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        Marvel : Evolution 2. (2/3)

        Latveria.
        ---------

        The people in the Village Square saw the invaders first, flying
through the air towards them at an incredible velocity.
        "We are under attack," muttered one to the other.
        "Hmmm," grumbled the other man, old and disliking anything that
broke the comfortable rhythm of his life,"Should we run in terror then?"
        "Oh yes," nodded the first man conversationally, then sauntered
towards a large building and tugged several times on a rope set against
the wall.   A large bell at the top of the building sounded several
times and with grumbles of irritation, the citizens began ambling towards
a large barn towards the far end of the village, chatting as they went,
their children playing besides them.
        Insanis and his two Fellows landed gracefully in the village
square, their adrenaline racing as they prepared for anything,
any challenge that Doom might present to them.
        "Look at them!" growled Barren, one of Insanis'
companions, pointing at the villagers as they slowly moved towards the
bard,"They move without fear, they are showing us contempt!"
        "Patience, Barren," replied the second companion, Pulce,"They
are The Old Humanity, they are beneath us... and besides, they will
learn soon enough."
        "Pulce is right, Barren," muttered Insanis, looking about the
deserted village through narrowed eyes,"Do not underestimate Doom, this
may be an attempt to goad us into making a mistake."
        "BAH!" snapped Barren,"What can he throw at us that would even
give us pause."
        "Plenty," replied Insanis with a grin,"If we don't see it coming,
we can't adapt to it, and we can be injured.... though we would easily
recover and take the victory, it would lessen our standing to our Fellows
to be ambushed by The Old Humanity."
        "Yes!" laughed Pulce,"Like Suma!"
        Barren's angry face broke and he allowed a smile to cross his
face.  Suma had already been humiliated several times by the short Canadian
mutant Wolverine down in Madripoor, being one of The First only added to
the humiliation and it had generally been agreed by all The Fellows Of
The Physical Discipline (aware of Suma's setbacks thanks to The Mental
Discipline) that he would have to do something pretty spectacular to not
face taunts and insults when he returned to The Island.
        "So we don't attack them, what do we do?" asked Barren, smiling.
        "Scatter," replied Insanis calmly, and all three men zipped off
to the side, their bodies increasing their velocity to move to three sides
of the square.
        With a huge crashing noise, a giant green-skinned man hit the
ground hard where they'd been standing, knees crouching to absorb the
impact of his landing.
        "Did you expect this?" Barren asked Insanis with a frown,"Doom
sends a lackey to fight us."
        "Yet he shows respect by picking the best available," countered
Pulce with a smile,"Matching strength with this Hulk will prove most
diverting."
        Insanis gave no reply, he had picked Pulce and Barren because
they both represented such differing extremes of The Physical Discipline.
Barren was quick to anger and slow of wit, he expected that he could plow
through anything and in most cases he was right.  Pulce on the other hand
was more subtle, using his abilities in creative ways, exhibiting a smug,
quiet superiority that enraged his opponent and gave Pulce the advantage.
        Barren was a powerhouse, Pulce was a strategist and both happily
followed Insanis because he was both.  He was one of the few that could
command the respect of his Fellows in The Physical Discipline, unlike
Upstart who merely infuriated his Fellows, Dunac who disgusted them and
Justin... poor Justin who was probably the best of all of them but could
not command the respect of his Fellows.
        "Geez," muttered The Hulk, standing up at his full eight feet
and brushing the dust and shattered cobbles from his arms,"To think I miss
the screams and running."
        "We have no quarrel with you Hulk," Insanis said with a smile,"I
look forward to the day when I can prove my dominance over you, but today
I am here to face Doom."
        "Seems to me," replied The Hulk with a casual stretch of his
huge arms over his head,"That you've picked a fight with the whole world."
        Insanis raised an inquisitive eyebrow.
        "Remember that whole serve us or die bit at the end of your little
mental Fed-Ex?" The Hulk asked, blowing on his fingernails and looking
very, very unconcerned about facing the three of them.
        Insanis sighed,"Very well then, Pulce, Barren, deal with him
while I track down Doom."
        Barren leaped forward with a savage cry of glee towards The Hulk,
who slammed his hands together with powerful seismic force, bringing his
arms down in an arc from above his head to directly in front of him.
        The shockwave of sound and displaced air stopped The Fellow
directly in mid-flight and sent them back several feet, slamming into
Pulce and knocking them both to the ground.  Hulk turned and cocked an
eyebrow at Insanis,"Not that easy, buddy."
        Insanis smiled and inclined his head slightly in respect as Pulce
and Barren leapt to their feet and glared at The Hulk with curiosity
and fury respectively.  Barren ripped a huge chunk of the ground up with
his arms and threw it hard at The Gamma Goliath.  It hit him full force in
the side of the head and shattered into small clumps of dirt and broken
bits of cobblestone, not moving The Hulk at all.  He shook his head to
clear his hair of the dirt and sighed slightly.
        "Do you mind if we take the fight out of the village," he asked
Insanis conversationally,"Rebuilding charming little Latverian villages
can be such a bore."
        "Excellent idea," laughed Insanis,"Pulce, Barren, take the fight
outside the village."
        The two Fellows grinned mischievously as they understood what
their leader was saying.  They shifted their bodies into super-velocity
again and charged The Hulk, gripping him by his powerful arms and speeding
him several thousand meters away in under half a minute.
        "Good," chuckled Insanis as his super-enhanced vision watched The
Hulk slam his feet into the ground and bring himself to a halt, sending
The two Fellows flying through the air.  The Hulk growled and prepared
to launch himself through the air back towards the village, but Pulce
and Barren leaped onto him, dragging him into the fight and keeping him
from keeping Insanis from his goal.
        "Doctor Doom," laughed Insanis, and launched himself into the air,
heading for far distant castle of Latveria's Monarch.


        "The Hulk has failed," Doom muttered suddenly, startling Rick,
Marlo and Betty who had been sitting around trying not to bother
Latveria's Monarch, who was not in the best of moods.
        "Bruce?" gasped Betty,"Is he all right?"
        "He is wasting his and, more importantly, Doom's time," Doom
muttered, his hands running over a console filled with more buttons, knobs
and lighty-up bits than Rick had seen in a whole series of Star Trek,"He
battles the symptom but not the problem."
        "Well... that was enigmatic," Rick whispered to Marlo, who was
still dressed only in panties and a tight tanktop.  She felt odd being
dressed so skimpily in the laboratory of the self-proclaimed
most intelligent man on the planet, sitting around and feeling useless
while he ignored her and her friends.
        A small test-tube filled with a clear fluid ejected from the
console, and Doom picked it up, pressing it against the palm of one of
his gauntlets, which seemed to swallow it somehow.  Rick was the only
one to see this, but didn't question Doom, knowing he wouldn't get an
answer.
        "Doom is ready," The Monarch Of Latveria said grimly,"Let this
New Humanity come, they will find me prepared."
        "You've developed this Counter-Diosys then?" Betty asked Doom.
        "No," replied Doom curtly, as if his failure to do so was somehow
her fault,"But a weapon has been developed that stands a high probability
of severely damaging my opponent."
        "High probability?" asked Rick,"You better hope that you've
guessed right."
        "Doom does not guess, Jones," replied Doom,"It would be wise for
you to take shelter during the battle, a Doombot will show you to a place
where you will be safe."
        "Do we have an option, Doom?" asked Betty angrily, most of her
fury a result of her frustration about not knowing what was happening
to Bruce.
        A Doombot entered the room and placed it's hands firmly on her
shoulders, leaving no doubt as to the answer, though Doom answered it
nonetheless.
        "No."

        Four Freedoms Plaza.
        --------------------

        Kap grinned smugly as he stood in the giant chamber, arms folded
over his massive chest.  He stood before the huge portal that led into
The Negative Zone, through which The Fantastic Four made many scientific
expeditions and embarked on fantastical voyages.
        Kap knew he was destined for the same, once The Earth was theirs,
they would move from planet to planet, taking each one for their own,
seeking new challenges and overcoming them, building an Empire that would
hold forever, perfect and unflawed like none before it had ever been.
        He had not moved from his spot in the long hours that he had been
standing guard in the room.  He was secretly proud of this fact despite
the fact it was something all his Fellows Of The Physical Discipline were
capable of.  They might have been capable, but they would never have
thought to actually stand stock still, not moving a muscle, not even
blinking.  They would see no point in doing such a thing, which made
Kap feel superior to all his Fellows, because he was the only one he
knew off that tested himself in such little ways.
        He felt greatly honored to have been chosen by Justin and The
Conclave to face The Fantastic Four, the very first Super-Hero team this
world had seen.  Their exploits were legendary, their ability to adapt
to any given situation earning them the respect of The Physical Discipline,
who planned to give them the ultimate honor of making them their own
personal slaves.
        Kap and his three companions had been chosen from all the other
Fellows due to their different natures.  Though they had never worked
as a team their powers and abilities were roughly analogous to The FF's,
Kap's being his massive power.  He chose blunt, brute force over speed,
strategy or creative use of his adaptive body.  His body was perfection
and he saw no need to waste his time on unnecessary, high fangled moves
or the strain of long term planning.  Give Kap and obstacle and he would
smash his way through it, put a brick wall in front of him and rather
than walk around it, leap over it or phase through it, he'd simply smash
his way through.
        Ard, who had become their spokesman and led them simply because
the others couldn't be bothered, did not bother adapting his body to
huge, bulky proportions or thinking of long term strategic planning before
fighting.  Ard was someone who went along with the moment, who adapted
to met the challenge presented to him as it was presented to him.  He
didn't care about tomorrow or even an hour from now, he just existed and
went along with the flow.
        Wrix was an odd Fellow, his body slender and wiry rather than
bulky or just well-toned.  His body moved like he was a dancer, with
a grace that belied the massive physical strength that he (and
all Fellows) were capable of exhibiting.  He was at one with his body
at all times, attuned with every molecule and enzyme.
        Imp was like most Fellows, enjoying the hunt, the battle, the
challenge, the conquest. He was also wildly impetuous, ready to launch
himself into any situation, any battle, even if he didn't need to be
involved.  His reckless nature gained him much respect amongst the other
Fellows, who liked his fearlessness, seeing it as a sign of Physical
Mastery.
        As Kap proudly stood guard before The Negative Zone Portal,
concentrating all of his senses tirelessly upon the cold, vacant machine,
his Fellows were several levels below enjoying themselves a great deal.
        Although they were individuals by nature who rarely felt the
need to work together and could never agree on a leader, when they had
a common cause they were happy to flock together.  The current plan to
take over The Earth was one such plan, it had unified The
Physical Discipline together, working in conjunction with The Mental
Discipline to conquer and rule.  After that a strong leader would allow
them to enjoy the fruits of their conquest, then lead them on to other
worlds to conquer before they grew bored and began fighting amongst
themselves.
        Unlike other Empires that had failed in the past, The Physical
Discipline would continue always, because there would always be greater
challenges out there for them, always knew worlds to conquer.  The Universe
was infinite and they were Immortals, they would never be allowed to become
lax and debauched enough to become soft, like The Ancient Romans before
them.
        Another cause that had united three of The Fellows was the fact
that, for now at least, there were four of them and only one woman to
enjoy.
        By consensus, and because they knew the trick wouldn't work on
any of themselves, Ard, Wrix and Imp had buttered up Kap's ego, giving
him the 'exalted role' of guarding The Negative Zone Portal until The
Fantastic Four returned.
        And living three Fellows, one woman.
        Three cocks, three holes.
        She-Hulk had become their willing sex slave, subjected to vicious
rape at first, their pheromones had soon overcome her minds objections
and reduced her to a lust crazed vixen who existed only to please them,
willing to suffer any degradation that they saw fit to place on her, never
questioning, never fighting unless they ordered her to do so.
        Now, with Franklin Richard's mind caught in a simple mental
trap designed by The Mental Discipline (he was trapped between
two mirrors in his own head, sending back an infinity of images that
drove his child's mind crazy with curiosity at the paradox, an infinity
captured in two objects) and thus eliminated as a threat, the three Fellows
were enjoying themselves in the calm before the storm that would hit when
The Fantastic Four inevitably returned.
        Jennifer moaned happily as she felt Wrix's cock press up against
her wet, quivering cuntlips.
        "Yes," she groaned,"Oh yes, fuck me, please!"
        Wrix grinned, they always fought at first but after getting a
taste of hard cock and just a little pheromone to nudge the body's natural
instincts back into dominance over the mind, they all begged for it.
        He lay beneath her, holding the tall, green-skinned woman up above
him easily.  She had her legs spread wide, her cuntlips lewdly spread,
about the head of Wrix's prick as she tried desperately to press her
hips down and get her whole reason for existing now, sex.
        Ard gripped her thighs, Wrix the sides of her smooth waist, held
up by the shoulders by Imp.
        "Okay," chuckled Wrix,"Let's take the bitch."
        He followed his own command, pushing his hips up and sliding his
cock up between Jennifer's tight pussylips.  He moaned in satisfaction
as he once again took The Sensational She-Hulk's cunt, echoed by Jennifer
herself as she felt her pussy filled up by The Fellow's thick cockshaft.
        Wrix shifted his hands slowly, supporting her weight as his hands
slid from her waist and up to her giant breasts, squashing against the
firm green flesh of her massive mammaries.
        Imp took her chin in his hand, lifting her face so that it faced
his erect penis.  He grinned lecherously as her beautiful, lust-contorted
green face appeared to his view, her mouth half open already as she
moaned happily, loving the feel of hard cock inside of her cunt.
        She happily opened her mouth wider for Imp, her body jerking
forward slightly, the green-skinned woman gasping as Wrix began plunging
his cock in and out of her cunt, exciting her beyond anything that she had
ever felt before.
        She opened her beautiful mouth wide and took Imp's cock into it,
The Fellow feeding her his penis, sliding his meat into her oral orifice and
throwing his head back happily, hissing between his teeth.
        "Mmm" She-Hulk moaned around the swollen cock in her mouth, the
head of his cock pressing against the back of her throat,"Mmmm!"
        "Yessss!" hissed Imp happily, Jennifer Walter's warm, wet mouth
around his cock, lips stretched wide as she began to suck on him, gobbling
his crank.
        Jennifer ground her hips down, getting as much of Wrix's cock into
her snatch as she was able as her tongue and lips slurped and sucked on the
cock of her former rapist and new master.  His thick meat slammed in and
out of her mouth, really getting off on fucking the mouth of a former
Avenger and member of The Fantastic Four, the two greatest Super-Hero
Teams of The Old Humanity.
        Ard had been holding her thighs, content to watch up until now
as The She-Hulk denigrated into even more of a fuck-slut, her only purpose
to serve he and his Fellows.  Watching her naked, muscular body become
sweatier and hotter beneath his hands as she was fucked in the cunt and
in the mouth.
        Now his eyes zeroed in on the hot, green pucker of her asshole,
glistening with sweat and seemingly begging to get a hard, long cock
slammed up into it.  He grinned, removing one hand from under her thigh
and grabbing his cock in hand.  She-Hulk easily held the now unsupported
leg up with her powerful leg muscles as Ard moved his cock forward and
positioning it against her tight little green rosebud right inbetween
her firm, curved asscheeks.
        Jennifer's eye's widened as she felt The Fellow's cock press
against her rectum, applying pressure to her asshole and slowly forcing
it open.  She'd taken it up the ass several times since they'd stormed
the building and gang-raped her for the first time but her incredibly
fast-healing body and powerful muscles kept her anus incredibly tight.
        As Ard slowly pushed forward into her ass, Wrix kneaded and
squeezed her incredible, green breasts as he fucked her faster and harder,
his thick cock slamming in and out again and again into her very tight,
very juicy snatch.  The friction on his cock-strokes against her clitoris
was driving her wild with desire, her mouth tightening down on Imp's
cock as he fucked in and out of her oral orifice.
        Wrix grunted happily as he felt her cunt clamp down hard onto his
cock, squeezing his meat like a vice as she humped her hips down against
his fucking cock.  His hands groped and squeezed her massive tits, her
hard, dark green nipples pressing firmly against his palms.
        Imp moaned happily as he felt She-Hulk's mouth tightening even
more around his cock, quickly fucking his member in and out of
her beautiful mouth, face-fucking her with everything he had.
        She cried out about the cock in her mouth, slamming her up and
down onto Wrix's cock as Ard fully penetrated her asshole, her green
rectum spread around his dick.
        Juices flew out from around his fucking cock-shaft as She-Hulk
came, splashing down onto his lap.  Her body became limp, her unsupported
leg drooping to the floor as her orgasm temporarily exhausted her body
and she went slack, allowing Wrix and imp to fuck her cunt and mouth,
Ard's prick remaining stationary inside of her asshole.
        Wrix gripped eagerly onto her giant breasts and slammed his cock
up again and again into her cunt, plunging in and out of her dripping,
flooded snatch, shaven cuntlips spread lewdly about his cock.
        He fucked her cunt hard, slamming his cock in and out of her
tight, juicy, green snatch and growling happily.
        Once again She-Hulk began reacting, sliding her hips down again
as Wrix slammed his cock deep up into her cunt, his hips meeting hers as
he thrust into her, squeezing and kneading her large breasts as he came
closer to cumming inside her cunt again.
        "HAHAH!" he screamed suddenly, then hissed,"YESSS!!!!"
        He buried every last inch of his cock deep up inside of The
She-Hulk's cunt and blasted shot after shot of his thick, ropey cum inside
of Jennifer Walter's wet, juicy snatch, his hands squeezing her large
breasts mercilessly.  He continued to grind his cock against her cunt
for nearly half a minute, then he rolled his eyes back in his head and
groaned in content as he released all the tension and stress locked into
his body and slumped back onto the floor, his still hard cock still
over halfway inside of her hot slit.
        Ard grinned, knowing that Wrix was now out of the running and
he would have She-Hulk's almost undivided attention, apart from Imp
fucking her mouth.
        He pulled back from deep inside her bowels, his cock fighting
every inch of the way as he pulled back from The She-Hulk's hot, horny
asshole.  When only two inches remained inside of her butt, he slammed
forward again, her asshole now relaxed and comfortable with his cock.
        She grunted in ecstasy around Imp's cock, pushing her ass back
to take more hot, hard dick up her butthole.  Her cuntjuices flowed
from her pussy around Wrix's now half-erect cock, coating his balls and
thighs with her hot, sticky juices as Ard fucked her ass and Imp her
face, her body slamming backwards and forwards in an unsteady rhythm
that was somehow even more sexually pleasing than if they'd all been
in tangent.
        Imp pumped his cock into her mouth, facefucking his green-skinned
bitch's mouth as Ard buried his cock into her hot, tight little ass.  Imp
laughed happily, eagerly face-fucking her between her tight, wet lips
which were stretched around his thick cockmeat.
        Having her asshole fucked was sending Jennifer towards yet another
orgasm, pushed towards climax by the long cock plunging deep into her
anal passage, buttfucking the tall, muscular Ex-Avenger into utter sexual
ecstasy.
        Imp curled his fingers between the dark green locks of her hair
and gripped the sides of her head, pumping his hips back and forth in
tiny circles as he slammed his cock in and out of her sweet, sucking
mouth.
        His body began to tense, jerking forward roughly against her,
pressing his blond pubic hair firmly against her nose as he prepared to
cum, just as Jennifer herself was as her fucked ass sent wild depth
charges of shocking pleasure throughout her entire nervous system, her
nipples and clitoris painfully erect, buzzing with erotic sensation.
        She moaned around the thick cock in her mouth, now fully inside
of her, fucking only an inch or so out before pressing back in, gripping
the sides of her head as the sexy lawyer, Ex-Avenger and member of The
Fantastic Four slathered her tongue about over his swollen meat.
        His cock jerked inside of her mouth and he slammed forward hard
against her lips and nose, cutting off her breath momentarily as he
began cumming, shooting his load into his bitch's mouth, the feel of her
tight, sucking lips about his cock like another cunt.
        Her cunt squeezed and clamped down as she orgasmed again, cream
erupting from her pussy and out all over Wrix's thighs.  At the same
time as she swallowed Imp's cum, her tight butthole gripped down hard on
Ard's member, making his fucking thrusts into her tight rectum even
more difficult and even more pleasing.
        Ard threw back his head and roared happily as he slammed his hips
forward against her beautiful, curved asscheeks and buried every inch
of his cock deep inside of her sphincter, grinding against her firm ass
as he blew his load and fired again and again deep into her bowels, his
cock spraying the inside of her anus with cum.
        Ard's eyes rolled back in his head, leaning forward against
her, cock buried inside of her asshole as his arms fell about either
side of her curved waist.
        "Good fucking bitch," he moaned,"You're one hot fuck."
        She-Hulk gurgled with pleasure at the praise as Imp's cock pulled
wetly out of her mouth, a string of her saliva connecting her upper lip
to his cockhead.
        She'd been exposed to nothing but constant sex for hours now
and for her nothing else existed.  Her thinking, intelligent
mind remained but was no longer in control, her baser instincts had
taken over and flooded her mind with lust, removing her inhibitions
and her opposition.  Now she would do anything to be fucked by these or
any other Fellows Of The Physical Discipline, and would react violently
to anyone who tried to stop her.
        - Wrix, Ard, Imp, - spoke a voice in their heads, making the
three sated Fellows look up.  They were being contacted by The Mental
Discipline, which might just mean....
        - Kap informs us that The Negative Zone Portal has become active,
The Fantastic Four will be back within ten minutes. -
        The three Fellows grinned in anticipation at each other and
got up from She-Hulk, Ard pulling free from her asshole with a grunt
of pleasure.  They moved to the side table and picked up three pairs of
pants lying there, not the togas they usually wore as a tribute to the
Ancient Greeks and Romans but tight pants made from unstable molecules,
found in one of Reed Richards’ labs.  They found the irony delicious, that
the ones to defeat The Fantastic Four would do so wearing clothing made
by them.
        They moved to join Kap in the huge chamber containing The Negative
Zone Portal, leaving behind an exhausted and very satisfied She-Hulk.

        They smeared their sweaty palms over the walls with laughs,
the left behind sweat containing the inhibition releasing pheromone as
their very pores released it into the air itself.
        When The Fantastic Four arrived, the one member they were really
interested in would soon find herself unable and unwilling to fight.
        When they were content that the room was packed with enough sexual
energy to drive ten women wild with desire, they moved to the center of
the room and stood before the Portal set into the far wall.
        "Come on, Fantastic Four," laughed Ard,"Come face the twilight
of your age and the beginning of ours!"

        Latveria.
        ---------

        Insanis slowed himself and grinned, his eyes alight
with anticipation when he saw who awaited him.
        Centered right in the middle of a giant field before his Castle
stood Doctor Victor Von Doom, Monarch Of Latveria.
        He floated far above, Doom seeming small and insignificant from
his height as his extended his senses all about him, searching for any
sign of an ambush, a booby-trap or even if Doom was not Doom but just
a robot replacement.
        His senses were unable to extend within Doom's armor, he found
to his surprise, but his enhanced vision enabled him to see that behind
the faceplate were signs of human eyes, skin burnt and scarred from
an impetuous act years earlier after a failed experiment he still blamed
Reed Richards’ for. (*)
        He landed twenty feet from Doom, the closest The Monarch could
get to a compliment from the arrogant Fellow Of The Physical Discipline,
and sized his opponent up.
        "Greetings, Doom," he said at last, inclining his head slightly
towards The Monarch,"I am Insanis, Fellow Of The Physical Discipline,
soon to be Master Of The Physical Discipline."
        "I am Doom," replied Doom, and said no more.
        "Is that all you have to say?" asked Insanis with a contemptuous
laugh,"Do you want the last words you utter to be of such little
consequence?"
        "Their consequence is that they are the last words you shall
ever hear," replied Doom calmly,"And Doom came not to talk, but to punish
a foolish, pitiful creature that thinks it can come to Doom's country
and challenge it's rightful Ruler."
        "You are the pitiful one, Doom!" snapped Insanis, then forced
himself to calm.  Against Doom he could be like neither Barren nor Pulce,
but rather use both of their techniques, a mixture of brute power and
physical skill,"You are perhaps the greatest of The Old Humanity, but
you are Old Humanity, and you're time is done."
        "Enough," said Doom, and began striding forward,"Doom will suffer
your presence in his country no longer."
        And with a laugh, Insanis leaped forward to meet him.

        (*) Doom and Richards’ both attended the same college where they
far surpassed the most gifted student or teacher.  Whilst trying to
enter the netherworld in order to save his mother, Doom made a vital
calculation error and the machine exploded, very slightly scarring his
face.  Believing his perfect features to have been permanently marred
he created the famous Doom faceplate and, unable to wait, placed it on
his face while it was still hot, permanently searing it to his face.
        
        End Marvel Evolution 2. (2/3)

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