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    "Picture Perfect"
       by Mandy C.
         © 2004
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Amy, a young 14-year-old girl, emails a photographer to get some
pictures taken. What starts as a regular photo shoot, ends up in
more that either of them could've imagined.


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Amy had just arrived back home after lunch. She had forged an
absentee letter so that school wouldn't call her mom and had
handed it in the morning, saying that she had an appointment with
the doctor. It wasn't true, but she had to come up with someone
believable enough so that they wouldn't suspect she was really
going home. In any case, it was too late now.

She was slightly nervous about how things would go, but it was no
big deal. He was simply going to do his job and that would be it.
It wouldn't last too long, and he was a pro, so he obviously knew
what he'd be doing. He didn't know she was still only 14, but he
didn't needed to know. She just wanted him to do it for her.


*****


Pat was still packing all his stuff, making sure he wasn't
forgetting anything. It was the first time he was going to do
this without anyone knowing, and without knowing the client. But
she had assured him that it was okay for him to come down today.
He looked at his watch and realised he was running late. He
grabbed his keys and rushed to his car.

He drove for about half an hour before getting on the street he
was going to. There he slowed down and parked right in front of a
large house that had the address he was given. It felt odd for
some reason, but he was there already and he couldn't have said
no when he was asked so nicely.

He grabbed his bag and headed to the door. He knocked and waited.


*****


Finally. What had started a couple of months ago was going to
take an unpredicted turn.

It was a regular night, when Pat came back home and read his
email. This girl, named Amy, had written to him. She said she was
still young but hoped she could make a career as a model. He had
heard this so many times before, but this was the first time a
girl actually wrote him to tell him so. He was well known around
town and his services were good and affordable. Photography had
always been his passion, so he knew very well how to deal with
models. He still hadn't much experience, but a year ago, just
around his 26th birthday, he got the occasion to meet and take a
few shots of a famous model. Once the news and the pictures went
around, it was instantly decided by the locals that he was
serious.

Back to the email. It had a few questions, the usual stuff. He
answered to Amy trying to be as clear as possible. What he didn't
expected, was for this to become a more friendly relation. They
often emailed each other, conversing about photography and her
chances to make it as a model. He, still to this day, didn't know
why or how it happened, but he actually kinda liked her.

The obvious happened a few days back. She asked him if he could
take some pictures of her. She was willing to pay him and it
could be done at her house. She assured her that her mom was okay
with all this, and even though she lied about being 16 years old,
he never confirmed this. He usually went up to see the girls, to
see what they were like, and at this age, he needed a parent's
approval form signed. But this time it was special. She had
become more of a friend than a client, and as a favour, he
accepted to do it.


*****


Amy opened the door and looked at him. He looked just as in the
pictures she had seen. Maybe he was a bit taller. And the spiky
brown hair gave him a little something more. She welcomed him in
and they went to the kitchen.

While they did, he looked at her. She looked slightly young, but
these days you never knew. He had met some models that still
looked like teens, so this was no real surprise to him. But her
simple shoulder-length blonde hair and petite figure was the
things that convinced him that he wasn't losing his time.

They both talked about how it was going to go. He was going to
take a few shots in various places around the house and in
various outfits as he usually does for any girl who asks for a
nicely filled portfolio. It wasn't cheap, but it was within what
Amy could pay, especially since he assured her that the
traditional way was more expensive than digital.

He couldn't help but keep looking at her figure. She didn't
looked too developed anywhere. Not the chest, nor the hips. And
she looked so pale. He almost would've thought she was dead if
she wasn't talking with him. But the sparkles in her bright hazel
eyes were definitely those of a girl who was starting a dream.

On her side, she was quite amazed at how simple Pat was being.
Sure he talked a bit technical here and there, and she didn't
understood all of what he said, but she understood enough to go
ahead and accept to sign the contract that was being shown to
her. Besides, he looked pretty cool with his glasses and his
young figure. He was slightly athletic by what she could see, but
maybe it was just her imagination, she wasn't sure.


*****


Contract signed. Half the price was paid, just as he always
asked.

First were a few shots being taken in the kitchen, and then some
in the living room. Both with the same clothes. She was wearing a
pair of brown pants and a blue wool sweater for those ones. It
was simple, a bit warm for the season, but she didn't knew what
to wear and he had asked her to wear something professional
looking and comfortable.

She then went to change to wear something else for some outdoor
pictures. She decided to wear some pink shorts she often wore,
with a black t-shirt. This looked slightly sexier, but of course,
it was nothing really extravagant. Besides, she didn't have that
much to show anyway. He took some more pictures in various poses
in the backyard.

All of this took around an hour and a half. In her best estimate,
she calculated that he had taken enough pictures to fill an
album, though she'd get to choose which pics she wanted, and
she'd pay extra if she wanted something special or larger prints
too.

She was rather surprised though. He hadn't mentioned anything
about sexy clothes or anything, so she decided to pop the
question.

- "Won't you do any pictures in sexy clothes?", she bluntly
asked.

He wasn't expecting this one. From what they had talked she
wanted regular pictures and he didn't usually have this sort of
question asked by the young girls. But then, those girls were
often around their parents, mostly their moms, when he took the
pictures.

- "Sexy clothes? Like what?" he asked, intrigued to know more.

- "Well, you know, like in a swimsuit or in underwear, like the
real models" she replied, blushing a little.

He knew this wasn't usual, and he noticed how she blushed as she
answered. She probably knew just as well as he did, how this was
being awkward. For a second, his mind told him to look at her.
She didn't look too bad. In fact she was pretty cute, and he
surely wouldn't mind seeing her barely wearing anything. But no,
she was too young, and it wouldn't be right, he thought.

- "I usually don't do that sort of thing with young models. What
I already did is pretty much the usual." he replied, surely
hoping she wouldn't insist.

_ "Oh" she said looking slightly deceived.

- "You thought we'd do that too?" he asked as he looked at her
saddened expression.

- "I... I just thought, you know..." was all she could say, not
really knowing where this was going anymore.

- "I understand. You never did this before, so maybe I should
have explained that better." he said in a comforting voice.

She looked up at him. He was looking right in her eyes, and she
really wanted this to happen. She wanted to feel like a model,
even if only for this one time. No one would probably find out,
and she wasn't regretting anything she'd said so far, even if she
wasn't sure if this was going to happen or not.

Her eyes said it all. She wanted to do that too, and she couldn't
hide that fact. He had seen girls pose for him for a few years,
but never had he had a young girl ask him such a difficult
question. If he was already breaking one rule by not having her
mom's permission written down, he thought that this couldn't be
much worse, even if he was sure he was going to regret it if
something went wrong.

- "Okay, because you seem nice enough, I think we could do it
too" he said.

As he said those words, a large smile appeared on Amy's face. She
told him to wait there as she went to change in a swimsuit and
that she'd be back in a minute. She went upstairs and changed
possibly quicker than even before.


*****

Amy came back down in barely a few minutes. She almost tripped on
the last step, but managed to keep her balance and appear in the
living room where Pat was waiting. He turned around when he heard
her steps and couldn't believe what he was seeing. There she was
standing, wearing nothing but a small, almost tight, white
bikini. He tried not to stare at her body, but he couldn't really
look away either. She was certainly very petite, looked quite
young, and her pale skin went very well with the small clothes.

- "How is this one? It is okay?" she asked as she stood right in
front of him with her hands behind her back.

- "That would be good...", really good he though.

Pat tried to remain professional and grabbed back him camera and
took a couple of pictures as she just stood there. Then he asked
her to move and pose in the stairs and on a chair, nothing too
fancy.

Amy tried her best to do as Pat told her. She did the poses and
when they weren't too good Pat asked her to move a bit here and
there, but overall she felt like she was doing a good job. Not
only was she doing a good job, she was also having fun. Maybe too
much fun. After a few poses, she stared feeling a weird tingling
sensation. She sometimes did, and she knew very well by now on
how to make it go away and feel better, but right now she
couldn't. She wasn't sure if he could notice, but she was
thinking that it must be obvious.

He kept taking the pics, but she started looking a bit less
comfortable. He reminded her a few times to smile and look right
at the camera, but kept going.

- "Are you okay? We can stop if you're not" he told her after a
few more poses.

- "No, it's okay, keep going" she said, almost cutting him off.

He went on and resumed shooting more pictures. After a few more,
they moved to the backyard. There he was sure he could make
extraordinary shots. Amy's parents had a really nice backyard,
with a little garden and a few trees, and luckily they only
shared the fence with one neighbour, which meant that the
pictures could look like they were taken on a more open space
than in the middle of a city. A picnic table and a pool
complemented very well the place, and it wouldn't be long until
they could be complementing Amy's pictures.

He asked her to sit down on the picnic table and put her legs on
a chair. He took various shots, slightly changing the point of
view, while barely moving Amy. Then he made her lay down, and he
stepped on the chair to have a perspective from above. For some
reason, this really looked almost too good to be true. Amy was
laying down on her back in the middle of the table, and with this
view she looked very sexy.

He got a few pics, but he was slowly getting aroused, so he
decided to not spend too much time in that position and quickly
got back on solid ground. Amy wasn't feeling any better, in fact
she was really starting to worry about the sensation that was
growing between her legs. She usually excused herself to go to
the bathroom and have some privacy whenever she felt like this
when she was around someone, but she couldn't allow her to do so
this time.

Pat made the young girl move towards the pool to get a few more
shots. She made her sit down, while on her knees, with her hands
in her hair, just like a model's calendar typical shot. This
wasn't helping him with his rising erection, but he couldn't be
distracted by the feel to have his cute young client do things he
shouldn't even be thinking to him, so he just went on.

Though, one thing was starting to bother him. Sure, he was
feeling a bit tight in his pants, but he was noticing that Amy's
little nipples were starting to poke through the thin white
material of her bikini top. He didn't want to imagine that it
would be because of him. He thought that maybe she was just
getting cold. He decided to just take a few more shots and then
get her to go inside.


*****

Once inside, she sat down in the kitchen, and there he asked her
where the bathroom was. She told him. It was just to his right in
the hall leading to the living room. He excused himself and
walked off.

As he got in, he unzipped his pants and took out his raging
erection, which popped right out with little help. He couldn't
believe how much the little girl had aroused him. But she was so
sexy and cute looking. He wanted to calm down, but whatever he
did only reminded him about how she looked, and how good it would
feel if he could have her. He couldn't stay too long in there
without her suspecting anything, so he just rested for a minute
or so, and then managed to get himself back in his pants and get
out.

He walked back towards the kitchen and then stopped just as he
got to the doorframe. In that very second, his cock could've
ripped through his pants.

Amy was facing the other way and couldn't see him, and didn't
even heard him walk back. She was too concentrated on the feeling
her little fingers were providing her. As soon as Pat had
disappeared, she had pulled her bikini bottoms to one side, and
was rubbing her little swollen clit as fast as she could. She was
already nicely lubed, and by how she felt, it wouldn't take her
long to feel that amazing sensation through her body.

He didn't make a noise, and just watched her from behind, as she
was furiously masturbating, completely unaware that he was right
behind her. He suddenly remembered that he had his camera around
his neck. He couldn't go without taking a picture of that moment,
and just snapped a picture.

Amy froze down the moment she heard the little click of the
camera. She wasn't sure what to do now that she had been caught
in such a situation. She definitely didn't felt like turning
around, as she could feel her face turn red from embarrassment.

- "Don't stop honey, I'm sure it feels really good" Pat said, not
believing himself what words had just came out of his mouth.

The young girl didn't even know what to say in the moment, and as
much as she wanted to stop what she had been doing, she was now
way too much into it. Her climax wasn't even that far, and she
could feel her body asking for stimulation to bring it to
ecstasy. She turned her head around and looked at Pat, with her
hand still where it had stopped.

- "I know you want it... and you don't know how much I like what
I'm seeing" he said, smiling, looking at her young figure.

She turned back and slowly started moving her hand again, not too
sure of why she was doing it, but she knew she needed it. As she
got back into it, he took his camera off his neck and put it on
the table, as he closed in behind her. He took a few more steps
and stopped just short before seeing over her shoulders. There,
he unzipped his pants, and pulled them down along with his
boxers. His erection sprung back, freely pointing in the
direction it wanted to go. He then moved to the side of Amy.

She was rubbing herself at a nice pace when she saw to the corner
of her eye, Pat step aside her. She had heard the zipper and the
noise of his clothes being taken off, so she didn't knew what to
expect other than him being naked when she'd see him. She turned
her head to her left and saw for the very first time, a
semi-naked man. She had seen semi-naked men before, but not while
being naked from the waist down. It wasn't quite what she
expected. In fact, he looked better than what she thought. He was
definitely trimmed, and he looked rather large, even if in
reality he wasn't much more than average.

- "Let me help you out" he said, walking in front of Amy.

- "Okay" she muttered as she saw him get down on his knees right
in front of her.

- "Pull down your bottoms, better get rid of them" he said in a
soft manly voice.

She kept silent as she pulled herself up to get her bikini
bottoms down to her knees, at which point he helped her get rid
of them completely. Without him saying a word, she undid the knot
holding her top and took it off, while blushing slightly, as he
looked at her every movement very closely.

- "Perfect" he told her, at the sight of a nice small pair of
breasts with pink firm nipples.

Her breasts were about a handful for an average man like Pat, and
as he cupped them in his hands, he looked at her expression. He
was loving the moment, very probably more than she. Even if she
didn't expected to be sitting down in her kitchen naked with a
semi-stranger squeezing her chest, she was nonetheless enjoying
it. She almost twitched at his touch, but those same feelings,
were making her wetter and hotter, and desiring him more and
more.

He eventually moved towards her, and planted a firm kiss on her
soft pink lips, surprising her, before kissing his way to her
neck, where he nibbled a bit on it. It had been ages since he
hadn't been so nice and passionate with a girl, and even though
his mind and body just wanted to fuck the small teen, some part
of his brain was making him be really nice towards her, almost
nicer than he had ever been in his life when being intimate.

She had surrendered her body the moment he reached her neck, and
was just sitting in a numb state, just feeling all these new
sensations, while getting to know what it was like being treated
so nicely by a man. She knew it wasn't "normal" for a guy to be
this nice with her, but to her this was a dream, and her mind
wasn't thinking of what it should expect or not. A guy was just
there pleasing her, no more no less.

Pat kept kissing his way down her body, playing with a nipple as
he got to play with the other in his mouth, gently biting it and
sucking it. He then resumed his way down, tickling her a bit as
he went over her belly, until her reached her pubic area. She had
never done anything to herself down there as far as hair care
went, but the small patch of golden hair wasn't even an obstacle
to him. It was more like a complement to her beauty. He went over
it, as his nose picked up her young arousal scent. It wasn't too
strong, but it was intoxicating, making him even harder. He just
wanted to bury himself in her, but at the same time he wanted a
taste of what he smelt. He extended his tongue and slowly ran it
from the bottom of her slit, up to the small bump at the very
top. Amy shivered as she felt him tasting her wetness.

He felt her reaction very clearly, and just knew how close she
was already. One of his hands held her lower back while the other
moved to the front, where it started fingering the young girl.
She was rather wet, and he could even hear it as he ran his
finger all over her sweet spot. He then got a finger in. As he
did, his tongue made contact again with her little bud, which
made her twitch. Amy was feeling really good, and knew very well
she wouldn't be able to resist much longer to his moves.

He kept moving his finger in and out of Amy, while he softly
kissed and sucked on her clit. As he was starting to establish a
rhythm, he felt she was right there, and as he kept going, Amy
started to feel the wave of energy go through her body as she
moaned in a sweet girly way and tensed her body for the moment it
lasted.

Pat let go of her as the pleasure dissipated and just looked at
her, smiling, happy to have been able to please in such a way the
young teen. She looked at him and just smiled, like thanking him
without words. They both stayed in place for a moment, like
contemplating the beauty of it, and then they moved on.

He was rather hard and the smell of Amy was certainly in part
responsible for it. He stood up and she saw his large erection
right in front of her. He placed his hands on his hips and looked
down at her. She looked up just to be sure she was thinking the
same thing as he was.

- "Just go for it, it'll come naturally." he said, to reassure
her.

After what he had done to her, she couldn't refuse to do this,
even if she wasn't too sure about it. She sat straight, and
extended her hand to take his member in her hand. It was hard,
hot, and she could feel it pulse in her hand. She moved her hand
up and down, giving him a few strokes that were more than what he
could have expected. She did just that for a little while, as she
got comfortable with the idea she was going to take it in her
mouth.

He was getting quite used to her gentle yet firm grip, when he
saw her move her head closer to him. She opened her mouth and her
tongue touched the very tip of his cock, getting a taste of his
precum. It seemed like she liked it enough to keep licking around
it, as she looked up at him. His view was amazing. A young cute
blonde girl giving him oral. As if it wasn't enough already, she
finally got the courage to get it in her mouth. Her warm
salivating mouth felt awesome around him. He could've shot right
there, giving her a nice taste of himself, but he held on and let
her suck him. She wasn't doing an excellent job, but for her
first time, it seemed like she knew quite well what she had to
do. She sucked him nicely, moving her head up and down nearly to
his entire length. She went on like this for a minute or so
before he stopped her. He got himself out of her mouth.

- "That felt awesome Amy." he said, looking down at her, as she
blushed to his comment.

- "Wanna take it in you now?" he asked her, making sure she
wanted to do this.

She nodded and he asked her to stand up. He sat down on the chair
as Amy stood to his side, listening to him explain her how she
was going to literally sit on him and then move. He explained how
it might hurt the first time he got in her, as she was very
certainly a virgin by what he could imagine.

Once he was done explaining, Amy turned around and backed down on
his, as he guided his hard on right at the entrance of her sweet
love tunnel. She kept going, getting the tip inside of her, and
then he told her to just let go and sit on him. She did just
that, and definitively felt him take her virginity. It didn't
hurt, but she felt it. He felt it too, as he encountered her
hymen for barely a moment before going further.

- "Are you okay? Does it hurt?" he asked her, right after she was
sitting on him.

- "I'm okay, doesn't hurt or anything like that" she said, as she
felt for the first time what it felt like to have a guy inside of
her.

- "You can start moving when you want to." he told her.



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Amy started moving, and while it was slightly uncomfortable to
feel him rubbing against her freshly taken virginity, she kept
going. Slowly but steadily, she moved herself up and down until
he got his hand underneath her to help her. He helped her move on
him, and it certainly was worth it. The sensation of tightness
and wetness was better than anything. It had been a long time
since he had had his first girl, and this one was bringing back
some good memories to him. As he helped her move up and down, he
tried kissing her neck again. He wasn't very successful but at
least she noticed what he was trying to do.

As he slowly did her, he whispered soft words to her ear, words
he hadn't said very often. Those words were all it took to make
Amy smile and feel loved. He appreciated very much was she was
doing. They kept going in this position for a couple of minutes
until both of them were getting tired of the awkwardness of it.

He asked her to stand up and they changed. He wanted to have her
in a more comfortable position. He once again planted a firm kiss
on her, except this time she wasn't so surprised and actually
managed to kiss back. He then asked her.

- "To the bedroom?"

She understood and smiled, taking his hand and leading him
upstairs. Once in her bedroom, aside a slight mess they didn't
even cared to notice, she sat on her bed, and he pushed her down.
He grabbed her legs and spread them long enough to slip back in
her, and then held them up to his shoulders. The skin of her legs
was really soft and it even surprised him how he hadn't noticed
earlier.

After caressing her legs with his manly hands, he resumed the
loving and kept going. He knew the position very well and knew
every girl liked it. Amy certainly had no idea of how good it was
supposed to feel, but to her, it felt awesome. Every time he
pushed in, he rubbed himself some place that was making her feel
so good. She didn't know what it was, but it was good and it's
all that mattered. Not only was it good, it was making her really
wet, a fact that Pat loved.

Wet and tight would've been the only two words to describe the
feeling he was having as he literally made love to the young
girl, who not so long ago was a client to him. He could see it,
and Amy knew it, she was going to cum again. He kept going in a
steady rhythm, only giving a deep push once in a while, as he
watched closely her breathing and reactions. Her breathing was
rather fast, and while very few moans escaped her body, she
didn't need much else to encourage him to keep going.

She looked like she was blushing, but it was really only the hot
temperature of her body in combination with her pale skin, that
made her look this way. He accelerated the pace, knowing very
well what would happen. He knew he had to give it to her before
he went too far himself. As much as he tried to last, she was
young, and with that, she had a nice hold of him, which luckily
felt much better with her natural lubrication.

It was too much, and the constant stimulation of her g-spot just
made it happen. She arched her back, tensing up and he could feel
it. She tightened her grip on him as her body unleashed one more
wave of pleasure for her to enjoy, as she let out a low long
moan. As much as he would've wanted to stay in her a moment more,
his thrusts were too pleasuring once she tightened around him,
and he rapidly spread her legs and slipped out of her, just in
time to spurt all over her patch of blonde hair. A few bursts of
his hot and sticky cum were enough to cover her pubic area. He
hadn't had this much fun in a long time, and making Amy cum
nearly at the same time as he did, was just the best he could've
expected.


*****


After the lovemaking was done and both had recovered from the fun
they had had together, she reminded him about the time and he
realised it was time to go. He awkwardly went downstairs wearing
nothing but a smile and got back dressed in the kitchen, while
she looked at him.

As he packed his stuff, he hoped it wouldn't be the only time
such thing happened. Little did he know that she was thinking the
same thing. In any case, they were going to see each other again
anyway, when he would hand her the pictured back, so he could
only hope.

He kissed her goodbye and got out with such a good memory that
would certainly last forever.


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She started moving slowly, feeling him in all its length inside
of her. He certainly was feeling in heaven with every little
move, for she was tight and wet. But at least she seemed to
lubricate quite well without needing anything artificial, and for
him it was at the same time a relief, since he was sure he
wouldn't last too much if she didn't.

He helped her moving with one hand, while the other was firmly
holding one breast, while he teased her small erect nipple. He
couldn't play much this way since it wasn't the most comfortable
position, so he only helped her move for a while, as she moved up
and down, teasing him very much every time she did.

After a few minutes, he asked her to get up and he did as well.
He thought for a second and decided it was best to have her in
the living room, on the couch. They moved there and she sat down,
close to the edge, with some pillows underneath her to support
her back.

She put her feet on the edge, just besides her, giving him a nice
view of her newly penetrated flower, in all it's pinkish beauty.
While he was looking her where no one had seen before, she was
staring at his long erection. It looked very nice covered in her
lube, glistening in the light of the sun. She still couldn't
believe how such a thing could give her so much pleasure.

The staring moment passed, he went back to work. He slipped back
in her in this position, as he stood right in front of her. It
wasn't ideal yet, but it was much better. He had better control
over the rhythm he was going to have, and she wouldn't have to do
anything more than enjoy the moment. He moved steadily, in and
out, pushing as deep as he could from his position, while she
laid back, teasing and playing with her own nipples as she looked
up at him.

The young figure was absolutely beautiful. With a mix of adult
beauty and innocence, she was there, letting him have this much
fun with her, even though both knew what it implied. Yet he
didn't say a word, and she wasn't going to stop him, since she
loved the moment.

He went on, alternating between fast thrusts and slow, gentle
ones. All to vary his rate of pleasure, as well as to make it
interesting and better for her. She then closed her eyes, as she
kept playing. He could hear her breathing increase at a steady
pace. He kept going on, doing his best to bring her to her climax
again. He did his best to rub against her upper wall, where he
knew was her sensitive g-spot. He pushed up every time he pushed
in, and this was getting her really hot and fuzzy inside. She
knew it was a matter of seconds before he pushed her over the
edge, and she was ready for it.

A couple more thrusts and she tensed up, firmly gripping her
breasts, as the rush of good energy flowed through her body,
tightening her grip on him, as he kept going in and out. The
pleasure was so much that a low long moan escaped from her. As
she climaxed, he got so much into it, that he bursted inside of
her. He could feel his cum flowing out, spurting inside the young
girl's body, as she firmly held him. He wanted to get out, but he
couldn't. He was enjoying it too much, and couldn't move, but
just stay there and fill her with his hot seed.

A few minutes went by, as they stayed in that position, without
either of them moving, just enjoying every moment of it. As she
opened her eyes, she moved her head to the side and gasped, as
she saw her mother, completely immobile at the entrance of the
living room, with her hands on her mouth, in total disbelief. He
turned around and realised what had just happened. Surprise and
fear made him not move an inch, as he stayed deep inside Amy...


** THE END... ??? (ALTERNATIVE) **

I see that either you were a complete curious and read both
endings, or you chose to read this ending instead. In either
case, just knowing you read my story satisfies me. Whether you
read only one or both, I'd be very grateful if you wrote to me to
tell me what you thought of the story. Specify which ending you
read. Will there be a following to the story with the alternative
ending? Maybe, who knows? If I'm tempted and inspired I'll
continue writing, otherwise you're free to think what you want ;)
Comments welcome at mandy_cdn_cutiepie@yahoo.com

Thanks!

(since it's the 31st... Happy New Year !)