Febuary 3, 2009
In Chapter 24 of Allison and the Primdales, which can now be read on the website or downloaded, we fast forward a couple of months to December, where Kari gives Jeff the best Christmas present he's ever had. Personally, if I were Jeff, I would be willing to forfeit all of my past and future Christmas presents for this one.
This chapter is the reason why I gave Kari a little sister. Because Allison and the Primdales was intended as a collection of pretty much all of my sexual fantasies so far, I couldn't let it go without a "girlfriend's little sister" story. I didn't want Jeff to be the type of guy who would fool around behind his girlfriend's back, so I compromised by having Kari not only know about it, but encourage it.
Of course, Crystal has developed way beyond this initial idea; she's kind of had to, since as long as Jeff is with Kari, there's no getting around having Crystal as at least a semi-major character. But that's what's so great about writing a long story like this. A simple idea can turn into something much bigger in scope.
By the way, two years have now passed in the story since the first chapter. There will be a couple more rapid jumps in time before the end of Part 1, then things will slow down for Part 2.
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