November 28, 2008
You can now read or download Chapter 5 of Allison and the Primdales. Chapters 5 and 6 are devoted to Greg's and Allison's honeymoon. I'm not completely satisfied with this chapter, partly because I was kind of rushed. I had planned to leave this one out and then write it later and insert it, but I realized that a sex story involving a wedding absolutely required at least one chapter that takes place on the honeymoon. So I started writing it after posting the first chapter. It ended up too long, so I split into two.
I may go back later and revise one or both of these chapters; since they don't advance the plot at all I could rewrite them from scratch without hurting anything. I don't think I'll do anything that drastic, but don't be surprised if they end up quite different in the final draft of this story.
Chapter 5 is kind of romantic but sometimes a little boring. However, there are a couple of scenes that I hope heat things up a little. And by the way, those handcuffs introduced on Greg's and Allison's wedding night are going to show up again in a future chapter that will make this one look like a Sunday sermon in comparison.
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