The Consummation 
	by Paco Andante
	Genre: fantasy
	Prompt: abandoned temple
	Word count: 3504
	Synopsis: Unexpected assistance is found by an elf and a girl in an 
		abandoned temple. 

The moon hung like a ripe orange in the cloudless sky. Despite its 
red-orange hue, it cast a silver light over the rolling, grassy 
countryside. Two figures on horseback provided the only movement on the 
placid scene. On close inspection, one might notice that the horse had 
neither bridle nor saddle; only a blanket was cast over its back under 
the riders. Elvin horses do not require such mundane items as those, 
for they follow their rider's wishes almost as though they read minds. 
Perhaps they do. 

Such close inspection would also disclose that the rider in front was 
indeed an elf. Tall, slender in the extreme, with long, pointed ears 
and with silver hair – or perhaps that was the effect of the 
moonlight. He was dressed in a loose-fitting white shirt and tight 
leather trousers of indeterminate color. He sat the horse with an air 

Pudgy only by contrast to the elf, although indeed full-bosomed, the 
figure behind him had her arms wrapped tightly about his waist, mashing 
said bosoms against his back. Her brown hair was long, and the 
occasional gust of light breeze lifted it, disclosing that, in contrast 
to the elf, her ears were not pointed. Her long, well-formed legs were 
bare below her knees, as were the slender arms with which she held onto 
him. Her striped skirt that would normally billow about her was tightly 
stretched as she rode astride behind the elf, and her peasant blouse 
fluttered behind her in the warm breeze. 

It was not the first time that they had ridden out thus, evading elvish 
curiosity and displeasure as well as her human father's pitchfork 
reinforced wrath. But this time they rode with determination in their 
hearts as well as the fire in their loins that had fueled their past 
trysting. 

The riders topped a minor ridge, and in the glen just ahead sat a squat 
building. The stone walls, bleached by the argent light, were thick 
with tapestries of ivy vines, appearing black in the moonlight, falling 
like a maiden's dark hair over her pallid cheekbones.  As the travelers 
approached,  the neglected look of the place conveyed to them its years 
of abandoned, overlooked existence. Yet the walls stood solid and the 
roof staunchly defended the interior from the ravages of rain and 
weather. Once there had been trimmed gardens about the place, but now 

“Is this the place?” she asked, incredulity in her voice, as they 
drew up beside the uninhabited structure. 

“Don't judge a book by it's cover, Melissa,” he responded, “or a 
temple by the activity in it – or the lack thereof.” 

He slid off their mount, then assisted her off. Then he whispered words 
in the elven language into the horse's ear. The animal wuffled and 
walked a few paces away and began to graze. The two-legged pair walked 
hand-in-hand toward the shadows of the building. In those shadows, 
discernible only by light reflected from the formerly elegant 
curtilage, were twin doors of heavy, carven, dark wood. They were 
tightly shut. Melissa tried the door.

“Oh, hey,” he said. “Just hold on a minute. Maybe it's just 
stuck. This place hasn't been used in years.” 

But the doors remained stubbornly closed in spite of their combined 
efforts. Gamolas traced the carvings on the door with a finger, but 
shook his head, unable to make them out. He took the girl's arm and 
stepped back two paces into the moonlight. He gestured at the moon and 
muttered several elvish phrases, summoning elf-light to come forth. It 
seemed to come out of the ground on which they stood, from the cracked 
walkway, and even the walls themselves.  

He stepped closer to the doors and read the inscription. “God opens 
all portals,” he translated for her. “I don't understand. Does this 
help us get in?”  

They stood a long moment, thinking, before the girl asked, “In what 
language are those runes written?” 

“Ancient Multamian.” 

“And what was the name, in Multamian, of the god that was worshiped 
here?” 

“Uh, Bogomar.” 

The doors creaked, groaned and unsealed themselves, opening just a 
narrow gap, and with the slightest effort, the pair opened them. They 
stepped inside. Although they expected the air to be heavy with age, 
mildew and the dust of years, the air was clear, cool and sweet in 
their nostrils. But it was totally dark. The elf-light Gamolas had 
summoned remained outside, and the doors shut themselves behind them. 

“Sorry about the dark,” Gamolas whispered, “there is no moonlight 
in here to weave into elf-light.” 

“Uh, so what now?” Melissa asked, her voice hushed in the darkness. 

Apparently triggered by the sound of their voices, or perhaps by the 
opening or closing of the doors, an eerie red glow began; a light that 
seemed to emanate from behind the altar, an altar that stood far down 
the end of the huge room. By its brightening glow, they discerned row 
upon row of high-backed benches, arranged in two units about a central 
aisle. A double row of chandeliers, festooned with the remains of many 
candles, unlit and dark, hung over the seats from the vaulted ceiling, 
twenty feet tall at the center, and no less than fifteen at their 
juncture with the unadorned walls. 

“Hey! How did that light come on?” she said, grabbing his hand. Her 
voice reverberated in the empty space. 

He shrugged. “We came here to check the place out,” he said, “so, 
let's check the place out.” 

They walked down the aisle toward the altar, hand-in-hand. That object 
resembled a massive low table, apparently made of some kind of stone. 
It was covered with a cloth that might have been white, but took on the 
color of the red light. Strange symbols, perhaps words in a language 
all but forgotten, were embroidered in its thick material. 

“Inside the temple, it looks too well kept to be abandoned,” 
Melissa observed. 

As she spoke, a figure appeared behind the altar. It did not simply pop 
into existence, or rush onto the scene from some hidden alcove; it just 
seemed to melt into being. It was taller even than the elf, gaunt in 
appearance, its noseless face dominated by huge eyes. There was no hair 
on its head to conceal its saucer shaped ears. It wore a robe that 
covered it from its narrow shoulders down to the ground. Its entire 
appearance was an almost ghostly white, as though it were composed of 
fog or smoke, although, once it had come into being, it had every 
manifestation of being very solid. 

“Abandoned, yes,” the figure intoned in a hollow voice, “for a 
very long time, here has come no one.” 

“What the Hell are you?” Gamolas exclaimed in shock as Melissa 
stifled a scream. 

“Be frightened not,” the figure said. “Keeper here am I, Silmané 
by name. One of the First-born am I. Many, now we are not. Even older 
folk than elves we are, many aeons older than your people, Melissa.” 

“You know my name!” she exclaimed. 

“Surprised not be,” he responded. “Many things do I know.”  

“How?” the elf asked.

“Business of yours it is not, Gamolas,” Silmané gently replied. 

Thinking him rude, they turned to leave. 

The Keeper called, “Marry Gamolas you wish, Melissa, but because he 
is elf, your father forbids. Disapprove also do his elven folk.” 

They turned back to him, their interest rekindled. 

“A shaman to marry you, you hoped to find. A Temple for the ceremony, 
also. This one, you hoped.” 

“Yes,” Melissa breathed. 

“Among elven folk, no willing shaman will you find. Not of her tribe, 
but human, perhaps you will. Then do, after you are wed, what will you? 
Never agree, will father of Melissa. Shun you, humans will. Stay among 
them, also elves will allow not. Live, how will you?” he asked. 

“We'll manage, somehow!” they both asserted. 

The strange one said, “Your wildest dreams fulfill, can I, for Keeper 
am I. Performing of marriage I am able. Many things I am able.” The 
strange one laughed, a sound both comforting and chilling at the same 
time. “Provide for you, Bogomar in his Temple will. Care for it, 
worship in it, he only asks. The Temple, inside, care for I have. The 
grounds, can I tend not. Yours to do, this will be. Within the Temple, 
in return, a place for you to live will be. Pleasant rooms in back, 
there are. Provided, food and all needs will be. Children have and 
raise can you. Marry you, I will.”  

“When?” Gamolas asked. 

“Now,” was the curt answer. 

“What do you ask in return for marrying us?” he asked. 

“Agreement to the terms, only.” 

“There must be a catch,” Melissa said.  

There was a moment's hesitation, the semblance of a grin grew on the 
strange face of the Keeper, then he intoned, “One small thing only. A 
trivial thing. You would wish anyway, this thing.” 

“Well, what is it?” she asked. 

“Old style, according to ways of Bogomar, wedding is to be.” 

“And what does that entail?” Gamolas asked. 

“Consummate ceremony, immediately you shall, here, on the altar.” 

“Is he saying what I think he's saying?” Melissa asked the elf. 

“I think he means we are to screw right here. Right after the 
ceremony, or as part of it.” 

“On the alter?” her voice trembled with incredulity. 

“True, it is,” Silmané smiled. The expression was clearly meant to 
comfort or disarm, but its look was rather grotesque on the strange 
visage of the Keeper. It underscored the fact that he was neither human 
nor elf. 

Melissa shuddered at the facial expression. “I don't know about 
this!” she argued.  “I don't want to be some pervert's fantasy!” 

“Pervert? But, he's not elvish. Or human, either,” Gamolas 
riposted. “And think! He's right about nobody wanting us around. Your 
people won't accept us; my people don't want us. He promised to welcome 
us. I won't mind being a groundskeeper.” 

“But... I love and want you so much, but with him watching? You are 
expecting to watch, aren't you?” 

“Decree, Bogomas does, that witness there must be. Watching I will, 
of course. Participate I will not.” 

“Sensible. Let's do it!” Gamolas exclaimed, hugging the girl. 

“Wha... what about Gamolas' horse?” she temporized. 

Silmané calmed her. “Gamolas' horse it is not. Father of Gamolas, 
owner is. Back to father's stable, horse will go. Worry do not. Safe 
will be horse.” 

After some discussion, at last the couple agreed. True to his word, 
Silmané set about creating a beautiful setting, summoning many flowers 
about the sacristy, the fresh fragrance of them wafted throughout the 
Temple hall. He also magically transformed their ordinary clothing into 
ceremonial robes. He replaced the reddish light with silver and blue. 
When all was in readiness, the Keeper had them stand before the altar 
side by side as he intoned strange-sounding words in the Multamian 
language, which he translated into Common Tongue for the couple. Words 
which affirmed vows to each other much as in any wedding ceremony among 
any people. But rather than an exchange of rings as was the custom in 
Melissa's folk, or of bracelets as in Gamolas', or even a ceremonial 
kiss, the Keeper said, “Undress her now, you will.” 

The elf lifted her robe over her head, baring her beautiful body. Her 
pert, full breasts peered among locks of long, brown hair that fell 
over her shoulders. Her wide hips contrasted sharply with her narrow 
waist. Her well-formed legs swept up from her dainty feet to the 
heart-shaped twin prominences of her dimpled buttocks. To spite her 
dictatorial father, and in order more to resemble an elf, she had 
shaved all of her body hair, even though it was normally sparse. Her 
meaty pussy flesh was therefore exposed, and there was nothing to 
conceal the intricate frills of her protruding inner lips. 

In short, she was a vision that men, and at least one elf, would 
worship. Gamolas stood as though transfixed. His adoration of her was 
obvious, even without the stirring under his robe. Melissa smiled. If 
she had seemed reluctant before, it now seemed as though her 
inhibitions had left her. She ignored the presence of the strange 
Keeper and basked in the attentive gaze that Gamolas raked over her. 
The elf raised his arms to grasp and enfold her pulchritude, but 
Silmané instructed him to wait. 

Addressing Melissa, the Keeper said, “Your turn, now, it is. Robe, 
from his body, now remove.” 

Rather than draw the robe over his head as the elf had done to hers, 
Melissa stepped close and undid the short row of buttons at the neck, 
then drew the robe down from his shoulders. She drew the cloth slowly 
down his very thin frame, and knelt to remove it from around his 
ankles. 

“Oh!” she exclaimed at the rather thick object throbbing a mere few 
inches from her nose. Though she had felt his member through layers of 
clothing in the past, seeing it rampantly revealed, and bobbing up and 
down so close to her face, garnered a feeling of awe. And the 
generously filled pouch that hung below it redoubled her wonder.  

“Pleased, you are with what you see?” the Keeper asked her. 

“Oh, yes!” 

“Husband, yours now, he is. Wife, now, she is. Do with each other 
what would you like.” 

She grinned, and with a sparkle in her eye, without replying, she 
kissed the tip of the rampant object that throbbed before her. The elf 
quivered in delight. She took it in her hands and dragged her full 
lips, open mouthed, over the underside of the head. She stuck out her 
tongue and licked it from root to tip. Gamolas groaned. Looking up and 
into his eyes, she opened her mouth and took into it the bulbous head, 
then drew her lips over it as she slowly withdrew. The elf gasped and 
ran his fingers through her hair as she repeated. She giggled slightly, 
then slid about half of his length into her warm, wet mouth. 

“Ah!” the elf grunted. 

“Mmm,” Melissa hummed. 

For a while, Gamolas stood, trembling, as the girl's head bobbed back 
and forth, alternately engulfing and retreating; at each retreat her 
tongue wiped the under-surface of the glans. But then, unable to stand 
any more, he took her up and placed her on the altar. He laid her down 
on her back, her knees and calves spread to each side of it, and dove 
his head down between her thighs while his hands grasped and kneaded 
her ample breasts. 

She moaned as his tongue swiped gently between her nether lips. His 
gentle ministrations quickly became furious, and soon he was feasting 
on her quim as though he were a starved elf. Far from objecting or 
pushing him away, Melissa became thoroughly lost in the sensations 
coursing through her young body. Her head began to toss from side to 
side, she made little mewling sounds between her panting breaths and 
her legs began to twitch. 

Her body stiffened, her breath caught, she lifted her ass from the 
altar, and her belly muscles hitched in a spastic rhythm as she 
experienced a massive orgasm. Gamolas continued his work, though gently 
as he had at first, drawing the event out until her spasms ceased. 

His face wet with her copious fluid and his saliva, he crawled up onto 
the altar and mounted her. She welcomed him, drawing her knees up and 
wrapping her calves behind his legs. She grasped his shaft in one hand, 
aiming him at her wet and ready core, and he made one grand thrust. Her 
eyes flew wide open, a little cry of “Oh!” and they were joined. 

“Are you alright?” he asked, basking in the warm, pulsing wetness 
enveloping his manhood- er, elfhood. 

“Just hold still a moment. I think I need to get used to it. I feel 
so.. so full!” she whispered, wrapping her legs even more tightly 
around him. 

Gamolas was transported. All the evenings of sneaking, evading her 
father's detection and stealing away from his own people were over. The 
frustrating times of groping in darkness or at best in moonlight; the 
passionate kissing, the tentative touching, first through clothes then 
daringly under them, were at an end. He was lying naked atop her 
nakedness, his cock firmly within her, feeling every twitch and pulse 
of her warm, wet vagina. Despite the urge to pump, he was content to be 
still in such circumstance. 

“Please move, now,” she urged, not a moment too soon, for his own 
need to go had reached the breaking point. 

And go he did. He slid out, all the way out, then reentered, slowly, a 
millimeter at a time, until he was once more buried entirely. She 
groaned, not in pain but in blissfulness. He retreated once more, but 
not as far, before burying himself again. Then again and again, 
increasing in tempo in an easy accelerando, Melissa meeting his every 
thrust with eager undulations of her own. For some time the only sound 
in the temple was the squelching of his elvish cock sliding in and out 
of her very wet tunnel. 

In due course, she clutched at him with her arms as well as her legs, 
holding him tightly against her, his member fully within her, as she 
precipitously went over the edge once more. He paused and the elf was 
treated to the incredibly stirring sensations of her tight, muscular 
tunnel's spasmodic constricting and releasing of his deeply planted 
member, which itself was throbbing with fervent need as she cried out.  


Yet, Gamolas did not explode. When Melissa's spasms lessened and she 
eased her clutching, he resumed his grinding motions. 

“Wait,” she wailed, his thrusting making it a two syllable word, 
“let me be on top for a bit.” 

The elf grinned, “of course,” stopped his humping and pulled out of 
her. They rearranged themselves. The elf lay on his back on the altar 
cloth, and the girl moved astride him. He reached up and fondled her 
titillating tits as they hung over him. She took his appendage in hand 
as is stood up between them, aimed it and sat down, impaling herself 
slowly but completely on it. It was Gamolas' turn to moan. He raised 
his head to view the juncture of their bodies; how her wide-spread lips 
hugged the root of his organ, how the shaft of it disappeared into her 
depths. She bent to see it as well, her hair cascading down over his 
arms. She smiled as she began a slow, sensuous, wave-like motion. 

“I love your big cock in me,” she told him, her passions overcoming 
her. 

“I love it in you, too!” he replied. “You feel so good!” 

“I want it everywhere!” she cried, her emotions becoming more 
frenzied as did her motion. “Oh, god! I'm coming again!” 

“Bogomar, you mean,” Silmané whispered, though they didn't hear 
it. 

She collapsed onto him, tightly clenching his pole in her body as she 
shuddered uncontrollably. 

“Everywhere?” he asked when she stopped quivering. 

“Mmm,” was all she said. 

She seemed as pliable as putty as he guided her onto her knees on the 
altar and he got up behind her. She put her head down on her folded 
hands, raising her plump, round rump into the air. Both elf and Keeper 
gasped at the sight. But it was the elf whose dick lay wetly in the 
valley of that rear, its reddened shaft and nearly purple head dripping 
with her emissions; his cock whose head probed at her tight, back hole. 

“Oh!” she erupted as the bulbous arrow-point penetrated the little 
ring. “Wait!” 

But he didn't. “Ah!” she moaned as that object, lubricated by her 
copious liquid, slithered deeply into her rectum. 

“Still OK?” he asked. 

Wide-eyed with surprise, she said, “I don't know! I feel so full! But 
don't stop. Oh, god, don't stop!” 

In a bit, out a bit, then in a little more, he advanced until his balls 
pressed against her pussy, his shaft no longer visible, buried deep in 
her bowels.  He retreated, only to plunge deeply once more. And once 
more, over and over, pounding his body against hers. She began a 
protracted wail, not of pain, but of unbridled ecstasy, and soon he was 
grunting as well. Her fist clenched, bunching up a handful of the 
altar-cloth as her other hand found and massaged her clitoris. With a 
huge gasp, her insides clenched on him as she exploded, the 
constrictions driving him over the brink as well. Gush after spurt 
after jet of elf-seed erupted in the human girl's gut as the two filled 
the temple with their cries of mutual release.   

They collapsed together, still joined, his shaft not yet deflated, 
their panting and sweating bodies heaped on the altar.  Silmané, his 
grin nearly splitting his face, intoned, “Elf and wife, I now 
pronounce you. Well shall you live!”