Note: This story was dynamically reformatted for online reading convenience. (THIS IS MY FIRST STORY.. I LOVE WRITING EROTIC FICTION SO THIS WILL BE GETTING A WHOLE LOT HOTTER...BUT I NEED THE MOTIVATION..PLZ LET ME KNOW HOW YOU LIKE IT... LEAVE ME MSGS AND SUGGESTIONS, COMMENTS AND/OR ADVICE..THANKS) I WALK INTO A BAR AND SEE PEOPLE SCATTERED ALL OVER THE PLACE. I SIT DOWN ORDER A DIRTY BONG WATER AND WATCH MY SURROUNDINGS. A WOMAN ACROSS THE BAR PEEKS MY INTEREST AND I BEGIN TO TAKE HER IN, LONG BLACK HAIR, HER BABY BLUE EYES ARE RIMMED BY BLACK MAKEUP, NOT TOO MUCH BUT IT LOOKED GOOD, HER TIGHT BLACK T-SHIRT HAD A WHITE SKULL ON THE FRONT, HER NAVAL WAS PARTIALLY EXPOSED AND THE LITTLE STRAND OF DIAMONDS SPARKLED IN THE DIM LIGHT, THE BLACK LEATHER JEANS SHE WORE CLUNG TO HER IMPRESSIVE MUSCLES AND ENDED SOMEWHERE BENEATH THE BLACK COMBAT BOOTS SHE WORE. I LICKED MY LIPS, THREW BACK THE SHOT AND MADE MY WAY TOWARD HER. I GOT TO THE TABLE AND SHOT HER WHAT I LIKE TO THINK OF AS MY SEXY SMILE. SHE COCKED HER HEAD TO THE RIGHT AND LOOKED AT ME. "CAN I HELP YOU?" SHE ASKS. "I SPOTTED YOU FROM ACROSS THE ROOM AND I JUST HAD TO MAKE YOUR ACQUAINTANCE." "IS THAT YOUR BEST LINE?" I FROWNED AND LOOKED AT HER HARD. "ARE YOU LOST FOR WORDS?" SHE SMILED. "NO...I'M TRYING TO THINK WHAT I SAID THAT GAVE YOU SUCH AN IDEA OF ME." "YOU WALKED OVER HERE LIKE YOU JUST STEPPED OUT OF A GQ MAGAZINE." "I'M A GIRL." "YEAH I KNOW." "OH..."I LOOKED DOWN AND BEGAN TO BLUSH. FEELING LIKE AN IDIOT I TURNED AROUND AND WENT BACK TO THE BAR. I SAT THERE WITH MY HEAD BENT LIKE A TAIL BETWEEN THE LEGS OF A DOG. "FOLLOW ME...." HER WARM BREATH TICKLED MY EAR AND I SAT UP STRAIGHT. I TURNED AND WATCHED HER DRIFT OUT OF THE BAR. I STOOD FAST AND FOLLOWED HER OUTSIDE. SHE WAS LEANING ON THE PASSENGER SIDE OF MY 1967 BLACK MUSTANG SHELBY, THE GREY DOUBLE RACING STRIPES GOING UP THE MIDDLE SHINED IN THE MOONLIGHT. I LEANED MY BODY UP AGAINST HER'S AS I REACHED BEHIND HER AND UNLOCKED THE DOOR. I HEARD HER SHARP INTAKE OF BREATH WHEN I PRESSED MY KNEE UP AGAINST THE TIGHT LEATHERS SHE WORE. I WALKED AROUND TO THE DRIVERS SIDE AND SLID INSIDE. i STARTED UP THE ENGINE AND IT PURRED TO LIFE. THE BLUE DASH LIGHTS LIT UP AND THE CHROME INTERIOR GLITTERED. SHE RAN HER TAN HAND ACROSS THE CHROME AND SIGHED. "THIS IS SOME REALLY NICE INTERIOR." I CHUCKLED. CAROLINE WAS MY BABY. "HOW DID YOU KNOW THIS WAS MY RIDE?" I ASKED AS I PULLED OUT OF THE LOT. "I SAW YOU PULL UP." I HID MY SURPRISE AT THE FACT THAT SHE HAD OBVIOUSLY TAKEN NOTICE OF ME. GOOD THING I HAD DECIDE TO WEAR MY SLIGHTLY BAGGY BLUE JEANS AND WHITE T- SHIRT. I LOOKED DOWN AT THE WHITE HIGH TOPS THAT GRACED MY FEET AS I PUSHED THE ACCELERATOR DOWN A LITTLE LOWER. "SO WHERE AM I TAKING YOU?" "I HAVEN'T QUITE FIGURED IT OUT YET... BUT MAYBE WE SHOULD TALK FIRST." "TALK ABOUT WHAT?" I HELD MY BREATH PRAYING TO GOD THAT SHE DIDN'T SAY SHE HAS AN STD, OR SHE'S MARRIED AND JUST CURIOUS... I COULDN'T DEAL WITH ANOTHER ONE OF THOSE. "I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT THIS IS JUST SEX... I DON'T WANT YOU CATCHING FEELINGS AND TRYING TO MARRY ME." I LAUGHED AS I PRAISED GOD. "I'M WELL AWARE OF WHAT THIS IS.. AND I DOUBT I WILL FALL IN LOVE FOR ANYONE... I AM WELL SITUATED IN THE SINGLE LIFE." "SO WHY WERE YOU TRYING TO PICK UP CHICKS IN A BAR? COULDN'T YOU FIND ONE OF THOSE "SITUATIONS" AND HAVE SOME FUN WITH ONE OF THEM?" "NAH, I DECIDED I WANTED TO FEEL THAT THRILL OF SEX FOR THE FIRST TIME WITH SOMEONE NEW." "OH... WELL AT LEAST YOUR HONEST." "I DON'T THINK I'VE TOLD MORE THEN TEN LIES MY WHOLE 23 YEARS." I SAID WITH A SMILE. "23... THAT'S YOUNG." "HOW OLD ARE YOU?" "28... I KNOW IT'S OLD." I LOOKED AT HER AND FROWNED. SHE DIDN'T LOOK OLDER THEN 24. "YOUR REALLY 28?" SHE LAUGHED. "YEAH.. WHAT I DON'T LOOK IT?" "NO... NOT REALLY." "THANKS... SO... DO YOU WANT TO EXCHANGE NAMES?" "I DON'T KNOW... IF YOU WANT TO WE CAN." "HMM... DO YOU DO THAT A LOT?" I GLANCED OVER AT HER QUICKLY. "WHAT?" "I SAID DO YOU DO THAT A LOT? TRY TO TAKE OUT ANY KIND OF PART IN WHERE WE GO OR WHAT WE DO?" "EXCUSE ME? ARE YOU PSYCHOANALYZING ME?" "I... SORRY... I DIDN'T MEAN TO PRY...SHIT" SHE SLUMPED IN HER SEAT, CROSSED HER ARMS AND LOOKED OUT THE WINDOW. FOR A FEW MINUTES I JUST DROVE IN SILENCE, STEALING GLANCES AT HER HERE AND THERE. FINALLY I SIGHED, NOT BEING ABLE TO STAND THE SILENCE ONE MORE MINUTE. "WHAT'S YOUR NAME?" SHE LOOKED AT ME FOR A SECOND BEFORE SITTING UP. "CAITLIN KAVANAGH...WHAT'S YOURS?" "RAELYNN SCOTT...MAY I ASK YOU A PERSONAL QUESTION?" "YEAH... BUT I GET TO ASK ONE IN RETURN." "I... FINE... OKAY." "YOU GO FIRST..." SHE SMILES AND TURNS TO FACE ME. I GLANCE AT HER AND BACK TO THE ROAD... WE WERE ALMOST AT MY CABIN... WHAT IF THAT'S NOT WHERE SHE WANTED TO GO? I PULL INTO THE LONG DIRTY DRIVE AND DRIVE HALF WAY UP. I STOP THE ENGINE AND TURN TO HER."WE'RE AT MY CABIN... DO YOU WANNA BE HERE OR SHOULD I TAKE YOU SOMEWHERE ELSE?" "IS THAT YOUR QUESTION RAELYNN?" "NO.. BUT IT'S THE ONE I NEED YOU TO ANSWER FIRST." "OH... YES, I'LL COME IN WITH YOU." "GOOD." I TURN THE CAR BACK ON AND ROAR THE REST OF THE WAY UP MY DRIVE. I QUICKLY WHIP THE MUSTANG UP TO THE FRONT STAIRS AND HOP OUT. I OPENED HER DOOR AND SHE UNFOLDED HERSELF GRACEFULLY FROM THE CAR AND STOOD IN FRONT OF ME. HER COMBAT BOOTS HAD ALMOST NO HEEL AND SHE STILL WAS ALMOST TALLER THEN ME. I SHUT THE DOOR AND HIT A BUTTON ON THE REMOTE ATTACHED TO MY KEYS. THE LIGHTS IN THE LOWER LEVEL OF MY CABIN TURNED ON. I UNLOCKED THE DOOR AND PULLED HER GENTLY INTO THE FOYER. "WOW... YOU DIDN'T SAY ANYTHING ABOUT BEING LOADED." "DOES IT REALLY MATTER?" "NO... YOU JUST DON'T SEEM THE RICH TYPE." "AND WHAT IS THE RICH TYPE?" "A LITTLE CONCEITED, THEY LIKE TO FLAUNT THEIR MONEY SO EVERYONE KNOWS THEIR BETTER." "I SEE... WELL I DON'T ACTUALLY CARE MORE THEN 60 BUCKS IN CASH ON ME." "WHY?" "I LIKE TO USE MY BANK CARD FOR BIG THINGS... BUT IT'S NICE TO BE ABLE TO GET A SODA AND BAG OF CHIPS WHILE I'M OUT OR TYLENOL IF I GET A HEADACHE." "I SEE... WHAT DO YOU DO FOR A LIVING?" I LAUGHED."CAN WE SIT DOWN BEFORE WE START PLAYING 20 QUESTIONS." CAITLIN SMILED AND NODDED. I LED HER TO THE LIVING ROOM AND LIT THE FIRE UNDER THE FLAT SCREEN MOUNTED OVER IT. I TUNED ON THE TV AND HANDED HER THE REMOTE."IF YOU HIT THE MUSIC BUTTON IT BRING UP ALL 2500 OF MY SONGS... I BET YOU CAN FIND SOMETHING YOU LIKE... THE REMOTE WORKS KINDA LIKE AN I POD." "I SEE... WHERE ARE YOU GOING?" "I'M GONNA CHANGE INTO SOME BASKETBALL SHORTS AND A BEATER, GRAB SOME SODAS AND I'LL BE RIGHT BACK. MAKE YOURSELF COMFORTABLE." "OKAY... HURRY BACK." "I'LL BE BACK IN TWENTY MINUTES." I SMILED AND RACED FOR THE STAIRS. I THREW OPEN MY DOOR AND STARTED PULLING OFF MY JEANS. I GRABBED A PAIR OF BLACK AND NEON GREEN BASKETBALL SHORTS AND PULLED THEM UP OVER THE BLUE AND BLACK PLAID BOXERS I WORE. I THREW MY JEANS AND T SHIRT ON TOP OF A CHAIR AND GRABBED A WHITE BEATER FROM ANOTHER DRAWER. I PULLED IT ON AND CHECKED MY HAIR ONCE BEFORE GOING BACK DOWNSTAIRS. I STOPPED AT THE FOOT OF THE STAIRS AND SMILED AS "BRING ME THE HORIZON" SCREAMED FROM THE SPEAKERS, CAITLIN LIKED METAL. I RAN INTO THE KITCHEN AND GRABBED TWO MOUNTAIN DEWS FROM THE FRIDGE. I KICKED IT SHUT AND WALKED INTO THE LIVING ROOM. HOLY SHIT! I WAS IN TROUBLE. *************************************************************************** *** I WATCHED CAITLIN LEAN BACK HER HEAD, CLOSE HER EYES AND HUM ALONG TO THE SCREAMING. I WALKED IN AND SAT DOWN OPPOSITE FROM HER. "SO YOU LIKE METAL? THAT'S SURPRISING." SHE OPENED HER EYES AND LOOKED AT ME. "REALLY? WHY?" "YOU JUST DON'T LOOK THE TYPE I GUESS..." "HMM... THANK YOU. I LOVE MOUNTAIN DEW." "ME TOO...IT'S THE ONLY THING I DRINK." "SO WHAT DO YOU DO FOR A LIVING?" CAITLIN ASKED SIPPING HER DRINK. "GEEZ... I'M A THERAPIST." "REALLY?" "YES..." I SMILED. "SO YOU KNEW WHAT I WAS DOING TO YOU IN THE CAR?" "KINDA... NOW WHAT DO YOU DO?" "I'M A STRIPPER." "WHAT?" "YEAH... IT PAYS FOR COLLEGE...I'M MAJORING IN PSYCHOLOGY." "OH.. THAT'S GOOD." "BUT IT BOTHERS YOU...WHY?" SHE COCKS HER HEAD A LITTLE AND HER BLACK HAIR FALLS ACROSS HER FACE A LITTLE. "IT... I DON'T KNOW... IT DOESN'T REALLY." I DON'T WANNA SAY ANYTHING THAT WILL MAKE HER LEAVE. "HMM... YOUR NOT A GOOD LIAR." SHE LAUGHS AND LAYS HER HAND ON MY THIGH AND I JUMP AT THE CONTACT. "YOUR NERVOUS..." I DON'T SAY ANYTHING. IT'S REALLY HARD TO CONCENTRATE WITH HER FINGERS MAKING LITTLE CIRCLES ON MY THIGH. SHE SWIRLS HER FINGERS A LITTLE HIGHER AND ELECTRICITY RACES THROUGH ME. I GASP AND SHE LOOKS UP. MAYBE NOW WOULD BE A GOOD TIME TO TELL HER THAT I'VE ONLY BEEN INTIMATE WITH ONE GIRL MY WHOLE LIFE... MAYBE NOT. SHE MOVES A LITTLE CLOSER AND LOOKS DEEP INTO MY LIGHT BROWN EYES. I STARE BACK INTO HER BABY BLUE ONES. "WHAT DO YOU WANNA DO?" SHE WHISPERS TO ME AND THE SOUND MAKES ME WANT TO MOAN. "I DON'T KNOW... OR CARE... HOW ABOUT YOU PICK." "WHY DON'T YOU SHOW ME YOUR BEDROOM?" SHE STANDS UP AND PULLS ME WITH HER. I'M CAUGHT OFF GUARD BY HER STRENGTH AND STUMBLE INTO HER. SHE WRAPS HER ARMS AROUND ME AND OUR NOSES ARE TOUCHING. "SORRY." I WHISPER AND TRY TO STEP BACK. SHE HOLDS ME CLOSER. "DON'T BE." SHE SMILES AND LEANS FORWARD. I ALLOW MY EYES TO CLOSE AND I FEEL HER SOFT LIPS TOUCH MINE. I OPEN MY MOUTH AND ALLOW HER TO EXPLORE. I STROKE HER TONGUE WITH MY OWN AND AM REWARDED BY THE SLIGHT MOAN SHE GIVES OFF. SUDDENLY SHE PULLS BACK AND I CAN SEE HER PUPILS ARE DILATED. "BEDROOM.." SHE BREATHS RESTING HER FOREHEAD AGAINST MINE. "RIGHT... COME ON." I LEAD HER UP THE STAIRS AND DOWN THE HALL TO MY ROOM. I OPENED THE DOOR AND LEAD HER INSIDE. I CLOSED THE DOOR AND LOCKED IT, I WASN'T SURE IF MARTA WOULD COME TOMORROW AND CLEAN. THE LAST THING I WANTED WAS FOR HER TO CATCH ME WITH SOME STRANGE GIRL IN MY ROOM. I DID NOT NEED ANOTHER LECTURE FROM MY MAID/MOTHER HEN. "WOW... YOUR ROOM IS AMAZING." I GLANCED AROUND THE HUGE ROOM AND TOOK EVERYTHING IN WITH HER. THE DARK BLUE PAINTED WALLS, THE BLACK TRIM, MY BLACK SLEIGH BED WITH THE MATCHING SATIN SHEETS, THE BLACK END TABLES. EVERYTHING WAS DARK IN MY ROOM BUT SURPRISINGLY IT WAS A REALLY WARM AND INVITING ROOM. "THANKS." SHE SAT ON MY BED AND BEGAN PULLING OFF HER BOOTS. HER TOES WERE COVERED BY RAINBOW POLKA DOTTED SOCKS. SHE PULLED THEM OFF AND STUFFED THEM INTO HER BOOTS, THEN SHE STARTED TAKING OFF HER PANTS. SOON SHE STOOD BEFORE ME IN HER MATCHING BRA AND PANTIES, PINK. SHE LOOKED AT ME AND BIT HER LIP. "SO ARE YOU GONNA GET UNDRESSED OR JUST FUCK THE SHIT OUT OF ME WITH YOUR EYES?" "HUH?...OH SORRY." I QUICKLY SHUCKED MY SHORTS AND WIFE BEATER. I FELT REALLY SELF CONSCIENCE STANDING BEFORE HER IN MY BOXERS AND SPORTS BRA SO I HOPPED IN THE BED AND UNDER THE COMFORTER. "OH MY... ARE YOU SHY RAELYNN?" SHE LAUGHED AS SHE TEASED ME. "I... WELL SORTA... I DON'T KNOW." "FOR SUCH A SMART GIRL, YOU DON'T KNOW MUCH HUH?" "I'M SORRY... I DON'T KNOW WHY I'M SO NERVOUS." "WELL MAYBE WE CAN FIX THAT." SHE SMILED AND CRAWLED UNDER THE COVERS. I BIT MY LIP AS SHE STRADDLED ME. SHE ROCKED HER HIPS A LITTLE AS SHE LEANED DOWN AND KISSED ME AGAIN. I DEVOURED HER LIPS AND LET MY HANDS WANDER AROUND HER TIGHT BODY. MY FINGERS SKIMMED HER WAIST AND TRAVELED SLOWLY ACROSS HER RIBS. SHE GROANED AND GROUND HER PELVIS AGAINST MINE. I LET MY HANDS TRAVEL AROUND TO HER BACK AND PULLED HER CLOSER. I WANTED TO BE ON TOP. I ROLLED HER OVER AND STRADDLED HER. SHE PRESSED HER HIPS UP INTO ME AND I PUSHED BACK. SHE WAS BREATHING HEAVY AND HER EYES WERE GLASSY. I TRAILED KISSES DOWN HER NECK TO THE TOPS OF HER BREAST AND SMILED. "CAN I REMOVE THIS?" SHE NODDED AND I REACHED ONE HAND BEHIND HER BACK AND SNAPPED OPEN HER BRA. SHE LEANED UP ON HER ELBOWS AND THE BRA SLIPPED DOWN HER ARMS. OH MY GOD! I STARED AT HER PIERCED NIPPLES AND FELT MY MOUTH WATER. I SUCKED ONE OF HER ERECT NIPPLES INTO MY MOUTH AND SUCKED HARD. SHE GRABBED MY HEAD AS A GROWL ESCAPED HER. I FLICKED THE NIPPLE WITH MY TONGUE AND SWIRLED IT AROUND THE SMALL BARBELL. "RAE... I... UHM... OH SHIT..." SHE WORDS CAME OUT IN SHORT GASPS AS I BIT AND SUCKED ON HER NIPPLES. I PLACED MY HAND ON HER THROAT AND GENTLY PUSHED HER DOWN ON THE BED AS I SWITCHED NIPPLES. BY THE TIME I WAS DONE, SHE WAS WRITHING AND PANTING BENEATH ME. I SLID MY FINGER BENEATH HER PANTIES AND BEGAN TO PULL THEM DOWN. SHE LIFTED HER HIPS AND I TOSSED THEM TO THE FLOOR WITH HER BRA. HER PUSSY WAS GORGEOUS. A DUSTING OF BLACK FUR MADE A LINE DOWN THE MIDDLE OF HER MOUND TO HER TREASURE CHEST. OTHER THEN THAT, SHE WAS AS SMOOTH AS A BABY'S BOTTOM. I LEANED DOWN AND LICKED UP HER SLIT. HER HIPS BUCKED AND I DID IT AGAIN. I WATCHED HER AS I SLOWLY SLID TWO FINGERS INSIDE OF HER. SHE WAS WET, HOT AND TIGHT. AS I PUSHED MY TWO FINGERS TO THE HILT, SHE CRIED OUT MY NAME AND ARCHED HER BACK, RISING FROM THE BED. I PULLED AWAY SLOWLY AND LOOKED DOWN. MY FINGERS WERE COATED WITH HER JUICES. I BROUGHT MY FINGERS TO MY MOUTH AND SUCKED THEM CLEAN. HER EYES WIDENED AND I SMILED. "RAE... PLEASE CAN YOU... JUST DO IT." SHE PANTED AS I LICKED AND SUCKED HER CREAM FROM MY FINGERS. "ARE YOU IN A HURRY?" "I WANT YOU TO MAKE ME CUM. STOP TEASING ME... JUST FUCK ME." SHE BUCKED HER HIPS FORWARD AND I NODDED. I SLAMMED MY FINGERS INSIDE OF HER AND SHE SCREAMED MY NAME AS HER BODY LEFT THE BED. I PUMPED SLOW AND STEADY IN AND OUT OF HER. SHE MOANS AND PANTING WAS LOUD AND I COULD FEEL HER PUSSY SUCKING ON MY FINGERS. I MOVED FASTER AND SHE THREW HER HANDS INTO THE HEADBOARD OF MY BED AS SHE SCREAMED HER RELEASE. WHEN SHE WAS DONE, SHE COLLAPSED BACK ON THE BED PANTING AND SHAKING. I KISSED HER GENTLY AND PULLED HER INTO MY ARMS. "THAT WAS JUST THE WARM UP... IN FIVE MINUTES I'M GOING TO EAT YOUR PUSSY UNTIL YOU CAN'T MOVE." I WHISPERED INTO HER EAR. I HEARD HER SWALLOW HARD AND SMILED. (THIS IS THE END OF CHAPTER ONE...BUT DON'T WORRY... THERE WILL BE LOTS MORE SEX AND EVEN SOME TOYS... IF YOU HAVE ANY SUGGESTIONS PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE EMAIL ME... I'LL MAKE SURE TO STATE YOUR NAME AND THAT YOU HELPED IN MY DEDICATION...THANK YOU FOR BEING FANS... WILL UPDATE IN TWO WEEKS...)