a black Lincoln Navigator.  It was a huge SUV and both Dave and Alec looked the 
vehicle over thoroughly.  Alec finally said, “This is really nice.  I think it 
would be perfect for you.”

Dave nodded agreement and walked to the reception counter.  He smiled at the 
pretty young woman behind the counter before he said, “Hi. I’m Dave MacDonald.  
I believe the manager is expecting me.”

She smiled at Dave and replied, “Yes, sir, he is.  All your requests have been 
taken care of.  I’ll let him know you are here.”

Alec looked at Dave quizzically about the comment ‘all your requests’ but Dave 
simply shrugged.  They stood and waited for several minutes before a man in a 
suit walked towards them carrying a handful of papers.  As they watched the 
manager approach, Alec and Dave both noticed a gorgeous red convertible mustang 
being moved onto the showroom floor.  Alec gasped before he whispered, “Look at 
that beautiful Mustang.  Now that is the car I would want.”

Dave laughed and thought how well he knew his best friend.  The manager nodded 
at Dave, so Dave turned to his friend and said, “Let’s have a look at it.”  They 
walked towards the Mustang.  It was the new model, which had been introduced the 
previous year and it was a fully loaded GT version.  The bright red paint looked 
spectacular.  The mechanic who had driven the car into the showroom was just 
getting out of the car so Dave asked him to pop the hood.  The man pulled the 
release and Dave lifted the hood to look at the spotless engine.  Alec was 
moaning excitedly and Dave chuckled at his friend.  The manager approached Dave 
and they shook hands as they introduced each other.  Dave then introduced Alec 
before he walked to the driver’s door and looked into the car.  The black 
leather seats looked beautiful and as he sat in the bucket seat the new car 
smell filled his lungs.  He got out of the car and told Alec to try it.

Alec sat in the car and the manager explained the car had a Shaker 500 audio 
system with a six-disc CD changer, MP3, and six speakers.  Alec turned on the 
radio and the audio system sounded amazing.  The manager then said, “It’s all 
ready to go except I have one small problem.”

As Alec climbed out of the car, Dave asked, “What’s the problem?”

The manager started to walk towards the back of the car and elaborated, “I 
couldn’t get the custom license plate the buyer wanted because it was already 
taken so I had to change it slightly.”

Dave and Alec walked around the back of the car and looked at the license plate, 
which read “TheCaddy”.  The manager continued, “Sorry, Dave, but the caddie 
spelt with an ‘ie’ was taken so I used ‘y’ instead.  I hope you don’t mind.”

Dave shook his head.  “No, I don’t think it will matter.”

Alec looked at Dave.  “You got this car?  I thought you liked the Navigator?”

Dave laughed out loud.  “What does the license plate say?”  Alec looked at the 
plate again then his face light up in surprise as Dave added, “And who is The 
Caddy?”

Alec immediately turned serious, “No Dave, I can’t accept this.  You already 
gave me a huge check, I simply can’t take this.”

Dave laughed again.  “The check was your salary.  This is a combination signing 
bonus and wedding present.”  Dave reached for the paperwork the manager was 
holding and opened it for Alec.  “The car is already registered in your name and 
I paid the first year’s insurance premium.  This is your car now and I don’t 
want any argument.”

Alec looked at the paperwork then he hugged his best friend.  As they separated, 
Dave handed him the paperwork and the mechanic reopened the large door of the 
showroom so Alec could drive his car out.  Alec smiled before he thanked Dave 
repeatedly then got in his new car and drove it literally off the showroom 
floor.  The manager asked Dave if he was interested in a new vehicle as well and 
Dave simply smiled and said, “Maybe later.”

Dave signed the paperwork the manager had for him before he walked out of the 
dealership and got in his car.  He arrived at the apartment shortly after Alec 
who was still bouncing with excitement.  Alec explained, “I wasn’t going to see 
Shauna until tomorrow but I think I will go visit her right now.”

Dave replied, “That’s a great idea.  I’m going to study tonight then pack for 
the signing trip to New York tomorrow.”

Alec nodded.  “I’ll be back later tonight.”

Dave said goodbye then watched Alec walk out the door of the apartment with an 
armful of CDs.  Dave had just sat at his desk as he heard Alec’s new car stereo 
crank up; Dave chuckled as the loud music slowly faded out of range.

After an hour of studying, Dave took a short break to go hit balls at the golf 
center and he ran into Coach Dawes.  They talked for over an hour and Dave asked 
if he could use the practice facilities the following fall when he was finishing 
his last year of classes.  Coach Dawes said he would be happy to have Dave 
around for another year and Dave was welcome to use the practice range whenever 
he wanted.  But he added that Dave might have to pay for that with some 
occasional coaching or mentoring efforts.  Both of the men laughed together.

Dave and the coach shook hands before Dave practiced for a while.  Dave 
eventually went back to his apartment and made dinner for himself before he 
spent the evening studying.  It was late in the evening when Alec and Shauna 
returned to the apartment and as soon as Shauna walked through the door she 
hugged Dave lovingly and thanked him for the wonderful car.  He told her he was 
happy he could give it to them and that he hoped they would have a wonderful 
life together.

They talked for over an hour and he explained his plan for the following two 
days.  Shauna and Alec wished Dave luck before they went to bed.  Dave also went 
to bed and he tossed and turned as he anxiously thought about the next two days.  
He finally fell asleep thinking about the love of his life.

Dave woke early the next day and Alec drove him to the airport with the top down 
on his Mustang.  Alec wished Dave luck before he pulled away and turned the 
music up full blast.  Dave laughed at his friend and his toy before walking into 
the airport.

His flight to New York passed quickly and he was soon in Jack’s office signing 
the contracts.  The Adidas-Taylormade group was very pleased to have him signed 
and Dave posed for several pictures with the company’s top executives.  His new 
Taylormade Tour Golf Bag stood in front of the posing men.  The Taylormade logo 
was very prominent on the bag but so were a large Canadian flag, which Dave had 
requested, and the words ‘Dave MacDonald, QAI, CANADA.  After all the pictures 
were taken, the executives arranged a meeting with Dave and a local retailer so 
Dave could pick out as much clothing as he wanted.  Dave promised to go to the 
retailer that afternoon and select some outfits for the US Open.  The executives 
offered Dave a whole new set of golf equipment but Dave said he wanted to play 
the US Open with his own familiar clubs but would look at updating his equipment 
over time in the fall.

The other four contract signings went smoothly.  The Ford group was last to meet 
with Dave so they took Jack and Dave out to a late lunch and Dave thanked them 
for making the special arrangements for the Mustang.  The Ford executives were 
very happy to have Dave under contract and they were glad they could help.

Jack and Dave sat down after lunch and Jack handed Dave a check and a deposit 
receipt.  The deposit receipt was for $12,220,000, which was the thirteen 
million signing bonuses less the six percent commission.  Jack also handed him a 
check for $260,000 made out to Alan MacDonald.  Dave had negotiated a six 
percent total commission but two percent of that going to Alan for all the 
offers he had handled.  Alan would continue to get two percent on all future 
contracts from the same original group he had handled and Jack would get all six 
percent for new contracts he negotiated.  Dave knew Alan would be very surprised 
and very happy.

Jack informed Dave that he already had several more prospective clients and 
would probably have final details the following week.  Dave thanked Jack before 
he left for the retail store.  The manager of the store was very excited to have 
Dave shopping at his establishment.  Dave picked out over a dozen golfing 
outfits and before he left the store he had six pairs of new golf shoes, four 
pairs of new sneakers, twelve different coloured golf hats with Adidas on the 
front and Taylormade on the sides.  The store manager kept the golf shirts to 
have them embroidered with custom logos for the US Open but Dave took six more 
shirt-and-short outfits for casual dress.  Everything he wore would say either 
Adidas or Taylormade.

Dave returned to his hotel room and packed his new clothes for the next leg of 
his trip.  He opened the small jewelry box and stared down at the diamond ring; 
his heart raced as he hoped that within twenty-four hours he would be engaged to 
be married.  He ordered room service for a light dinner then went to bed early.

He woke very early and went to the airport.  He had a long day of travel ahead 
of him and somehow a time zone change always seemed to make it worse.  He 
boarded the first flight and his heart was racing with excitement – would she 
say yes?  Surely she would – he knew she wanted this as much as he did.  Would 
she like the ring?  He stared out the window and thought about the many women he 
had spent time with.  Ann had unexpectedly been his first partner and he would 
always remember her in a very special way – she was so pretty and he had been 
shocked that a beautiful girl would find him attractive.  He had been so nervous 
around girls but with her it was different – he briefly wondered how she was 
doing.  Were her parents still having problems?  Was she happy with the new 
boyfriend Jennifer had told him about in an e-mail back in January?

The thought of the e-mail from Jennifer made him think about his best friend.  
He couldn’t believe he had almost let her out of his life – she was much too 
special to lose.  She would always be his best friend; always.  They had 
literally grown up together, spending every summer together in North Beach.  She 
was beautiful and he prayed she would have a great life – he wanted nothing but 
the best for her.

The Asian triplets and in particular Lynn had been a wonderful adventure.  The 
chance meeting in Vancouver had developed into an exciting romance in Calgary.  
Lynn had finally moved on and from her e-mail the previous month she was ready 
to settle down with her new boyfriend.  Dave had wished her the best and told 
her he would never forget their time together.

With Sarah, his English princess, that fateful day in a Vancouver alley had sent 
their lives on a crash course and when the two worlds collided, sparks flew.  He 
wondered again if their worlds would be so different now that he had signed 
large endorsement contracts.  As he thought about their differences, he realized 
that it wasn’t just the money but the fact that she had been raised in an 
environment so significantly different than his.  He then thought about 
policewoman Roxanne and how exciting their times together had been.

As the plane drifted through the clouds he thought about Katherine – shy, sweet 
Katherine.  She had been so afraid to tell him that she had met someone else the 
previous summer and yet he was very happy for her.  Their relationship had been 
very special but the truth was he had never really gotten over Jennifer so his 
and Katherine’s relationship was doomed before it started.

As a flight attendant walked past him he glanced at her uniform and red hair; 
then he thought about his special red-headed nurse who had cared for him in 
Vancouver.  She was beautiful, mature, and very sexy.  Sam became a part of his 
family and would hopefully always remain close.

The thought of red hair also brought Rebecca to mind.  She was the girl he was 
saddest for – they had truly loved each other but she had not been ready for a 
long term commitment when he had thought that he was.  Then when she was ready 
he wasn’t – timing had been awful in their relationship and it was simply not 
meant to be.  The timing was all wrong as if they were in a Shakespeare play.  
He hoped she would eventually find happiness – she deserved that.

When he went to Wake Forest he had met the twins, thanks to Jennifer.  Jana was 
a fun exciting girl and they would always remain good friends, but Kyra, she was 
extra special.  He thought how, if he had not had Jennifer as a best friend, 
then Kyra definitely would be.  They could talk very seriously and yet have a 
lot of fun as well.  He wondered if maybe he should have considered asking her 
if their relationship could become more serious.  He quickly pushed those 
thoughts out of his head as he heard the pilot ask the passengers to prepare for 
landing.

As Dave pushed his tray back into the seat in front of him and checked his 
seatbelt he thought about Danielle – wonderful, fantastic, exotic Danielle.  She 
had enough life in her for both of them.  She had been so excited to spend time 
with him the previous spring but she never once went back on their agreement – 
she never made a pass at him after they left Wake Forest at then end of his 
first year except for the night they celebrated the regional title and that 
didn’t really count.  She had soared to the top of the women’s collegiate golf 
and he was very happy for her.

Sheri and Danielle would have many battles on the golf course and Dave thought 
about his Barbie.  She was truly gorgeous and they had had great sex but there 
never really was any love between them – but the lust had been incredible.

After a long wait between the first and second flight Dave finally boarded the 
plane for his final segment.  As he sat in his seat he thought about Anne.  He 
had met her at a low point in his life and she had raised his spirits 
tremendously.  The time they spent together at her family’s ranch had been the 
turning point in his life.  He had always thought he was quite mature but he 
truly felt he had become a man during that Christmas vacation.  She was 
beautiful, smart, and funny.  He wished she wasn’t so focused on money but he 
had grown to realize that not everyone is the same and people’s differences are 
what make them special.

He stared at the clouds and he noticed how one particular cloud seemed to be 
shaped like the hips of his lovely blonde fiancée-to-be and he got very excited 
about placing the ring on her finger.  He again asked himself if she was ready 
to say yes and again he knew she was.

After the plane landed, Dave found his way to the car rental agency.  The 
counter attendant recognized him and wished him luck in the upcoming US Open.  
Dave thanked the young man before he signed the papers and left with the keys.  
His heart began to race as he started up the car and the drive to his soon-to-be 
fiancée’s house seemed to take forever.  He pulled up in front of the house and 
stared at the front door.  He had battled Tiger Woods in The Masters and managed 
to overcome all that pressure; he actually beat the best golfer in the world but 
now as he stared at the door which stood between him and the rest of his life, 
he felt almost sick to his stomach.  What if she said no?  He didn’t think he 
could handle that rejection.  He finally took two deep breaths and got out of 
the car… ‘Straight back, Straight through’; if it works in golf, it can work in 
love.

His sweaty hand played with the velvet box in his pocket and he repeated his 
carefully planned proposal over and over in his head.  He felt a huge lump in 
his throat as he reached the door.  Before he could knock, the door cracked open 
slowly and he nervously smiled at the excited woman who answered; she was 
expecting him.  She smiled affectionately and said, “Just wait, Dave, I’ll get 
her.  She has no idea you are coming.”

Dave’s hand continued to flip and twist the small box in his pocket as the woman 
walked away from the door and called her daughter.  Dave stepped inside the door 
and heard a distant but familiar voice ask, “Who is it, Mom?”  The time had 
come; the teenaged stuttering Dave had been replaced by a nervous but confident 
young man.  He was ready for this and, just as his nerves always disappeared on 
the golf course, they drifted away here as well.

He pulled the velvet-covered box from his pocket and, as the beautiful blonde 
walked around the corner and into view, he dropped to one knee.  She instantly 
froze and stared at him.  His confident voice almost echoed down the hall as he 
declared, “I really missed you and I need you in my life forever.  Will you make 
me the happiest man in the world and marry me?”  He had tears in his eyes and 
immediately noticed two parallel wet streaks running down her lovely cheeks.

She literally ran across the floor and fell into his arms.  He lost his balance 
and they rolled on the floor as she squealed, “I love you, Dave MacDonald, and, 
yes, yes, YES!  I will marry you.”

Dave looked up into her tear-filled eyes and said, “I love you, Jennifer Samms.  
I love you with all my heart.”  They kissed passionately and only when they 
heard a small gasp from the hallway did their lips separate.  They glanced up at 
happily excited Heather who dashed off to phone Dave’s mother immediately.  Dave 
flipped the box open and pulled out the ring.  He was still flat on his back as 
he took Jennifer’s left hand and smoothly slid the ring on her finger.  It fit 
perfectly – Heather had told his mother Jennifer’s ring size the previous week.

Jennifer stared down at the ring for a brief moment then looked back into Dave’s 
eyes as tears continued to run from her eyes and drop onto Dave.  “I didn’t 
think you were coming home for another month?  I’ve wanted you to come early but 
I was too afraid to ask because I knew you had a girlfriend and Jana said you 
refused to let her talk about me.  She wanted to find out how you felt about me 
because I realized you are the only man for me.  I knew it last year but 
wouldn’t face it; but when you came home at Christmas and were so nice I finally 
realized I had to have you in my life.  But you said you had moved on and I was 
very disappointed.  When you called me in April I wanted to ask you to come home 
immediately but I couldn’t make you miss the Masters.  I’m so happy your mother 
told you about Mark and me breaking up.”

Dave smiled before he replied, “I know; I was very surprised and pleased.  But I 
was also worried about you.”

Jennifer looked very sheepish.  “What about Anne?”

Dave looked at her sadly.  “Anne is a nice girl but I eventually concluded she 
loved my money and my earning potential more than she did me.  I had already 
realized it was a problem before Mom told me about you but I took some time to 
think about the whole situation before I made a decision.  I didn’t want to rush 
into something without thoroughly considering all options.  That is also why I 
wouldn’t let Jana talk to me about you – the decision had to be mine and mine 
alone.”

“When did you tell Anne?”

“I flew to New Mexico last week after the NCAA Championships.  Anne and I had 
talked on the phone several times since she had left Wake Forest and she knew 
that we were probably going to break up but I had to do it in person.”

Jennifer stared down at the huge diamond.  “This looks to be very expensive.  
You know I don’t need a ring like this.”

Dave took her hand in his and kissed it.  “I know you don’t care about the cost 
but I wanted something very special for you.  You know that I have dreamed of 
being one of the best golfers in the world since I was very young and I think I 
have almost accomplished that.  What you don’t know is that I have dreamed of 
putting a ring on your finger since the first summer we were intimate with each 
other.  This ring shows how important that dream is to me.  I love you, 
Jennifer, and look forward to spending the rest of my life with you.”  He held 
Jennifer in his arms as he hugged her closely – he finally had his soul-mate in 
his life where she belonged.  He finally had his Golfer’s Dream.


--The End--

An epilogue will follow.

That’s the end of Dave’s story.  No more books – no more chapters.

I will post Jennifer’s Terrible Fall within a week and I might do some other 
related short stories later but not before a long break.

Thanks to John for his wonderful help and inspirational thoughts.
Thanks to Patrick for his keen support.
Thanks to Terry for his fantastic type-checking and great suggestions.

And finally thanks to LaMonte who has been with me since word one and has helped 
make this series a wonderful experience for me.  Thank you LaMonte.