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 Noticing Vanessa Based on a true story By Stacy McBride

   Warning If you are Offended by stories Extremely sexual in Nature or
stories about Incest and child sex then DO NOT!  Read any further

   The Names have been changed and many situations exaggerated however this
is a story based on a true story...Last chance to leave

   Chapter 1 (the swimming pool)

   Not much could be said about the day it wasn't a busy day, it was just
one of those days when time seems to slow down and sun never moves from its
spot in the afternoon sky.  Vanessa had been swimming in the pool all
afternoon and why not there was nothing else to do.  All her friends were
gone doing something with there families during the summer vacation and she
was stuck here at her house out in the middle of nowhere.  Vanessa looked
out over the land, you could walk for hours before ever seeing another
house or human.  Vanessa hated that she hated not ever being able to do
anything because she lived so far away and as much as her father worked she
was home alone a lot and was stuck at the house.  Climbing out of the pull
Vanessa wished she was 16 so she could drive, boredom had set in hours a
ago and the 13 year old girl was sick of trying to entertain herself.  As
Vanessa walked around the pool she stopped dead in her wet tracks as she
noticed someone looking at her from the kitchen Window.  Could it be her
dad she thought?  He wasn't supposed to be home until 6pm at it was only 2
in the afternoon..  As Vanessa stood there on the back patio in her two
piece baby blue Bikini fear began to set in.  Had someone broken in to her
house and if they had why were they starring at her now from the kitchen
window.  Vanessa began to walk back thinking of running when all of a
sudden all her fears were melted away when a familiar voice came out of the
kitchen.  "HEY BABY" her father yelled from the kitchen...DAD!!!  Vanessa
yelled "YOU SCARED ME...DON'T DO THAT..GOD!!  Vanessa's dad appeared in the
door way of the kitchen with two Lemon aids in his hands.  "I'm sorry Van
he said I saw you out here swimming and I thought I'd make us a drink. 
Grabbing hold of Vanessa as he walked by he kissed her on the forehead and
said "I didn't mean to scare you" Vanessa took her drink from him and said
"its ok I just couldn't see you through the window" Vanessa's father sat
down on the patio chair what he hadn't told his daughter was what had
happened just a few minuets before she had seen him watching her in the
window.  He had come home early from work, walking in to the house he
called out "VAN I'M HOME BABY GIRL" there was no reply and as he walked
deeper into the house he could hear the sound of splashing water realizing
his daughter must be swimming.  He dropped his gear and walked into the
Kitchen, his heavy black boots thudding on the Kitchen floor.  Standing
there looking now out at the back patio and pool area he saw his little
girl swimming in the pool, she was so beautiful and many times over the
last few months he had began to Notice that Vanessa was no longer a child
she had grown into quit the beautiful teen age girl, her long thin legs
stretching all the way up to her sexy body.  He was amazed how perfect her
body was she had a tiny waist and perfect little breast that barely pushed
off her 13 year old body.  Standing there watching her in nothing but a
tiny baby blue bikini he found himself becoming aroused at the sight of he
gorgeous daughter.  Reaching down and unzipping his pants he reached in a
pulled out his hard cock and began to stroke it while watching his little
girl swimming.  Quickly he began to stoke now imagining his daughter
sucking his cock and imagining her naked.  Oh god he thought she must look
amazing naked.  He closed he eyes for only a second to see the image of his
little girl naked when all of a sudden he heard the water stop splashing,
he quickly opened his eyes and saw his daughter standing on the patio deck
looking at him.  "OH SHIT" he thought to himself could she see him?  Did
she know what her father was doing while watching her?  Looking for any
excuse as to what he was doing he quickly reached into the refrigerator and
grabbed the pitcher of Lemonade and two glasses.  He began to pour two
glasses and then noticed a look of fear on his daughters face.  Putting two
and two together he realized she could not see him she could just see a
dark figure in the window and not expecting him home until 6 she must be
freaking out.  "HEY BABY" he quickly yelled letting his little girl know it
was him and not some rapist ready to attack.  He walked to the Kitchen door
as he listened to his daughter yell at him for scaring her and then passed
her the drink he had made for her while giving her a kiss on the forehead.
In the back of his mind he wished he could grab her little body and pull
her close and kiss her on the lips and maybe even lay her down on the patio
and make love to her, but instead he just walked over and sat down on one
of the patio chairs.

   Chapter 2 (finding the internet secret)

   The next day was just as boring as the day before.  Vanessa had woken up
around 11 and knowing she was home alone walked downstairs in just a pair
of tiny pink panties, she was completely topless but she didn't care she
often walked around naked when she was home alone.  Making her way to the
kitchen she made a small bowl of grape nut cereal, walked into the living
room, turned on the TV...flipping through all the Channels she quickly gave
up her search, nothing was on at 11 O'clock on a Thursday.  Vanessa Decided
her best bet was to get online and see if maybe by some chance any of her
friends were online or maybe had posted some comments or left some messages
on her myspace page.  Vanessa walked up the stairs and into her fathers
room where the computer was, she sat down and clicked the power button. 
Soon the computer came to life and began booting up and within seconds
Vanessa was browsing her email and myspace.  Some of her friends and some
of the boys at her school that liked her had left some stupid comments on
her myspace page and she began to Comment them all back..  DING!!!  All of
a sudden a message popped up from a messenger that Vanessa had not opened.
It must have opened on its own she thought.  DING!!  Another message, the
little icon at the bottom of the screen turn bright orange showing messages
waiting.  Vanessa moved the curser over the top of the Blinking Orange
message light and clicked.  A little chat window opened.  Vanessa read the
messages and was shocked at what they said.  Her father must have a
messenger on here she thought and he must have it set to open when the
computer comes on.  The messages on the screen were from a Chad who said.
"Hi" "So all I could think about was what you told me about your daughter
last night she sounds vary fucking hot.  Vanessa was shocked what had her
father said about her to this guy named Chad.  Reaching out to the home
keys Vanessa began to type a message, curiosity had gotten the best of her
and she pretended to be her dad whose name on line was DadNneed.  Hi she
typed.  And soon Chad was typing back.  Chad: So did you do what we talked
about?  DadNneed: I forgot what did we talk about?
Chad: for real?  Damn you must be burned out haha
DadNneed: haha ya I work a lot
Chat: you said you wanted to fuck your daughter.  That she was driving
you crazy with her sexy body.  Man I can almost see her in the fucking hot
Bikini the way you described her...wow dude you need to fuck her.
Vanessa pulled her hands back from the key board and just starred at the
words on the screen.  Was she really seeing this.  Had her father really
chatted to this man online?  And if so was this for real?  Did her father

really feel this way about her?  Chad: HELLO!!  Vanessa Snapped out of it
and typed back DadNneed: oh ya well I have to go bye.  She turned off the
computer and sat back in her chair, her head spinning from what she had
just learned about her father.

   ...

   They day had grown old and night had began to fall Vanessa had gotten
dressed in a pair of shorts and white t-shirt knowing her father was coming
home soon from work.  ...

   The day was long and he was glad to be home from work, unlocking the
front door and walking into the house he immediately noticed the smell of
chicken and saw his beautiful little girl curled up in her favorite over
stuffed chair watching the latest episode of Hero's.  As he walked through
the door Vanessa Noticed him and smiled" Hi Daddy" she said her sweet voice
soothing his soul and breaking away any bad mood he may have been in.  "Hey
baby girl" he replied smiling at his daughter.  "I made some chicken and
potatoes daddy its still warm if your hungry" ..."OH yes I am starved " he
said ...Vanessa turned back to her TV show and her father went into the
kitchen and made himself a plate of food.  "I'm going to go upstairs and
get some stuff done baby " "OK Daddy" Vanessa said softly with a smile.

   ...

   Vanessa's father Climbed the stairs to his room and turned on his
computer he was in the mood to talk to his friend Chad because tonight was
a very horny night for him and he needed to get it out.  He clicked on the
name Chad in the messenger list and soon the chat window appeared. 
DadNneed: what's up dude
Chad: Yo!  How's it going you feeling better since this morning?
DadNneed: this morning?
Chad: Ya you were acting weird and then you just left..I just thought
you were in a bad mood.
DadNneed: I'm confused
Chad: so was I ..  you were acting like we had never talked before..  I
had to remind you of our conversation last night.
DadNneed: FUCK!!!  I was at work this morning
Chad: what?....oh shit dude then who was I talking to?
DadNneed: my daughter must have gotten on the computer and my messenger
must have opened up..FUCK!!
Chad: oh fuck dude...  I thought it was you and said you wanted to fuck
your daughter..
DadNneed: Dude I've gotta go I have to figure out what Im going to do.
Chad: Dude I'm sorry...  good luck.
Logging off the computer he stood up putting his hands to his head..OK
he thought ..  Vanessa did not act weird when you came home today...ok what
dose that mean?  dose it mean she wants you too?  Or dose it mean she just

doesn't really know what she read?  OH SHIT!! ...he was walking around his
room trying to figure out what to do when all of a sudden a small voice
broke his concentration.  "Daddy?' "Oh Hey baby' he said "are you ok daddy
you look upset" "Umm..  No no im ok baby its just some stuff at work that's
all" "Ok" she said.."well Im going to take a shower do you need to use the
bathroom?" "Umm No..  go ahead" he said.  Vanessa turned and disappeared
around the corner into her room to get her things for her shower.

   Chapter 3 (the best shower ever)

   Vanessa turned on the water stepping back to undress and let the water
warm up before getting in.  Looking at her naked body in the mirror Vanessa
explored her self as she always did during shower time seeing if her breast
had grown any bigger.  After letting the water warm up Vanessa stepped into
the shower let the warm water rush down over her skin.

   ...

   Sitting in his bed room many thoughts were running through his head. 
His daughter was completely naked in the next room taking a shower ..the
girl of his dreams soaping down her sexy body in the next room.  Did she
know that he wanted her?  And if she did why hadn't she said anything? 
Chad was right..  If he was ever going to know he was just going to have to
do it...  if she said no then he would have to deal with it from there...
Standing up he lifted off his shirt and dropped his pants and then his
underwear.  Standing now completely naked in his bed room he prepared to
make the trip into the bathroom..  What would he do he thought when he was
in there??  He didn't know but he knew he had to do it..  He couldn't take
it anymore.

   ...

   The water was warm as Vanessa took her time washing the soap off of her
tiny body.  All of a sudden Vanessa felt a cold breeze and knew the
bathroom door had been opened.  "Dad?" she said out loud.  "Ya Baby its me"
he said.  "what are you doing" ...no reply came from her father..  Knowing
that her father was still in the bathroom the conversation with her fathers
friend Chad came to mind.  Was this it?  Was her father here in the
bathroom with her to try and have sex with her?  She had always thought of
her father as an attractive man but it wasn't until today that she started
to see him as more then just her father.  After the conversation with Chad
Vanessa thought about it for a long time.  Her father was very young only
30 year old since he had gotten her mom pregnant when he was very young. 
He was very cute and strong and after thinking about it Vanessa finally
agreed with herself that her father was sexy..  But could she have sex with
him?  "DAD?" Vanessa said again.  All of a sudden the shower curtain was
pulled aside, Vanessa turned around quickly her eyes wide at what she was
seeing.  Her father stood before her completely naked his cock throbbing
hard.  He reached in and turned off the water to the shower and then he
grabbed Vanessa with a strong hand and gently helped her out of the shower,
her tiny little body dripping wet.  Vanessa couldn't take her eyes off her
fathers cock..  He was gorgeous ..his whole body tight and strong.  She had
never seen her father naked before and she could not believe how big his
cock was.  Vanessa now stood face to face with her father both she and he
completely naked.  Leaning in her father Gently kissed her on the lips and
softly whispered only 12 little words that Vanessa knew she would never
forget "all you have to do is say no and I will stop" Vanessa just looked
into her fathers loving eyes a strange desire began to burn inside of her
as she stood there naked with her father.  Gently her father raised his
hand and began softly rubbing her face, his hands feeling so good on her
skin.  Once again her father leaned in and began to kiss her gently,
sucking on her tongue and her lower lip.  Vanessa's heart began to race as
her fathers lips went to her chin and then to her neck softly sucking while
his hands began to explore her young body.  His lips felt so good against
her hot skin, his tongue tickling her as he made his way to her tiny
breasts and slowly began swirling his tongue around her nipples.  Instantly
Vanessa began breathing harder, her nipples hard now in her father mouths.
No one had ever touched her this way or sucked on her nipples and her head
began to swim in pleasure.  Vanessa took in a quick breath of shock as her
fathers strong hands made there way down to top of her hairless mound.  The
feeling of a man's hands in that area was alien to Vanessa and now as her
father began to gently rub her mound softly spreading her lips and gently
rubbing her tiny clit for the first time Vanessa began to feel so horny,
she burned inside with desire all she wanted was more of this wonderful
feeling that her father was giving her.  Vanessa's Father kissed and licked
her little body all the way down her tight little body and soon he was on
his knees in front of her his lips now just above Vanessa's tiny pussy
where his hands still worked on her now swollen clit.  All of sudden the
warm wonderful feeling of her fathers lips touched the top of her pussy. 
She closed her eyes and she felt her fathers tongue begin licking her pussy
lips ..  It felt so good and then all of a sudden Vanessa's eyes opened
wide and her body straightened up as she took in a deep long breath, her
fathers lips had made there way to her tiny swollen click where he was now
gently sucking ..  Vanessa's legs began to shake and she had to grab onto
the bathroom sink to support herself as her father sucked and licked her
little pussy.  Breathing hard and rubbing her fingers through her fathers
dark hair..  Vanessa began to softly moan as intense pleasure was building
up in her little pussy.  Her fathers tongue feeling so good slipping in and
out of her little slit and then back to her clit as he used his strong
fingers to gently fucked her tiny wet pussy.  After a few minuets Vanessa
Screamed out,"OH GOD DADDY"!!  she couldn't take it anymore the pleasure
was to much and she began to cum hard.  Her father sucking her tiny clit
even harder now excited to hear is little girl screaming his name in
pleasure.  Her little body began pushing and wiggling violently as she had
her first real orgasm, her father having to hold her little hips tight so
he could continue eating his little girls pussy.  Vanessa continued
wiggling and moaning as wave after wave of of pleasure surged through her
young body..soon she began to calm down.  And her father stood up licking
all the way up her body until he was once again face to face with his
little girl kissing her passionately.  Vanessa still breathing hard rubbed
her fingers through her fathers hair and whispered in a shaky voice into
her father ear..  "I love you daddy" Her father now wild with lust for his
little girl looked into her eyes and said" I love you to baby I want you so
bad" .."ok daddy" she said ..  With that he grabbed her tiny little hips
and turned Vanessa around so she was facing the sink and he was standing
behind her.  Vanessa looked into the mirror over the sink and smiled at her
father.  Her fathers strong hands now rubbing her little body as he began
to kiss her neck and shoulders gently.  Reaching out Vanessa's father
pushed her forward gently bending her little body over the bathroom sink.
Vanessa looked behind her and saw her father's Raging hard cock and she
knew she was about to be fucked for the first time.  Excitement surged
through Vanessa's little body she could feel the head of her fathers
swollen cock rubbing up and down her pussy slit she was so horny now all
she wanted was her father's huge cock deep inside of her.  Vanessa's father
firmly yet gently grabbed her from behind holding her in place.  Vanessa
felt the head of her fathers cock spread her soft pussy lips apart.  Her
father bending over to kiss her neck and suck her tiny ear lobes ...and
then all of a sudden she felt it..  Her fathers cock pushed hard into his
little girls pussy one thrust...  two thrusts ..and on the third thrust her
father was inside of her busting her cherry.  Vanessa squeezed her eyes and
gripped the handles of the sink.  She could feel her 13 year old pussy
stretched to the max around her father throbbing hard cock.  Pain surged
through her young body as her father cock pushed deeper and deeper into her
tiny pussy.  Vanessa Bit her lower lip, her father pushed deeper into her
body as he kissed her neck and sucked on her ears from behind her.  Soon he
started to slowly push and pull his cock gently in and out of his little
girls pussy.  The tightness of her pussy around his cock was overwhelming,
the taste of her young skin the feel of her warm pussy, her tiny body
underneath him sending him into a state of ecstasy.  In only a few moments
the pain began to subside and Vanessa relaxed allowing her fathers huge
cock to fuck her freely.  Soon her father was sliding the length of his
hard wet shaft faster and faster in and out of his daughters tight pussy.
Vanessa held tight to the knobs on the sink as her father fucked her young
pussy for the first time she was holding herself up on her tip toes so her
father could better fuck her pussy and soon Vanessa began to push back
against her fathers hard thrusts.  She could feel her fathers cock deep
inside her ramming her young pussy.  His cock felt so good sliding in and
out of her little fuck hole and Vanessa began to whine and moan feeling her
fathers lips sucking her neck, his strong hands now playing with her hard
nipples gently squeezing them and rubbing them.  Vanessa could feel every
inch of his huge cock deep inside of her thrusting deeper and deeper ..soon
it became to much to handle and soon Vanessa was softly calling to her
father in pleasure.  "DADDY!!  OH DADDY!!  IT FEELS SO GOOD! Vanessa could
not believe how good it felt to get fucked and being fucked by her father
made it even better.  Her little pussy ached with pleasure as her father
continued to slam it from behind.  She and her father moved in perfect
rhythm together as her pussy tightly wrapped around her fathers hard cock
slid up and down his shaft.  Her fathers shaft now wet covered in his
daughters sex juices making it easier for him to fuck his little girl.. 
They both moaned and called out each others names in passion as there
sweaty bodies pushed hard against each other sending hear fathers hard
throbbing cock deeper and deeper into her 13 year old fuck hole.  Both
breathing hard now steaming up the mirror over the bathroom sink.  Vanessa
now white knuckled as she gripped the knobs of the bathroom sink that she
was bent over, her father fucking her so fast and hard from behind. 
Extreme intense pleasure was built up and Vanessa could not stand it
anymore..  Her little body began to shake as waves of sexual pleasure
filled her young body.  Vanessa screamed out as the pleasure turned into an
intense hard orgasm.  "OH SHIT!!  OH FUCK!!  DADDY!!  DADDY!!  DADDY!! Her
father behind her feeling his little girls body wiggling and pushing as she
began to scream in pleasure as his little girls orgasm became more and more
intense ..  At that moment he too let himself go...  yelling out in
pleasure to his daughter "OH BABY..OH FUCK YES...VANESSA BABY IM CUMMING IN
YOU!! Vanessa in the middle of her orgasm could feel her fathers throbbing
shaft inside her filling her with his hot cum as he thrust harder and
harder.  She loved hearing her father scream out her name in ecstasy while
he filled her up with his cum.  In just a few short moments the rhythm
slowed as both Vanessa and her father finished cumming and soon her father
was collapsed over her back kissing her neck and back as he released the
last bit of cum from his cock into his little girls pussy.  Soon it was
done and both Vanessa and her father still joined together tried to catch
there breath.  Vanessa moaned again as her father pulled his cock out of
her tender pussy.  No longer a virgin she turned around and looked into her
fathers loving eyes.  Vanessa's father reached out and pulled his daughter
to him kissing her gently.  They stood there together naked there bodies up
against eachother as one Vanessa wrapped in her fathers strong arms. 
Neither of them said a word they just stood there wrapped in each other
love.
   Questions or comments please email me at Stacymcbride91@yahoo.com