THE PERFECT WOMEN-IN-PRISON FLICK by Joe Doe First, sorry to say, this isn't a review of the best WIP movie ever, with a link to download it for free. Instead, this is my response to the essay by Pat Powers, "The Perfect Women in Prison Movie." www.bondagerotica.com/articles/women_in_prison_movies/best_women_in_prison_movie.html He makes a number of interesting points that I agree with: 1) The heroine is placed in both a sympathetic and a submissive role. You can feel sorry for her and root for her while simultaneously enjoying the fantasy of watching a beautiful woman in chains. 2) Part of the pleasure is in watching women "institutionalized" -– from "reception" on, they are systematically degraded by an indifferent bureaucracy designed to subdue and humiliate them. 3) Finally, and I'll quote Powers directly, on this one: "Finally -- and this is extremely important -- prisoners have had a huge fall from grace, sliding from the relatively protected environs of society to the lowly status of prisoner." I agree that this third element is most important, and it dovetails nicely with my examination of "The Perfect Strip Search Story –- Marcy"s First Time." (If you"re reading this, Dudley, I'm still waiting for the follow-up posting about Marcy's other visit to County, where she wore a lot of clothes.) Powers recognizes that the essence of these stories is the contrast between the heroine's former situation of status and power, and her lowly situation now. Mr. Powers, again: "So you start out with the strip searches and the body cavity search. And you don't portray it as impersonal and institutional. You focus on the people. This is where the women's WIP movies that show up on the Lifetime Sentence Channel excel. They show the woman who was dressed nicely and surrounded by friends on the outside, now a naked woman bending over, legs spread (a powerful posture of submission), listening uneasily as the guard pulls on a latex glove, and then there's a close up on her face while she"s grimacing as the guard probes her vagina and anus." I think this is a good guide to writing stories for this board. Don't focus on the mechanics of the situation. "I was going through airport security, when suddenly...." Even if you were searched by R2D2, the basic mechanics are all the same. Focus on the psychology of the situation. Who was watching? A friend? A co-worker? A subordinate? How did they feel about your predicament? And how did that make YOU feel? How did it make you feel when you performed a slow striptease to order? What was the guard"s reaction? How did you feel when they slipped on the glove and gave you the order to bend over? Mr. Power also suggests frequent public bondage, which is an interesting idea, and it's one that I don't use as much in my stories as I might. "You show women in chains wherever possible, and as often as possible, especially in public, most especially before friends and relatives -- something many WIP films are strangely shy about doing. Most female prisoners are cuffed in front and wear belly chains, but it"s better to have them chained with their wrists behind them to increase their vulnerability." He nails the key idea, the humiliation of the situation, by suggesting the woman be bound in public, preferably in front of friends and relatives who knew her in her previous incarnation. It's much more mortifying to be in chains when you're the only one so bound, and people you know are there. It's the psychology that I liked so much in my essay, "Tibool's Pictures." www.asstr.org/files/Authors/C_Lakewood/Stories%20by%20Joe%20Doe/Tibool"s%20Pictures.txt The picture itself is here: http://www.chainganggirls.com/images/tib36.jpg What makes this so erotic is the contrast between the casual editor, dressed in his suit-and-tie, and the tense, know-it-all reporter, cuffed, barefoot, with the sores from the chaingang cuffs clearly visible on her bare ankles, dressed in the humiliating uniform her undercover assignment requires. She was once virtually his peer on the newspaper, but now the body language says it all. The editor, with his legs casually crossed, leans back comfortably on the bench as he literally talks down to the reporter. She, humiliated, in contrast, nervously kneads her fingers together as she leans forward in a submissive, defensive crouch. Powers also favors prostitution scenarios, of which you find a lot in my stories. Real prostitution (like prison) is nasty stuff, but, as a fantasy, it's a good way to enforce the heroine's sense of helplessness. The only thing she has left to offer is her body, and, even then, the goods (and the profits) belong to someone else. We do have a slightly different take on the REASON for the incarceration. He seems to favor women falsely imprisoned on bogus charges, and reasons that it's more dramatic to see an ordinary housewife experience a "fall from grace" than a prostitute or female gang leader. I agree, but I think the contrast is even MORE powerful if the woman is going into prison voluntarily, as part of some sort of undercover assignment. Since this is the main area where we differ, I'll concentrate on our difference here in more detail. Being a police officer or an FBI agent is a woman's ultimate power trip. And she may be in prison to expose the corruption behind bars. But, paradoxically, to achieve that end she must surrender all of her authority and play the victim. Consider the episode of "Law & Order SVU" where Detective Olivia Benson goes undercover in a woman"s prison. She is the prototype of an intelligent, powerful career woman, and the audience is used to seeing her in the superior position, busting bad guys and comforting the victims of abuse. But, in this episode, she must play the victim, emotionally and mentally. The writers clearly understand the powerful psychology of the situation. Her captain warns her: "If you go inside you'll have no authority, no rights, no backup." In other words, she will be stripped of everything and become just another victim, a point emphasized in the melodramatic voice-over read by the show's psychiatrist as we watch the once powerful detective being "processed": the trial, the prison bus, the cuffed march into prison, the strip search, the shower, the frisk by a male guard. "Abusive father, abusive husband. Just like all the other inmates. You"re a target for abuse. Every man's punching bag. At times, you will feel humiliated and...degraded. You'll have no privacy. You'll shower, sleep, dress, and use the toilet in full view of other people. You're going to see things you want to stop with every fiber of your being. But you can't react. Ever." No, my friends, Joe Doe or Lakewood didn't write the narration. This really was on network TV. See the clip here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zUSCUp0ql-E&feature=related Although it's a different scenario, its psychology (and the breathless narration) is similar to the incident where Tyra Banks went into prison for her talk show to see what it was like. In her blog she said she went because she was "fascinated" with prison, but it takes only a few minutes to transform her from a powerful talk show host and wealthy supermodel to just another black girl in prison. The video is here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CwgIZQDY5zc As with Tibool's picture, sometime a single image can perfectly crystallize the psychology of a situation: http://www.aolcdn.com/channels/07/02/446b5b1f-0007a-033d1-400cb8e1 Tyra's dull, grim expression and thousand-yard-stare as she stands naked before the camera, clutching her prisoner ID and her orange scrubs, makes it clear that the former supermodel knows what it is to be "processed." Powerful and in charge only a few minutes before, now she's just another con. The "undercover" scenario is a popular one on television, with both reporters and fictional heroines shucking down and bending over so that justice can be done. A few favorites: Charlie's Angels: Angels in Chains Charlie's Angels: Caged Angels The Fall Guy: Prisoner (available on Youtube) Mutant X: The Taking of Crows Silk Stalkings: The Party Third Watch: Leap of Faith The Mutant X example is unusual in that you see the girl's reaction during the cavity search, which I'd never seen in a TV show before. The Third Watch and Fall Guy examples are unusual, since the detective and the bounty hunter characters are incarcerated on bogus charges and have to face prison without even the flimsy safety net of being undercover. In this way, they are more similar in tone to "GOTHIKA," where the lovely psychiatrist, played by Hallie Berry, finds herself imprisoned in her own asylum. In the 1972 TV movie "Women in Chains" (also called "Terror in Cellblock C") the undercover safety net vanishes. Lois Nettleton plays a goody-goody parole officer who sets up a phony ID for herself with her co-worker so that she can investigate a series of mysterious "accidents" in a woman's prison. Basking in self-righteousness, our intrepid reformer truly goes all the way: not only does she fake a prison record for herself and put needle marks in her arms, she actually dyes her hair blonde. Unfortunately, her co-worker (the only other person who knows about her field trip) is accidentally killed, and our little princess is in prison for real. This scenario offers the best of both worlds: a voluntary incarceration where the cavalry is destroyed on the way. Some highlights: a) In reception, our undercover officer endures a most unpleasant delousing. One particular shot shows a prisoner's point-of-view, with the hose spraying directly at the camera. I liked that shot a lot, and it made me think about how much (even for guys) submission scenarios are fantasy fulfillments. After all, when you write, or fantasize, you are all the characters, and think of things from their point of view. My stories, for example, are much more from the woman's point of view than the guy's. Interesting.... b) Surprised that no one comes to rescue her, she sneaks to a phone and calls her friend for help. Horrified to learn that her friend has been killed, she asks for her boss, only to have the temp secretary put her on hold. She pleads for her to listen, but the muzak starts. (Ha! I guess in the modern version her call would be transferred to India.) The guards burst in and drag her away from the phone just as her boss comes on the line. c) At the end of the film, when she reveals to the other inmates that she"s really a parole officer trapped on the inside and targeted for termination by the head matron, she gets little sympathy. Rather than protecting her, they accuse her of slumming, and basically tell her, "Welcome to our world, bitch!" I think this scene also hits on a key element of these stories. The undercover officer is, on some level, being punished for her arrogance in thinking that she can "handle" prison. After all, she"s a cop, and she"s thrown lots of girls in jaill. How much different can it be to be on the receiving end? Lots different, as she finds out to her dismay (and the audience's delight). You can see the teaser and the first couple of minutes of this movie (and a brief glimpse of the delousing scene) here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BgQmMRTJt0g&feature=related Silk Stalkings isn't seen on television much nowadays, and it's an interesting hybrid of genres, so it deserves a mention. In this one, Detective Cassie St. John (played by the lovely Janet Gunn -– google her picture for a treat!) is stopped for speeding in a small southern town. She identifies herself as a police officer, but, unfortunately, she left her badge and gun in her other purse. (I hate it when that happens.) The Sheriff hauls her off to jail, and, from her cell, she asks him to call her superior, Captain Bristol. The Sheriff tells her he already called, and the Palm Beach police department claims they never heard of her. Cassie pleads that it's obviously a dreadful and totally inexplicable mix-up (the audience will agree with her on that point), but, locked in a cell, what's a girl (or a viewer) to do? She ends up in court, where she argues with the judge over the amount of her fine (always a good idea) and gets sentenced to duty at the Charlie's Angels Prison Farm. And so our intrepid lady detective is dutifully "processed" into prison, and given hoe duty (the kind where you actually farm). At this point, she makes a call to her aunt and tells her that she's going to be late for her niece's birthday party (at this rate, by about 3-5 years). When she hangs up the phone, it's revealed that she's actually been talking to her captain...and that she"s undercover. This makes no sense whatsoever, of course. If she's undercover, why have her go in claiming to be herself and identifying herself as a police officer? Wouldn't that make her investigation of the prison a tad more difficult? Clearly the writers were having fun with the notion of the powerful and in-charge Detective Cassie having an incredibly ditzy blonde moment and losing her badge and gun, at the same moment her police department decides to execute the bureaucratic blunder of all time by forgetting who she was. They wanted to enjoy the sensation of having her trapped in a situation of ACTUAL powerlessness, as opposed to the more limited powerlessness that a genuine undercover assignment implies. Trapped in a real prison on real charges, Cassie has "no authority, no rights, no backup." Sorry. Wrong show. Anyway, once it's established she's there undercover, we get a nice shower scene, a white slavery ring, and a party where Cassie is encouraged to become a ho (the other kind) So after a cheerfully preposterous setup, they lapse into standard stuff from the Charlie's Angels playbook. The setup actually reminds me a playful silly-putty version of LUST FOR FREEDOM, where a big city police detective is accidentally chucked into the prison farm as part of the county's free "incarcerate-the-pretty-travelers" program. Of course, in this case, it's SLIGHTLY more believable. Detective Jillian Cates stops to help another woman along the road, only to find that she's an escapee from the prison. The Sheriff shows up, and Jillian agrees to accompany him to make a statement. She is drugged, and the careless deputy ignores the contents of her purse (her badge and gun) when he processes her. So, by the time she wakes up, she's in prison, and identifying her true status will only make things worse. It also contains one of my favorite scenes. Detective Cates is accompanying the Sheriff though the yard on her way to make her statement. On the steps she encounters the brutish head matron, Miss Tasker, who is dragging another hapless inmate along to some unspeakable fate. Detective Cates looks quite fetching in her red shirt and white shorts, and Miss Tasker ogles her like a horny fraternity boy. MISS TASKER (looking Jillian up-and-down): Is she staying with us? JILLIAN (shocked!): No! MISS TASKER (to the Sheriff, ignoring Jillian): Is she staying with us? SHERIFF: Go about your business, Miss Tasker. I love Jillian's shocked reply, and the way the butch Miss Tasker ignores her, as if her answer is entirely irrelevant -- because it is. The irony is that our comely detective doesn't know her fate is entirely in the Sheriff's tender hands, at least not yet. She still sees herself as Detective Cates and doesn't realize that, when she crossed into the prison, she became just another inmate. I'd love to discuss "HEAT IN THE HOLE" from Pacific Blue, but apparently no Spanish-speaking people read the board and are willing to translate the Spanish language scene I've been puzzling over for years. (Sigh!) They've released season one on DVD –- only 4 more seasons to go.... If WIP pictures are studies in power reversals, then the undercover or falsely imprisoned cop would seem to offer the ultimate version of this fantasy. What"s my favorite scenario? I'm torn. Although I love the "undercover" scenario, the sweet revenge on the psychiatrist in her own asylum, or the total dizziness of a competent and self-assured police officer like Cassandra Saint John losing her badge and getting chucked into prison has a certain delicious appeal. I'd be curious to know what the readers think? Do you prefer... 1) An undercover cop (Charlie's Angels scenario) 2) An authority figure wrongly imprisoned (Gothika, Third Watch) 3) A reporter or talk show host after a scoop (Tyra, Linsey Mastis) 4) A housewife or college student, wrongly accused (Lifetime) 5) A criminal rightly convicted of her crimes? I feel a poll coming on.... Edited by C. Lakewood