January 30, 2009
Chapter 23 of Allison and the Primdales, which you can now read on the website, is a charming and entertaining chapter that helps to develop the relationship between Jeff and his girlfriend's little sister. I think the whole thing walks the thin line between cute and sexy, making the reader wonder whether Crystal's flirting is just an extension of her teasing, or if she has feelings for Jeff that she's not admitting. Maybe she herself doesn't even know.
What does this mean for Jeff and Kari, though? Is Jeff going to turn out to be the kind of boy who cheats on his girlfriend? Is Crystal going to get jealous and scheme to break them up? Or are Jeff and Crystal just going to remain friends? Tune in next time and... Sorry. I got carried away there for a minute. Anyway, I'm not going to tell you how this affects things. You're just going to have to wait and find out.
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