June 7, 2010
I've just uploaded two stories. These are my entries in an unofficial contest among the authors at XNXX.com (a video-streaming site that has the surprising quality of also hosting a large number of amateur sex stories). The contest was thought up by the authoress known as ejls. The gist of it was this: write a story that begins with the following paragraph:
The light fog added a moisture to the air. The coolness of the night wrapped around her like a wet towel, sending a shiver up her spine. She was lucky she knew the area so well, or she could have easily become lost. She looked through the trees at the house where he lived, slightly smiling at the one electric candle burning in the kitchen window.
Since she said we could enter more than once, I wrote two stories. I started the first one, Love at Second Sight, within a week of the announcement of the contest, in early March. Then toward the end of March, I suddenly came up with the idea for a different story that would work well starting off with a woman traveling through the woods to meet her lover, so I decided to write a second one, On a Moonlit Night, Wishes May Come True.
With both of the stories, I wanted to do something unexpected. I wanted to break away from the assumptions you might make from the first paragraph.
In "Love at Second Sight", I broke from the assumption that "she" is on her way to visit her lover. The candle in the window suggests that he's waiting for her, even calling to her, but in this case, I decided that the candle is not symbolic at all.
The girl in the story, fifteen-year-old Kelly Whitaker, is in fact going to see someone she knows, but not her lover. He's an old friend from when she was a child. A "stepbrother," if one could even call him that, who was fostered by her parents for a few months but proved to be too much of a "bad boy" for them to handle. He left an impression on Kelly though, who was attracted to him because he was dangerous. But she left an even bigger impression on him because she was not. Suffice it to say that with her as his inspiration, he's changed a lot in the time since they separated. When they meet again, it leads to a pretty typical romance though with the taboo of involving an underage girl. I'm not entirely satisfied with the story, but it's still a decent read.
I'm much happier with the second story, "On a Moonlit Night, Wishes May Come True." In this story, I strayed from an even bigger assumption that you would make from the first paragraph: that the sexual encounter would happen between a male and a female. When Lauren, the woman in the first paragraph, reaches the cottage of her lover, she discovers that he is not home, but a beautiful woman is there in his place. As she visits with the woman she discovers that there are many secrets to be learned that night, involving Audrey (the mysterious woman) and her brother Christopher (Lauren's lover that she was expecting to meet). There's more than a touch of the supernatural here, and a clever reader should be able to piece together the meaning of the secrets long before Lauren does.
I have to apologize for the timing of the story; it is neither based upon nor inspired by the "Twilight" series of books or movies. If it reminds you of them, sorry. Any similarity is just a coincidence.
As for the very vague hints of incest and possibly even bestiality, I'll leave that up to you and your dirty little mind.
By the way, "Love at Second Sight" came in at a respectable 4th place.
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