November 14, 2008
I've made up my mind regarding Allison and the Primdales. I'm going to go ahead and post it as a serial. This will accomplish four things. First, it sets a kind of vague deadline for me, which will help motivate me to finish it. Second, I'm kind of hoping for some positive feedback on it, which would also provide some motivation. Third, any suggestions I get from readers might give me inspiration for some of the parts I haven't written yet. Fourth, it gives me something to post every few days so that I won't disappear for a couple of months like I did after the first stories I uploaded.
Don't worry. This isn't a case of "I have a great idea for a story that is so insanely brilliant that it doesn't matter that I haven't even started working on it because the idea is so amazingly wonderful that I can't possibly lose the resolve to finish it and by the way can someone recommend a good book on how to write a novel?" (Can you tell I'm a little cynical?) I've already written about 70 chapters out of an estimated 90 to 100, so I'm not likely to give up at this stage.
Let me take some time to explain how this story came to be. I first got into writing erotica because I needed an outlet for my sexual fantasies. Because my favorite fetish is incest, I wanted to create a long story involving an entire family onto which I could project most of my fantasies. I ran into a problem though; I enjoy writing brother/sister and father/daughter scenes, along with the occasional cousin/cousin, uncle/niece, and sister/sister, but my one hangup is mother/son. It just doesn't appeal to me. Also, in the story I had planned the oldest girl was eighteen, which meant the parents would likely be at least forty. I know that some women can be very beautiful and sexy well into their forties, but I didn't want to write a story involving a woman that old. That suggested a stepmother who was quite a bit younger than the father, which would naturally bring up some questions. I realized there was the potential for an entire story behind the difference in their ages. If I were to tell that story though, I would need to backtrack my original plans and start it from a point several years before the real events of the tale.
If I was going to do that, I decided to go all out. By introducing a new stepmother in the first chapter, there was an implication that her role in the family was a focal point of the story. So I decided to make her the catalyst for the changes that they all go through. I would show subtle shifts in their attitudes early on, leading up to the later events that I had already planned. I made the stepmother beautiful, charming, sexy, and nearly perfect in order to give the father a motivation to marry a woman fifteen years his junior, and I made the father rich to give the stepmother a motivation to marry a man fifteen years her senior. I had to scrap the original story that I had planned and rebuild it around the new plot device. I salvaged some of the scenes, came up with a series of events that could take place over the three years between the time Allison came into the Primdales' lives and the real meat of the story, and ended up with something far longer and more ambitious than I had ever planned. Fortunately, the fact that I had already invested a dozen of my sexual fantasies in this story gave me the willpower to keep writing it. Besides, by the time I had written a few scenes for it, I had fallen in love with the characters, so I kept this one going in the background while I wrote other shorter stories like New Daughter and Injured Cousin.
I'll admit, it's full of clich�s, like the nerdy boy, the popular girl, the hot stepmother, the adoring little sister, the strict father, the nymphomaniac, the wild roommate, etc. etc. etc. Some of the scenes aren't the most original either. But I believe that putting them together in a long story like this helps the reader to care about the characters more, which makes those scenes all the more erotic.
The first chapter of Allison and the Primdales is up now, and there are plenty more to come. I'm planning to upload a chapter every few days, about two a week. This is a good time for me to start posting because the story begins about this time of year.
The first few chapters are really just setting the stage for the future, so don't expect a lot of sex (although there's a pretty good oral scene in the first chapter). Mainly we just get to know the characters here. Most of the fun stuff comes later.
As mentioned before, this is a work in progress. I may make changes to the story even after it's been posted, such as inserting new chapters and even doing moderate rewrites. I don't have any plans to do anything too major, but I'm not going to eliminate the possibility.
If you don't mind reading something unfinished, I'd love to hear your feedback on this story, as well as your suggestions. Although most of the chapters are planned out, I haven't worked out all of the details yet, so if you give me some good ideas, you just might find them in the final story.
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