Note: This story was dynamically reformatted for online reading convenience. The Eclipse by: LustForBunny M/g/ b pedo mast oral PLEASE SEE THE REVISED EDITION OF THIS STORY. MANY MISTAKES AND CHANGES NAKE IT A MUCH BETTER WORK. THANKS!!! LFB "Madeline; dinner!" God, how she hated when her Mom called her that. Even though it was her given name, at seven, almost eight, everyone at school called her Maddy. But, since it was Summer, and no school, she had to listen to her Mom say the long version. Well, at least dad realized her independence and used Maddy whenever they were in her Mom's presence, but she loved his name of just `Punkin'. She loved being his `Punkin pie' as he sometimes reminded her as his favorite dessert. Sometimes, he would even pretend to eat her by blowing burbles on her tummy. That was awesome. But, only when Mom was off somewhere. Mom hated her love for her dad. Probably jealous! Oh well. Maddy stood up, and her dad looked over as she walked toward the house. `Damn, she has a cute wiggle. I guess all girls at any age have that cute move.' "Roger, are you coming in Dear?" `I hate it when Evelyn calls me Dear. It is always sarcastic and shallow. She hasn't considered me dear to her since Maddy was born. Always turning up her nose when I show attention. What's a guy to do, ignore his cute daughter. NEVER!... It had to be the tight one-piece that was last years size, along with her cute melon butt cheeks; like two small melons side-by-side wiggling. A little boner arises. `Whoa!' he says. Not over my little daughter. `I'm not that way'. Maddy goes in and heads to her room, closing the door as she goes in, and locking the outer door. She and her 14 year old brother Matthew have adjoining rooms, with a shared bath, but doors on both sides that lock too; although Maddy never locks hers. Why should she? She needs to pee before she changes, so she walks in, and pulls the door partly to for HIS privacy, and sees her brother sneak a peek at her to make sure she shuts the door. Whatever! Little does she know how a 14-year-old thinks. His hormones are running wild, and Maddy is so innocent. He gets lots of peeks at her often, and even sometimes when she is lying in the tub, with her head under the water practicing her breathing for swimming. To do that, she's always got her knees up, and her little crack just opens up for him. `Damn, that makes me horny', he thinks. He glances in the mirror, and watches her pull off her swim suit, and can barely see her little crack from a distance as she sits down on the toilet. So, he gets out a magazine from under his covers, and looks at the sexy woman and her huge tits and big gaping hole. That gets his motor running pretty good. He forgets all about Maddy for a moment, and now rubs his hard 4 inch boner. Maddy finishes, and gets a naughty idea, and stands quietly because she hears her brother breathing hard, and peeks around the corner and sees him squeezing his pants. His weenie looks a little bigger in his pants than what she remembers the last time she saw it a year ago. Oh, well, he is gross most of the time any way. She tosses the idea of opening his door, and just opens her side, and goes in to dress. She takes her time, and puts on her pink bikini undies, and then her shorts and a cut-off t-shirt that has little bunnies on it. Daddy likes this one too. The shorts are new, and a little big, but, she has a belt, and only her legs have a loose gap in them. You can't see her undies, so it's all kool. She heads down for dinner. "Matt, darling, coming down?", Mom calls. She has always been closest to Matthew. He seems to understand her moods, and he is growing into a handsome young man too. Everyone comes in, and they all sit down. "Well, the Eclipse is set for Noon, Sunday, on the 4th", Roger says. "Honey, are you sure you have to work on that draft you're doing? We really would like for you to come along to Mrs. Peavey's with us". Evelyn says. "Honey, I have a deadline; and besides, you know I get bored stiff over there with all you women gabbing about who did what and when". Maddy speaks up and says in her sweetest little angel voice: "Do I have to go this year? She yelled at me last time I was there, and I really didn't mean to step on her stupid cat." "Honey, a daughter's place is with her Mother, and you should love your old 1st Grade teacher." "But, she was mean and yelled at us, and even hit me on the hand with a ruler once when I needed to pee". Maddy lifts her legs up, and pulls them to her chest, giving Roger a quick peek up her baggy shorts to her bikini panties and crotch. His dick throbs again. Roger asks, "Did she really do that dear?" speaking to Evelyn, trying to cool the sudden interruption. "Now, you know that that little `Miss Perfect' here did not ask to be excused, and just got up. We all have rules you know". A small tear forms on Maddy's cheek. Roger sees it, and wipes it off. He hates to see her hurting. He drifts to her panties again, and wishes..."Well, we'll see, OK ?" he says. "Roger, don't you be fooled by those tears, she's just pretending to get her way", Evelyn shouts. Thoughts are by the millions now. Slowly, Maddy puts her little legs back down. Everyone soon retires to their rooms. Maddy slips out of her shorts, and looks at her little body and notices Matt peeking around the corner. She's pleased to have such power over him. She doesn't understand why he does it, but he does. She slowly wiggles a little as she pulls on her nightie. The next day, Maddy is playing again down near the pier, in her bathing suit, and her dad is finally coming out from the Study to fish and relax. She climbs off of her float, and sits down beside him. She leans up close to him and in her sweetest little voice asks again: "Daddy, can I please stay with you Sunday? I want to spend some time with just you, and we can fix hot dogs and stuff. It can be our own little picnic. Please!" She lifts one leg up, and Roger inadvertently notices her cute little cunt squeezing her middle. He sees the slightest hint of a crack in her wet suit too. `Calm down,' he tells himself. "Now, Punkin, you know Mommy wants you to go with her, right?" Maddy puckers up her little lips, and does a slow little fishy pucker and says "Please Daddy!" Her leg rubs up against his, and he feels a shock go through him. It is so soft, and warm. He looks toward the house, and doesn't see Evelyn, so she won't see him give in, and says: "Well, maybe I can talk to your Mom tonight; but I can't promise she will give in. I'll try though my little Punkin Pie". He drifts at the thought of her little punkin pie cunny poking out at him, and slides a finger slowly across her naked thigh. She gets a chill. "Yes!" she says, and jumps up and kisses him in the mouth. She lingers for a couple of seconds, thinking; `that was nice'. Roger notices too, and wonders....... That night, Roger gets all sweet, and says, "Honey, I don't mind if Maddy stays with me Sunday, if you don't. Besides, when I get done, I can smoke up some glass, and show her the eclipse. It will be very educational." "Oh, Roger, you're such a sucker for a line. Sometimes, I think you love that little mouse more than me". "Now, honey, no one can ever take your place, you know that". "Yeah, right!" she says. So, the next day is Saturday, and all is the moving along. Evelyn is back to her boring days of Dinner, and now town preparing for the picnic at the Peavey's. Roger heads out to the pier, and as Maddy climbs out, she cuddles close again, so he plays silent and lets her cuddle again. This time, she is also playing patient, and wait's a little too. Her leg brushes his again, and she gets a little tingle, or chill. Roger looks inadvertently at the house, then slides his fingers across her upper thighs. They are so soft. Maddy closes her eyes for a moment, and dreams in the moment. `Maybe he's giving in'. He continues his rub until just before he reaches her little crack, Roger awakens from his rush, and says: "Ahem! Your Mom says it's OK"! Before he can move his hand completely away from her leg, she is in his lap. His hand follows, and she kisses him again. Only, this time his hand is right on her little crack. Does he feel a warmth there as well. Maddy closes her eyes as she kisses him again, and gets that tingle again, but this time in her tummy too. It lasts for about ten seconds before they both snap out of it. "Maybe you can wear that cute yellow sundress Mommy got you last year that I love so well. Maddy knew it was too small now, as she had grown, but maybe.... Sunday finally came. Evelyn was off early, and Roger was in the Study when she left. As soon as she did though, he put the finishing touches on his Draft, and closed down the computer. He slipped into his loose gray sweat shorts, and headed out to start the fire. Hearing the car pull off, Maddy woke up in a rush. She slips out of bed, goes to the bath room. Pees! Then, she gets a naughty idea, and goes into Matt's room, and looks under his pillow and pulls out his girly magazine. The middle has a big fold-out, and shows a guy standing there over a woman with his huge cock over her head. `That is gross', she says; but then wonders what daddy's might look like. Maybe like this, really big, or maybe like Matt's and about the size of her thumb. `Oh, well, enough of that'. She walks out into the hall, and doesn't hear anyone, so she heads down the stairs in her night shirt. She passes the Study, and sees daddy is not there. So, she walks out onto the back deck. She looks down, and sees him bundling up sticks, and says: "Morning Daddy"! Roger turns, and looks up at the deck, and there she stands in her little nightie with nothing on underneath but her little bikini panties. She doesn't even notice, but he does. He can imagine her perfect little pussy inside those little bikinis, and wonders what it looks like now. He hasn't seen it in years since she was a baby. What he doesn't notice, but she does, is his boner starting to evolve from his shorts. He goes into a small trance, as does she, for about a minute, and then he starts to sweat a little. His face gets red, and Maddy asks if he is OK. He finally catches hold of himself, and turns back around. Maddy loses her view but notices something else: `He's got a butt like that guy in the picture too', she thinks as she turns and walks back into the house. Oh well, time to get dressed. All the while she is dressing, Maddy is thinking about the kiss they had on the pier the day before. It made her all warm inside and down there. She remembered the woman in the picture, but no way she had a huge hole like that. Besides, only her little finger could push in just a little into her crack, and that was only when she had to wash. But, it did stretch a little with soap on her finger. `Oh well, now for the dress'. She pulls out the sundress, and it is way too short, but she can still get it on. She got taller, not fatter! Maybe her legs are a little bigger, but not fat. She slipped off her panties, and put on an older yellow pair too, so they would fit the same. They sorta pushed up in her crack a little, but that feels nice when she walks. Next, she found a little yellow pair of socks with little ruffles on them, and slipped on her favorite tennis shoes. She topped it off with a little clear lip gloss that Daddy said he liked, but Mom said was `Sleazy', whatever that meant. She looked in the mirror again, and saw a beautiful princess. You could almost see her panties, the dress was so short, but since she had on small bikinis, everything was OK. She drifted to the kiss again, started to rub her little cunny. "Mmmmm". Maddy goes down, and smells hot dogs on the grill. She walks to end of the deck, and daddy is cooking away. He looks up, and freezes again. He sees right through the dress, and into her little crack, and stares at her from her luscious little lips down to her toes and thinks:' she's sweet enough to eat'. The dress is see-through in the sunlight, and he can see her little tits tips underneath. She is a sexual goddess. Maddy looks on and sees his erection again start to grow, and lets out a giggle and says: "Daddy, I think you're leaking". He looks down, and his dick is at full mast, leaking precum all over his leg, in plain view. He says: "Sorry", and turns away to adjust his erection, and give himself time to cool down. Maddy thinks `It was as big as the mans in the picture, and that big thing is supposed to squeeze and stretch into a girls pee-pee'. "WOW"! she says silently. A few minutes later, the hot dogs are done, and Roger brings them up and sits them on the table. Maddy is having fun wiggling around and setting the table, because she sees daddy keep peeping at her like Matt does. She knows that look by now, and it makes her feel all grown up like. She doesn't see him put some powder in her coke. She twirls around and her dress spins and hikes up to show off her panties and butt cheeks. Roger is eating up the show, and doesn't know he's being played. So, when the dogs are fixed, she then asks Roger if she can sit on his lap `like she used to when she was little'. Of course, he says "yes". `Might as well get cozy til the pill gets going and she dozes off.' She climbs up, and notices the lump under her little bottom, but remembers that she did that to him earlier. It isn't bad though, just a little uncomfortable at first. She wiggles a little to get it fitting better. Roger is in high heaven. He stuffs his hotdog half in his mouth, and chews fast. Maddy is taking little bites, and sips of her drink, and enjoying the little bumps she is getting next to her little bum crack. She drifts for a moment, and a drop of ketchup drips out of her bun. It lands right on daddy's leg. She looks down, and he never moves, still off in dream land, probably didn't notice, because she again sees his weenie poking out, and leaking again. She smiles, and adjusts her bottom a little again so her legs swipe the ketchup and slippery stuff together. Daddy sort of wakes up a little, and tells Maddy to get up, he has to go to the bath room. She notices his erection, and feels it throb as she slides down. He stuffs it back in, adjusts it real quick, and heads to the house. He's only gone for a moment though, and comes back out. It looks all crushed up against his waist band now. He can't believe what his little daughter is doing to him. "Daddy, can we watch the Eclipse now"? as the daylight starts to thin. He heads over to the lawn chair and sits down. Maddy climbs up in his lap, facing him. "Daddy, do you love me?" "Of course, Punkin Pie, always and forever". Daddy, can I kiss you again like I did on the pier. It was so neat". "Now, honey, Mommy would really get mad if she knew I kissed you that way". "But, daddy, I'll never tell, and `sides, you did say you loved me, right?". "Yes, honey, I guess I did". With that, she leaned into him, and closed her eyes and they kissed. His lips on her tiny lips seemed to melt, his hands moved automatically to her legs, and started rubbing her thighs, and up to her tiny bikinis. Maddy melted, and went into dream land. All she saw now was stars. No moon, no sun, no eclipse. Just stars! Roger moved out of instinct now, and felt the warmth of her little slit next to his fingers. It was so soft, and tender. He looked at her, and she was out cold. That was his queue to go on. A little smile was even there. He slipped her panties to the side, and slid his finger inside. God, she was so soft, and her little cunt lips were so tiny, yet perfect. They were hot as coals too. He even noticed a drop of nectar near the bottom. Punkin Pie! He slowly moved his finger back up, and pushed in a little, and found her little clit. It was like a hot bb just shot out of a bb-gun. Hard, and hot and ..wet. He slowly pushed his finger back down, and found her little hole at the bottom. He pushed in a little, and Maddy sighed and just relaxed more as his finger stretched her little vagina open. He got about a third of his middle finger in, and she started breathing harder and in little gasps. He moved his finger back out, and she sort of frowned, so he put it back and started a little in and out rhythm. Only going in to that one knuckle, but that was all it took to get him off too. He was leaking precum again, and his dick was at full mast poking out his shorts again. It had somehow made it's way right to his hand already. He started moving his hand slower, in and out, and used his other hand to grab his hard on. On one outward stroke, he replaced his finger with his dick, sliding it across and partly into her tiny crack. Maddy seemed to adjust, because her new feeling wouldn't suddenly fit in; so she opened up and relaxed a little more. She felt the stretch, and it was a little uncomfortable at first, but got better after a minute. Just about that time, a bird chirped, and Maddy felt a little sting in her pee pee off somewhere; but she didn't care. She was off in Neverland somewhere. Roger let out a little sob as he realized he had just taken her little cherry, but his other head was ruling the roost right now. After slowly pushing past her hymen, he started pushing deeper, and could now feel her tight insides squeezing his dick. She was so hot, tight, wet. He kept pushing in and out, going a little further each time in, until he had his whole 6 inches in her. He knew that his wife was a prude and never liked his smaller dick, but it had it's advantages right now. Only a little blood leaked out. Maddy's breathing got harder, and she started to pant a little. Roger felt his cum boiling, and just as he did, Maddy let out a little thrust and squeak herself. `Damn, did she just have an orgasm?' he thought. It made him cum and cum, and cum some more. He didn't think it would ever stop. Maddy just fell limp, exhausted. Roger, picked her up, and carried her to her bed. He got a rag, wiped her off real slow, and even got the little trickle of blood that leaked out on his shorts. Maddy woke up a little while he was wiping her and said she had to pee. Roger had to carry her, and she sleepily let all the cum rinse out of her unknowing what was actually flowing out. She yawned, fell back into Roger's arms, and Roger carried her back to her bed. As he placed her there, he just had to look at that sweet cunt up close. So, he lifted her little legs, removed her shoes and socks, and then she instinctively lifted up her cute butt some to allow him to remove her little panties. He sits her up and maneuvers her in a way to take off the dress too, and now she was naked as the day she was born. Only, she was now a young woman, naked. He glanced below, and saw her little crack, and a hole evident now as well. Maddy was still passed out. It had to be the Eclipse. Roger slid down to her legs, pulled them into the missionary position, and pushed them apart. . He then looked inside, and opened up her little hole with his fingers to see the perfect deed done. He was amazed at how beautiful and perfect it was. He never knew that a little girls vagina was just like a woman's, only smaller. Her little hole seemed to beckon him again. It was slightly open, and glistening with Pie. So, he slowly started licking her legs, and thighs, and up to her little honey pot again. He sucked on her little bb, and tongued her little Punkin hole. She started breathing hard again, and soon, she lets go again with another little wet orgasm. She is in a heavenly bliss for another hour or so. When Maddy woke up, she was dressed in her nightie, and on top of her covers. All she remembered was daddy's warm lump against her, and now she somehow felt full inside now. Like she had something she needed, but wasn't sure what it was, but she now had it. A little later, Matt comes into his room, and all Maddy is thinking is how special she feels. She looks around and sees him peeking again, gets a naughty idea, and this time she reaches down, pulls her panties to the side, and pushes her finger into her now stretched little hole. It goes in a lot further than before, but feels so warm down there. Matt gets an instant hard on, and has to go relieve himself. He never notices Maddy get up, and sneak a peek herself as he wanks himself to a violent orgasm. It goes all over his sheets, and Maddy just watches and wonders what it would feel like to put that big thingy inside her little hole....Oh well! It has to be the Eclipse! LFB