Nerve Endings - 18
by DeeDee18 (deedeeo18@hotmail.com)

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My parents give me the best birthday present a young 
girl could want. (FFf, inc, orgy)

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Authors note: To my kind friends who have e mailed me 
to say they love my stories, many thanks! I thought for 
a change I would try something a little different. The 
following story will be all conversation, with no 
narrative. Let me know what you think.

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The Birthday Surprise:

"Good morning, Mom, what's for breakfast?" 

"How would you like your usual toast for your girlish 
figure?"

"No teasing before breakfast, Mom!"

"Well, I'm just quoting you, so don't get all fired 
up."

"Okay, toast is good."

"Hi, Dad. How's it going?"

"I'm fine, Honey. You look yummy as usual."

"Come closer, Dad, I want to whisper something in your 
ear."

"Okay. How's this?"

"Want to fuck me?"

"Jan! Not in front of your mother!"

"She can't hear me with my tongue in your ear. Besides, 
she is busy getting my toast, so she isn't even looking 
this way."

"So how about it? Do you want to fuck your cute little 
underage daughter again? Hunh?"

"Jan! You're making things hard on me, if you get my 
drift." 

"Hmmm! I see what you mean! Wouldn't want to stick that 
thing up my little pink cunt, would you?"

"God, honey, quit with the dirty talk, or I'll rip that 
robe off, and rape you right here on the kitchen 
table."

"Ooooo! Nasty Daddy! Want to see how wet you're making 
me? Look down here, between the open folds of my robe, 
under the table."

"God, you're so wet! Lucky you have that robe on, or 
that chair would be really slippery about now."

"Oh, God! I think I'm going to cum, Daddy! Oh, yess! I 
can feel the orgasm starting! Oh, God! Here it is! Unh, 
unh, unh, unh, aaargh!"

"Shhhh! Quick! Give me a kiss, so I can muffle your 
panting and groaning. Uh, oh! Mom is looking this way, 
and I think she knows what just happened to you. She's 
all hot and bothered. Look at her nipples standing up 
under that thin housedress!"

"Daddy, I'm so horny! And there is a wet spot now on 
your lap. Did you cum in your pants, Dad?" "

"Oh, shit! I must have dumped a gallon of cum, while I 
was looking down your half open robe at your puffy pink 
nipples."

"Okay, I'll cool it for now, but I'll be bugging you 
again, soon."

"God, Jan! Take your tongue out of my ear! You're 
driving me crazy!"

"Sorry, Dad. --- Not!"

**

"Jan, your father and I would like to give you a 
special treat for your birthday."

"Really? Cool! What is it?"

"You and I are going to a club downtown that features 
nude dancers."

"Mom! I can't go to one of those places! I'm underage!"

"Well, this time you get to. I have a dear lady friend 
who owns the place, and she said you can come, if you 
dress up to look like you're older."

"That sounds really cool, Mom, how soon do we have to 
be there?"

"She said to come by around seven this evening. She'll 
meet us at the door, so her man won't question you, or 
ask for an I. D."

"Wild! Can Angie come, too?"

"No. Angie will still be at her folks tonight, so we'll 
have to go alone, okay?"

"Yeah, I guess. Angie would love it though."

"Yes, I know. You both get off on naked ladies, don't 
you?"

"Mom, that's no way to talk to your daughter! And wipe 
that silly grin off your face, Dad!"

"Sorry, sweetie, just remembered mom telling me about 
your Aunt Kay's visit." 

"Mom! What did you tell him?"

"Just that you and Angie were eating her with your 
eyes when she was sitting on the couch with you two, 
wearing that thin, short robe, which kept falling open. 
You were drooling all over her."

"It's all right, honey. I would have been doing the 
same thing if I had been here."

"Dad! Not your wife's sister! Mom, did you hear what he 
just said?"

"Yes, I heard, and he better keep that thing in his 
pants, if she ever comes over here when he's home!"

"She got you there, Dad!"

"Shut up, Jan!"

*** 

"Mom. It's almost six o'clock. Hadn't we better get 
dressed to go?"

"You're right. Come in here, and I'll help you with 
your makeup."

"Mom, if I wear my hair up in a pile on my head I'll 
look ten years older."

"Let's see. You know, you're right. God, you are really 
beautiful tonight in that little see through chemise I 
got for you the other day! Your nipples really hold it 
up well."

"Now stop that, mom! I'm your daughter, you know."

"Sorry, honey, I can't take my eyes off your breasts 
when they swell, like they are doing now."

"Stop, mom, you're making me wet!"

"Wait till you see the show my friend has prepared in 
your honor. You'll need a bucket under your seat!"

"Mom! Okay, what about panties or bra?"

"Not tonight, Jan. You look great just with that silky 
little number over your cute little naked body."

"I'm panting and gasping now, Mom, what more do you 
want?"

"Fingering you out by the pool would be nice."

"You've already done that, remember?"

"That doesn't stop me from wanting more. But you're 
right, I shouldn't be thinking like that. I'm sorry."

"It's okay, Mom, really. Come give me a hug."

"Oh, God, Jan, your hard nipples are rubbing mine 
through my dress! Now I'm getting wet!"

"I know, Mom, when I move back and forth it feels 
better, hunh?"

"Stop that! We'll both come in a minute."

"Okay, spoilsport, let's go."

*** 

"The Kitty Katt Club? This is where we're going? I've 
heard about this place from the older boys at school. 
It's where all the pervs come to get lap dances, and 
cum in their pants."

"Kitty said it is a high class bar and showplace, and I 
believe her. She wouldn't invite us if it wasn't. Here 
she comes, now, so be polite, okay?"

"Hi, Jan. Hi, Marge. Don't you two look divine? I'm 
Kitty, and I'm so glad you could come tonight. I think 
you will love the show."

"I'm pleased to meet you. Mom has been raving about you 
and this club. But she forgot to tell me you were drop 
dead beautiful. Wow, that dress is almost as revealing 
as mine!"

"Here, let me take your coat, honey. Oh my God! What an 
adorable little creature you are! Your mom didn't do 
you justice. Ummmm. Am I right that you aren't wearing 
anything under that little silk thing you have on?"

"Yes, and I'm a little embarrassed, since it's so 
short, and cut so low, on the back and sides."

"Come on, it looks great!"

"Here we go. Let's sit at this special 'birthday girl' 
table right in front of the stage. That way you can see 
all the action, close up."

"Wow, Mom, look! We're practically on the stage. This 
is way cool! But looking around I don't see anybody but 
guys. Are we safe, here?"

"See those two big, good looking studs by the door? 
They are my boys, and better protection would be hard 
to come by. They'll see that no harm comes to you, so 
relax and enjoy your mom's little treat."

"Okay. It's really nice of you to do this for me. Can I 
kiss you to thank you?"

"Sure! Lean over here. Umm, that feels nice. But you're 
shaking honey. Are you alright?"

"Unh, unh, unh, oh God!"

"Jan, did you just cum?"

"Yesss, your lips felt so sweet! Didn't Mom tell you 
about my nerve endings?"

"Yes, but I never imagined you could come so easily! 
Have you always been so lucky?"

"Yes, but sometimes it is kind of embarrassing."

"Well, I think it's fantastic! Can I rest my hand on 
your leg? Will that bother you too much?"

"Ohmigod! Your touch just shot electricity through my 
body! Hold my hand, tight! Oh! Oh! Oh! Aaaargh!"

"You better hold her other leg, Marge, or she may leap 
up off the chair!"

"Yes, please, Mom! I'm so hot!"

"Well, let this girl on the stage take your mind off 
that. Do you think her dancing on that pole is sexy?"

"Oh, God, yesss! Is she really doing what I think she 
is?"

"She's fucking the pole, if that's what you're asking. 
See her cunt lips on each side? She does that so her 
clit is pressed hard against the steel. It will make 
her cum any minute now."

"Ohmigod! She just did! I can see her cunt juices 
running down the pole! She is so hot, with her long 
black hair and those big breasts! And those big nipples 
remind me of my Aunt Kay."

"Honey,that is your Aunt Kay. She flew in tonight just 
to put on this show for you!"

"Really? But what about her hair?"

"She dyed it just for you, so you wouldn't recognize 
her right away. Looks like it worked, judging from your 
mouth hanging down to the floor, and your tongue 
hanging out."

"Who's the young girl that just came out? She's so 
cute!"

"She's your lap dance for tonight."

"You're kidding, right?"

"Ask her yourself. Here she comes."

"Hi! I'm your lap dance, honey, to celebrate your 
sixteenth birthday!"

" And while I do that, your Aunt will finger fuck me, 
and pull on my nipples, right in front of your face."

"Hi, Jan. Happy Birthday! I love you."

"I love you too, Aunt Kay. God, you look good enough to 
eat!"

"Later, honey. Right now, spread your legs, and pull 
your short silk skirt up, so my little friend here can 
rub her pretty blonde bush all over your swollen little 
cunt lips. Kitty, why don't you and Marge pull her 
legs wide open? There! Hold them, while we fuck her 
adorable little clit."


"Oh, God, Mom! You and Kitty are pulling my cunt lips 
so wide that I can feel the air blowing up my cunt. Rub 
my clit harder, oh please, harder! Harder! Faster! 
Faster! Oh, oh, oh, oh, I'm cumming, I'm cumming!"

"Hold on tight, Kitty, she's thrashing all over the 
place, and her cunt is leaking puddles on the chair! 
I'm having trouble holding her other leg! She's bucking 
so hard!"

"Look! Her head is hanging back over her chair! Some 
guy just stood up behind her! Oh God, he's got his 
penis out, and he's trying to insert it in her mouth! 
Oh, shit! I'm cumming now, too!"

"Help me rip that dress off her!"

"Here, I'll do that! I don't want that expensive 
chemise I bought her ruined. I got it! Aren't her rigid 
nipples fantastic? Look at all the little bumps on her 
skin!"

"What a hot little daughter you have! I could use her 
here in my club."

"Kay, push your little blonde helper's cunt harder 
against Jan's clit. Push her down, so her nipples rub 
against those little pink cones. That's it! Look! They 
are getting even harder and longer! Pull hard! Yess!"

"Umph! Umph! Umph! Umph! Umph! Oh God! His penis tastes 
so good! I love sucking big cocks!"

"I hope Dad will let me do his someday. I love the feel 
of it sliding over my tongue, and pushing against my 
lips. Oh, God! He's cumming in my mouth! I'm going to 
choke! There's so much! I can barely swallow it all!"

"Hump her faster, girls, faster! She's cumming again! 
Faster! Make her scream! There, like that! Oh, God! I 
bet they can hear her clear down the block!"'

"Kitty, look at the sweat running down her body! She's 
soaked."

"She's gorgeous. And your young girl fucking her, while 
Kay shoves them tight together, is making me cum! Unh, 
Unh, Unh, aaargh! Oh God!"

"Look at those two bodies, sliding up and down on each 
other in the slick sweat. I've never seen Jan so hot 
looking! When she has orgasms, her eyes roll back in 
her head, and she looks like she is in seventh heaven!"

"You have a very special little daughter, Marge. I'm 
glad you two could come to the club tonight, so I could 
witness this amazing performance! Not ours,hers!"

"Thank you Kitty, and Kay, and your little friend, for 
making Jan's Sixteenth a memorable one. When she comes 
to, I'd better take her home."

" Here. Help me dress her, and wipe her off."

***

"Mom? Where are we? OhmiGod! Now I remember. What a 
wild evening! Did I do everything I am remembering?"

"Yes you did, honey. You put on quite a show! I've 
never seen anyone have so many orgasms in so short a 
period of time. Everyone was so happy for you. They 
kissed and hugged you, before we left."

"Wow, thanks Mom! You are the best mom ever! I love you 
so much!"

"I love you, too, sweetie."

"So,Mom. What are you going to do for me next year?"

"We're going to Disneyland!"