March 20, 2009
Chapter 35 of Allison and the Primdales, which I've just uploaded, is one I wrote and inserted later, after all of Part 1 and Part 2 were already written. I was reading over this section of the book, and realized that the trip to Lissa's school had taken more than a day, so by necessity Greg and Allison and Rachael would have to spend the night somewhere along the road back. Since it was just the three of them, naturally Rachael would make things interesting for her sister and brother-in-law, so I couldn't just skip over it. The scene may not be crucial to the plot, but it's fun nonetheless.
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