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 Review: Wife Seducer's "Morganrunner14"



   By Little Bree



   REVIEWER'S NOTE:



   This is part of a series of reviews of smutty stories that I like and
recommend.  I'm posting it both to my FTP site on asstr.org, and to my
website at lttlbree.blogspot.com (also accessible through
/~Little_Bree/).  If you have comments, questions or
concerns (or just want to say hi!) please feel to email me at
lttlbree@yahoo.com.



   As always, if you're not over 18, don't read this! _________________



   I was 11 the first time a boy touched me between my legs.  It wasn't an
especially romantic episode.  We were in a living room with three other
pairs of overly hormonal preteens, and my friend's mother was making dinner
in the next room.  The fingering was awkward and fast, and we both stayed
fully clothed.  Still, I don't think my heart ever beat faster than it did
the moment I felt his fingers beneath the waist band of my panties.

   What many writers don't get, is that there's more to eroticism than sex.
The build up to sex--those thrilling moments when your brain just repeats
"oh my god oh my god oh my god" over and over again because you can't
believe these things are actually happening--are so much more important
than the act itself.  Of course, those moments can't be conveyed in fiction
with the ease of finding another clever way to phrase "the penis slipped
into the vagina." It takes real talent.

   Wife Seducer's Morganrunner14 series is one that did it right.

   The story follows 14 year old Morgan Healy, a pretty blonde, living with
her single mom in a typical suburban setting.  She's a very normal girl who
likes soccer, track, hanging out with her friends, and other typical 14
year old things.  When she lets a pervy widower next door believe he's
clandestinely watching her through her webcam, it excites her.  After he
lets annymous strangers in a chat room in on his secret spy cam, she gets
very excited.

   Things progress slowly in this story, but that's not a criticism.  Whole
chapters have slipped away before it even dawns on you that there hasn't
been any actual sex.  As naive, nervous Morgan tests her own limits,
constantly terrified that she's pushed things too far, we get a sense of
the palpable tension on both sides of the webcam.  You can feel her
adrenaline when she finally shows them her body, and you can feel their
testosterone as they take it in.

   The story is a bit dated at this point, because it relies heavily on
chat programs that have become obsolete.  I wasn't much older than Morgan
when I first read this.  By now, I imagine the budding exhibitionist has
gone off to college and found new ways to tease and please the boys.  I
think that because I feel like she's somehow real, which is rare in these
sorts of stories.

   (Also, Wife Seducer seems to have updated his webpage recently enough
that Asstr highlighted it in their author listing.  When you're done loving
this story, I highly encourage you all to drop him a line and demand a
sequel!)

   Morganrunner 14 Story Page:
/~Wifeseducer/MorganRunner14.htm