December 2, 2008
I've uploaded Chapter 6 of Allison and the Primdales. This chapter concludes the two that take place on Greg's and Allison's honeymoon. This one was kind of rushed; I just barely finished it yesterday, and I wanted to get it uploaded today in order to keep up with my schedule, so I haven't even had time to do any revising. Consider it a first draft. I'll probably make substantial changes to it later. Fortunately, the next unfinished chapter is Chapter 13, so if I continue uploading the finished chapters at 2 a week, that should give me over 3 weeks to finish it.
Like the previous chapter, Chapter 6 involves a photoshoot, but this time in a hidden tropical wonderland. Allison has been there before, and is eager to show it off to her new husband. Of course, what she doesn't tell him about it is what makes it particularly interesting.
Slightly reminiscent of my novella Island For Three, this chapter is very visual. There's no sex, though some mild lesbian touching between Allison and a couple of new friends. If you're not into lesbians, I'm afraid you're in for a disappointment because there will be a lot of girl-on-girl stuff in future chapters, so let this be your warning.
I plan to bring these new friends back in to the story in a future chapter. It will be just a single chapter because they're not as interesting as some of the other characters that I'll introduce later, especially in Part 2. But I'm getting ahead of myself. For now, just enjoy the scenery.
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