December 28, 2008
You can now read Chapter 13 of Allison and the Primdales. In this one, Greg and Allison visit a combination nightclub and brothel with an interesting theme, especially considering the type of story this is.
This is one of the chapters that I added late; I wrote it after I began posting the story. It's not strictly necessary, because you could skip it and you wouldn't even miss it. I added several of these chapters because I realized that in later parts of the story where I focus on the children, Greg is mostly missing. I needed some more chapters with him so that we wouldn't think of him as a minor character. He is, after all, a part of the family.
I also wanted to develop his character a little, to show that he's opening up to new experiences.
Unfortunately, I'm not entirely satisfied with the abruptness of the change in him here. It might be too much too soon. After all, Greg hasn't had much time to lose his stiff and self-proclaimed "fuddy-duddy" ways. That's why I begin the chapter with a conversation between Allison and him about that particular topic. It hopefully sets up the tone of the chapter so that the reader doesn't think Greg is acting completely out of character.
I needed to put this chater here because in Chapter 14 he's going to get wilder still, and it would be anticlimactic to put this chapter any later.
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