January 16, 2009
I've added Chapter 19 of Allison and the Primdales to the website. Jeff and Kari finally admit their feelings for each other, and almost have sex. I broke it off early for three reasons. First, I wanted to show a tender and compassionate side of Jeff that will eventually become his defining trait. He's not just a horny teenage boy, but also a really nice guy. Second, I wanted to show Kari's hesitation, in order to emphasize the change she's going to go through later. But I won't say more about that until it happens. Third, I'm just a little stinker, and I wanted to tease the reader.
I know, ending the chapter like this after leading you along for several chapters is downright mean. Don't worry. The next chapter should satisfy you.
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