January 13, 2009
You can now read Chapter 18 of Allison and the Primdales. This chapter is just good clean sexy fun. Again there's no sex, but plenty of girls in swimsuits. This was one of my favorite chapters to write, and it's also one of my favorites to read, because it brings out the characters' personalities by having them play off of each other. If you were to read only this one single chapter, you would know almost as much about most of the characters as if you had read the book from the beginning. It develops the friendship between Brit and Crystal, which isn't particularly good for Jeff because they tend to gang up on him. It hints at Jeff's crush on Allison, and it shows that the so-called "popular girl" Kari doesn't have a problem being friends with the somewhat nerdy Jeff. It also reemphasizes that Allison is sometimes at heart just as much a kid as her stepchildren.
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