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 "A Nice Surprise" is pure fiction, a product of my imagination and nothing
else.  This is a story about an 18 year old man and an 11 year old girl
having sex for the first time; it didn't happen and the people involved do
not exist and the places are made-up, as well.  Please enjoy this story. 
Frenchie

   Story codes: F, M, g*, Mg, Inc, Sex

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   A Nice Surprise



   It was a cool, brisk morning on this November day as Janice hurried to
put on her robe .

   "Brrr..", thought the 11 year old.

   She was a bright young lady with fine golden blonde hair and sparkling
blue eyes and always a cheery smile on her face.  She loved life and what
it had to bring her.

   The weather was getting cooler and Janice loved it.  Her budding breasts
were stiff with the colder air around them.

   She sat back down on the warm, comfortable bed, thinking how delicious
it would be to cuddle under the covers and be warm and cozy.  She had just
about given in to those thoughts when there was a knock on her door.  It
woke her from her reverie.

   "Yes?  Who's there?"

   The door opened and her mother came into the room.

   "Janice, I might have to go to New York this afternoon and your little
friend from around the corner is away on that school trip she won." her
mother said.  "Do you think you and David will be all right?" she asked. 
"I'll just be gone tomorrow and Sunday.  I'll be back on Monday afternoon."
"Well, I don't know..." she trailed off.  "David has been teasing me an
awful lot the past week." "That's because he loves you, dear.  But if it
will make you feel any better, I'll have a talk with him." "OK, mom."
Janice said with a knowing grin.

   Janice's mom left that afternoon for New York leaving her with $50.00 in
cash so that David and she could buy food.  David was nowhere around.  He
must have left before Janice woke up, which was about 10 o'clock.  Janice
put the breakfast dishes in the dishwasher and went to the bathroom to have
a long, relaxing bubble bath.

   David came home just after 4 o'clock.

   "Where's mom?" he asked.  "She had to go to New York and will be back
Monday afternoon." Janice told David.  "She left you a note on the kitchen
table and she gave me $50.00 so we wouldn't starve." Janice chuckled.  "So
where's your friend, er, Sadie, is it?" David asked.  "She's in Washington,
D.C.  on a field trip and she won't be back until sometime next week." "So
who's going to stay with you and protect you from me?" David gave a
sinister laugh.  "You're going to protect me from all the evils of the
world." She said with a slight grin.  "Well, that's no fun!" David said. 
"I'm gonna want to tease you and there's nobody to take your side." "Go
take a shower!  You stink." She said.  "Hmm...  yeah.  I guess you're
right." He said, pretending to smell under his arm pits.

   Janice decided to put on the nightgown that uncle Harry had given her
for her birthday.  It was pink satin with a white sheer fabric over the
outside and trimmed in fine lace.  It was a bit too big for her slender
frame, that's why she hadn't worn it until now.  She figured it would
accent her little pubescent body enough so that David would maybe take a
genuine interest in her and show her a thing or two about, love making. 
She spayed her wrists and body with perfume and went to the living room to
watch television, one of David's favorite pastimes.

   David pretended not to notice his young sister sitting on the couch when
I came into the room.  She was absolutely gorgeous!  A total babe!  A
knockout!  He couldn't look at her.  He felt weak in the knees as he sat
down beside her.  He had to do something to regain his composure otherwise
he would take her right now!

   "How about some popcorn and a movie?" he suggested.  "That sounds good."
she answered.  "You make to popcorn and I'll get a movie.  OK?  "Yeah, good
idea..." David said.

   David was weak and a little bit uncoordinated and his mind was on
getting out of the room before he made a fool of himself.  He was almost 18
and he was thinking like he was 11, like his sister.  He wanted to do right
by her but he was still a virgin and he had wondered what it would be like
to feel his cock in a real live pussy.  He thought he could please her and
himself at the same time and just so long as she didn't tell anyone else,
all would be cool.

   As the two got up from the couch, they bumped in to each other almost
knocking Janice down.  David grabbed her and straightened her out before
she fell.  His strong hands grabbed her breasts as she reeled.  He thought
to let go but she might fall.  He held her tight.  She was about a foot and
a half shorter than he was and weighed about 75 pounds.  David weighed
about a hundred.

   "Whoa!  Are you OK?"

   After a brief period to catch her breath, she replied.  "I guess." she
said in a shaky voice.  The encounter had left her breathless as well. 
David reluctantly released his hold on his sister and went to the kitchen
to microwave some popcorn.  Meanwhile, catching her breath, Janice looked
through the videos trying to select something that would fit the mood.

   As David was retrieving the popcorn from the microwave, the phone rang.

   "I'll get it." he called.

   He put the hot popcorn down and answered the phone.  "Hello?" he said.
"Oh, hi mom."

   The two talked for a few minutes and hung up.  After having made the
popcorn and talking to his mother, David was more self assured now as he
wondered into the living room with the popcorn in a bowl.  Casually, he
said.  "Did you find a movie?"

   "No," Janice said.  "They're all dorkie.  Besides we've seen them all."
"Well, here's the popcorn." David offered.  "You know, I have some videos
in my room if you don't mind a little rough stuff." "That sounds cool.  Get
something that's sexy." Janice ordered.

   The popcorn half gone, the two sat side by side on the big couch
watching "College Torrents".  Janice took the initiative by putting her
hand on the inside of David's thigh.  He winced as her hand settled down to
a nice firm grip.  He pulled his sister close to him, putting his arm
around her in a position that he could reach her firm little breasts.  His
hand slowly felt her tiny little nipples through the silky fabric and she
cooed with his ministrations.

   Janice cuddled closer in an effort to gain access to David's throbbing
member.  She put her hand inside of his pajama pants and felt his seven
inch cock drenched with the natural oil that comes with foreplay.  Slowly,
she started a down and up motion on his rod.  He moaned approval as he
moved his hand down to her honey pot which was also soaking wet.  To his
joy, she had no panties on.  He tucked his "social" finger into her eager
hole.  She shivered with delight as he moved it in and out and round and
round.  Her breath was ragged and so was his as they pleased each other in
a way they had never done before.

   Janice used the oil on his penis to lubricate her fingers and she made
them contour his bulging member as she went up and down.  She had to rest
her hand every now and then thus prolonging the inevitable.  Meanwhile,
David was able to manage to bring Janice to her first orgasm.  Her little
body stiffened and then she bucked several times and then went limp as the
waves of ecstasy swept over her.  She gave a little scream and squeezed his
penis as if to thank him.

   No words were spoken as they explored each others body.  An hour went
by. The movie had ended but they just sat there pleasing each other and
reveling in the delight of something truly wonderful being shared by
brother and sister.  This moment can't end.  They were both of the same
mind.  The feelings were deliciously exquisite.

   They had both slumped down and were almost lying down.  David rolled
over to a lying position pulling Janice on top of him.  She snuggled in
close and breathed a sigh.  She had never known such feelings.

   "I love you." David breathed, softly.  "I've wanted to do this with you
for so long." "Oh..., I wish you had." She choked.  "I feel so good right
now, like I'm about to burst." "Hmm..., I'm going to make you feel ten
times better than this.  No, even a hundred times!"

   "Why don't we go to my bed where we can relax and change positions
easier?" David suggested.  "Oh, I don't want to move.  I feel so good."
Janice cooed.  "Come on, let's go and be comfortable.  Besides, I want to
get inside of you!" David exclaimed.  "Oh, I want you inside of me in the
worst way." Janice said.

   They got up.  David went to the bathroom to relieve himself.  Janice
went to David's bedroom and climbed in.  She was just getting comfortable
under the cover when David walked in.  He sat on the side of the bed and
took his pajamas off, then climbed in beside his waiting sister.  They
cuddled close to one another and got in comfortable positions to do their
ministrations.  David brought Janice to another orgasm but this one was
twice as strong as the first.  She lay in his arms, deliciously wilted,
unable to move a muscle.  Her pussy was drenched and David figured now was
the time to taste the nectar that flowed there.

   He relinquished his hold on her and pushed the covers down then climbed
between her little legs.

   "Where are you going?" She asked.  "Well, you're too full of PN so I'm
going to help you get rid of some of it." David said.  "PN?  What's that?"
She asked.  "Why that's Pussy Nectar." He said, smiling.  "All girls have
it.  Some more than others." "Here, let me show you."

   David was in position to view the most beautiful sight he had ever seen.
A little mound that was divided in two by a slit with a cute little clit
protruding from it and covered with nectar.  He could have fainted, it was
so beautiful.  He was just about to dive in when Janice spoke.

   "David, I have to pee." She said.  "Do you mind?" "No, not at all.  In
fact I have to do something too."

   The two got up and walked to the bathroom.

   "You just went." Janice said.  "Oh, I'm not going to potty.  I'm going
to shave so I won't hurt you." David said, gallantly.  "What are you going
to do to me?" She asked.  "You'll like it.  Just wait and see." He said,
smiling.

   The razor buzzed as Janice peed.  It wouldn't take too long because
David didn't have that much of a beard yet.  Janice closed the toilet
covers and stood on the toilet seat.  When David turned off the razor she
held her arms open for an embrace.  She was now as tall as he was and more
beautiful than ever.  He put his arms around her slender waist, regarded
her for a few moments, then pulled her toward him.  They put their heads on
one an other's shoulder like resting their heads but both were deep in
thought.  A thousand questions raced through their minds.

   Once back in bed, David resumed his position between his sister's legs.
Her mound was dry but he knew it wouldn't be long before it would be
gushing with her heavenly nectar.  He slowly and deliberately went closer
to the target and stuck his probing tongue out for a light touch.  She
shivered as his tongue met it's mark and began doing it's duty.  She moaned
with pleasurable pain.  He redoubled his efforts and she reciprocated with
a little moan or cry.  Before long she was writhing back and forth on the
bed, bucking and grabbing anything to hold on to.  His assault on her clit
was relentless.  She couldn't bear it anymore.  She pulled herself up and
grabbed his head.  She screamed.

   "David!  Stop!" She screamed.

   David didn't stop.  He kept probing with his talented tongue, back and
forth over the tortured clit.

   "David..." she said breathlessly.  "Oh!  Eiee!  Oh stop plea..." She
paused to catch her breath.  "Please!  Au..."

   She screamed a broken scream then released his head and fell back on the
bed, breathing like there was no tomorrow.  Her body twitched and shook as
the spasms subsided.  She was limp.  Wasted.  And had no inclination to do
anything but lay there exhausted.  She closed her eyes and enjoyed the
after glow and the pleasure she shared with her brother.  David came up and
lay beside his spent sister.  She was so young and pretty lying there
weaker than any kitten would want to be.  He kissed her cheek.  They fell
asleep in each other's arms.

   Janice woke up to find herself in a strange bed.  She was startled at
first but the remembered the pleasure she had felt for the first time in
her life.  She pushed the covers down and climbed out of bed.  She went to
the bathroom and to get a glass of water and returned to bed with her
brother who was lying there as peaceful as can be.

   Instead of pulling the covers up she nestled herself next to his
wonderful thing.  It looked so pathetic there shriveled up in a halo of
black hair.  She regarded it for a minute or so and thought about a scene
in "College Torrents" where a young college student went down on her
boyfriend.  Janice decided she wanted to try it so she made herself
comfortable and gently touched the limp member.  She held it up so it
wouldn't fall over and began the up and down motion she had done earlier.
Soon it began to show life.  She released her hold on it and bent over and
kissed it on the tip.  Then she opened her mouth and licked it.  Then she
stuck the head in and sucked on it just like in the movie.  It tasted salty
but she liked salt.  It wasn't long that it was hard and stiff just like it
had been earlier.  David moaned.  She stopped cold.  Didn't make a sound.

   After a brief period she continued her ministrations taking in at least
three inches of the shaft.  She liked it and didn't want to quit.  David
moaned again so she quit as abruptly as before, but David was awake.

   "Wow!" he said.  "Your just like a pro!" "You liked it?" she asked. 
"Are you kidding?  There's only one thing better than a dick in a pussy."
He explained.  "And that's a dick in a talented mouth.  And you have a
talented mouth."

   She returned to her sucking and fondling.  Feeling he was near an
orgasm, he stopped her.

   "Here, lets do tit for tat or otherwise "69.  OK?" "What's "69"?" She
asked.  "Here, I'll show you."

   David instructed Janice on taking the "69" position and she went at it
with renewed interest because not only was David being pleased but she had
her mouth full of pleasure also.  She was on top of David making it easier
for her to get more of his delicious cock in her mouth and David could play
his tongue around her clit and into her steamy pussy with ease.

   They were a perfect match and settled down to please each other as never
before.  By now she not only was sucking his cock like a pro but she had
her little hands around his balls, fondling them with pleasurable
perfection.  They were in heaven.  Both were breathing hard and their
bodies stiffened at the feeling when it changed.  Neither of them could
hold on any longer and with a simultaneous scream and moan they climaxed
with each other.

   Janice had a surprise when all of a sudden David's cock started swelling
and twitching then a gush of cum filled her mouth.  It pumped and pumped
filling her mouth with a taste like no other.  It was sweet yet pungent and
salty yet tart.  She liked it and swallowed every last drop.  She had
pleased her brother like never before.  She was happy.

   They both lay still for a while until Janice decided to come up by her
brother an fall asleep in his arms.  She cuddled against his beautiful body
and he stroked her long blonde hair and kissed her on the lips for the very
first time.  A long, silent, French kiss.  And they fell asleep, kissing.

   The phone woke them out of very peaceful slumbers.

   "Hello." David said, drowsily.  "Did I wake you, son?" David's mother
asked.  "Are you OK?" "Oh, hi mom." He replied.  "Yeah, we're OK." "Is
Janice still sleeping?" "Janice is in her room, I guess.  We made popcorn
and watched some movies last night and didn't go to bed until late." "What
time did you stay up to?" His mother asked.  "I don't know what time it
was. I guess about 12 or 1." "I'm not scheduled to be back until tomorrow
morning.  We're going to work late again tonight.  Are you planning on
going somewhere today?" "No, I don't feel right leaving Janice home alone.
I have enough to keep me busy around here for a while and my friends won't
miss me that much." David confided.  "Well, I'll call you later this
afternoon to see how you're doing.  Give Janice my love.  And thank you for
taking care of your sister for me.  I love you.  Bye."

   David hung up the phone and looked down at his sleeping little sister
curled up in his bed.  She was so beautiful, innocent and vulnerable.  He
thought that since their mother wouldn't be back until tomorrow morning he
would see if Janice would like to go to a cinema.  He looked at the time.
It was 9:30.  They could go to a matinee and still have some time to please
each other again.  He took a shower, dressed and then went to wake Janice
up.  He shook her gently.

   "Huh?  What?" She stammered.  "C'mon, wake up sleepy head.  It's almost
ten o'clock." David said.

   Stretching and rubbing the sleep out of her eyes, she managed to say. 
"I don't want to get up.  I've never known happiness like this."

   "Come on?  We'll have breakfast and then we'll go see a show.  What do
you say?" David asked.  "No!" She said firmly.  "I just want to stay here
and make love with you!" "Well, let's at least have breakfast." He
retorted. "Come on, take a shower, put some clean clothes on and you'll
feel better.  "David." She said, sitting up in bed and putting her head on
his shoulder.  "I love you so very much and I want to be near you always."
"Oh, Janice.  I love you too and we'll always be together.  I promise"

   He pulled her to him and they kissed.  Her little body pressing her
small, firm breasts against his chest started a yearning in his loins. 
They finally laid down and kissed for about an hour.

   Janice got up and took a shower and put clean clothes on like David had
recommended.  They had a late breakfast and went to the living room to
watch some TV.

   Around two o'clock Becky came over to play with Janice.  She left about
an hour later.  Janice found David in his bedroom reading a book.  She laid
next to him an arm across his chest.  He put the book down and kissed
Janice on the lips.

   "I'm so lucky to have a brother like you." She cooed.  "I'm the lucky
one to have such a beautiful sister that knows how to please her brother."
David said softly.

   David kissed her again.  Janice broke off the kiss and moved away from
David.

   "What's the matter?" He asked.  "Well you said that you'd make me feel a
hundred times better than yesterday." Janice pouted.  "Well, we've still
got today and tonight.  What do you think we should do?" He asked.

   She didn't answer right away but thought of the best way to say what was
on her mind.  She drew closer to her brother.  Held his body close to hers.

   "David, I want to feel you inside of me." She said in a low voice.  "Oh,
Janice.  You make me so happy and there's nothing more that I want." David
said in a weak, trembling voice.  She held him closer.  "Oh David." And
they kissed.

   After a while, David started to get undressed and he beckoned Janice to
do likewise.  He suggested they go to the bathroom so they wouldn't be
interrupted if nature called.  That done they climbed into bed.  They
kissed for a little while as he played with her pussy and she with his
cock. The juices started flowing and pretty soon they were soaking wet.

   He placed her on her back on a pillow so that she was comfortable.  Then
he explained to her that there might be some pain but it would soon go away
and he asked her again if this is what she wanted.

   "Oh, yes.  I want you deep inside of me." She said, weakly.

   He had his cock in one hand and Janice's ass in the other and he started
rubbing his cock the length of her slit.  Up and down, back and forth.  She
moaned all the while.  That turned him on all the more.  He was ready to
shove it to the hilt.

   Then he took the other pillow and put it under her butt and he told her
he was ready to try and put it in and that this is where the pain would
come in.  She told him she was ready.  He pushed against her body hard and
with drew his swollen rod.  He repeated the process, gaining a little
penetration with each thrust.  After what seemed to be an hour, he was
finally able to get the head in.  He leaned forward and laid on his sister
to rest.

   "Oh, It feels so good, David." She said in a hoarse voice, she was so
weak.  "I've never felt anything like it." "I may not be able to go all the
way in this first time.  It might be too painful." He warned her.  "Please
put it all in me." She begged.

   He kissed her and propped himself up ready to try to get more
penetration.  With renewed energy he began thrusting in and out.  He'd
never felt a pussy so tight.  But, then he never had a virgin before.  He
pushed and shoved.  It popped out.  He put it in again.  He pushed and
pushed.  He was gaining ground but he didn't want to hurt he sister.  He
left it in at the maximum penetration and fell over his sister.  His member
twitched.  He was still, very still so he wouldn't cum in his sister and
thus blow his wad, 'cause it would be all over then.

   The wave passed and David lay on his sister's chest.  He thought he
would try once more and then give up because the pressure he was using was
going to eventually bring him to orgasm and he wanted to enjoy a little of
his sister with full penetration.

   "How are you doing?" He asked.  "Oh," She said.  "It's heavenly.  I've
never felt this good." "No pain?" He asked.  "Just a little." She
volunteered.

   He told her about what he planned to do and warned her that if he
started to cum, it would be all over.  That he would have to pull out of
her rather than risk an unwanted pregnancy.

   He figured that he was half way in and that another three inches would
be pay dirt.  He pushed himself up and reached for his cock.  He pulled it
out.  Janice gave a groan.  David then lubricated his cock and her pussy
again.  Then did it again.  Then he got into position and he shoved real
hard.  Janice let out a little whimper.  He pulled almost all the way out
then shoved it in again.  It was working.  He could feel her pussy grabbing
his shlong with good resistance.  He pumped in and out and each time he
could feel it going in a little more each time.  Janice was moaning loudly
now.  That turned David on even more.  He thrust in and out until he was
sure that it was going in all the way.  The feeling was so good.  He'd
never felt anything like this before.  He slowed down on his thrusts
because he didn't want to cum just yet.  It had to last a little longer.

   He pulled himself upright to see what it looked like to be in all the
way into the tightest pussy in the world.  He motioned for Janice to look
also but she was too euphoric to respond.  He rested a while until the
feeling of impending orgasm subsided and then began slow, measured thrusts.
Oh what a feeling.

   In about fifteen minutes he began feeling the strains of an orgasm that
was so strong he knew he would be unable to stop them.  He slowed his tempo
to make it last as long as possible.  Finally, he pulled his dick from her
steaming pussy and shot his wad all over his sister.  She was too out of it
to care.

   They took a shower together and ordered pizza for supper.  They watched
TV until it was bedtime for Janice.

   "I love you, sweetheart." David said to his sister as he held her close.
"I love you too." She said.  "I wonder when mom is going to New York
again."

   They kissed goodnight and she went to bed.

   Laissez les bon temps roulez

   Let the good times roll

   Frenchie

   -30-

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