THE EROTIC WRITINGS OF DADDYCUMS

Musings



Island For Three Rewrite

September 8, 2009


I'm still alive, in case you're wondering. No, I haven't abandoned my hobby of writing erotica. I have several stories in the works that I'm just slow in getting finished. In the mean time, I did something that I've been planning to do for months now.

Due to some helpful (and occasionally uncharitable) comments from my readers, I found a number of embarrassing mistakes in Island For Three that needed to be fixed. So I did. Most of the major errors have to do with sailing, not surprising since I'm not a sailor. I'm still not entirely satisfied with it, but I doubt I'll make any more changes to it.

I made some major changes to Chapter 1, but the changes in all the rest of the story are minor. If you've read the story before, there's not really any need to read it again, unless you want to of course. If you haven't read it before, I invite you to do so. Like most of my shorter stories, it starts out with plot and gradually builds into the sex scenes at the end. If you don't mind a tale that's not all about sex, it's a decent adventure story.



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