I consolidated several essays under this title late in 2005 and have updated it from time to time. This latest revision was done in February 2011. JOE DOE: MASTER STORYTELLER by C. Lakewood Joe Doe is not called a "master storyteller" for nothing. I am convinced that he was the single most important factor in the success of the original Strip-Searched group. And I sometimes worried whether a minuscule response rate in the polls and the occasional post of "Awesum story, Joe!!!" were thanks enough. At the beginning of 2004, I got the notion that we might encourage more feedback by holding a contest in which members would choose their favorite JD stories -- and tell why. So I did an article on Joe, updated it about a year later, and was working on yet another brief update when the group was torpedoed. The present article is a consolidation of those earlier ones, with some new material added. (Of course, the initial articles sank without a ripple of response, which was disappointing...then. Nowadays, I have given up trying to increase member participation, and I'm much happier as a result. But I still find JD's writings an interesting subject for analysis. Fortunately, he himself has supplied a framework for that.) ****************************** What makes "a good strip search story"? First of all, let me lay out the criteria -- or, rather, let JD himself do it in the sixth item he ever posted. In his article, "A Good Strip Search Story," which, incidentally, ought to be the vade mecum of anyone aspiring to write such a story, Joe sets forth seven characteristics or elements: 1) The victim should be innocent of any crime that would justify her stripping. 2) Events should conspire against the victim to gradually remove her control over the situation; she isn't strip-searched because she is a hardened criminal; she is stripped because of a series of trivial mistakes or unlikely coincidences. 3) Her predicament may be arranged by a rival, or by a malevolent authority figure abusing his power, or it may be totally accidental. But, no matter how bizarre the circumstances, she is quickly powerless to resist. 4) The victim may consent to some or all of her search, and she might become aroused by some aspects of it. But she should also find the whole procedure deeply and intensely humiliating. 5) The victim should be powerful, successful, and intelligent. She should fully appreciate the injustice of the outrageous indignities she is subjected to. If the victim tries to use her superior power or intellect to avoid stripping, she'll be thwarted by her inferiors. 6) The perpetrators should enjoy the search and go out of their way to make it as humiliating as possible. They should be of a lower social class or be a rival seeking vengeance. In a way, the strip search is a role reversal. 7) The ending should imply that there are still more indignities to come. Of these seven elements that he outlined, I personally think that number 1 needs to be modified. Time after time in JD's stories, the "victim" IS guilty of something -- arrogance, most commonly -- and usually does deserve at least some of what she gets. Nicole, in "Bug in the System," is an excellent case in point; there are many others. (The central character in "Lost in the Translation" is a classic example.) Another common theme is the woman who "asks for it," but gets much more than she expects -- like Judge Ashley Marsh in "Other Side of the Mirror" (etc.) or Sharon in "Inspection." But these women are hardly "innocent" either. Number 7, which encourages the reader to actively engage his own imagination, is now considered a hallmark of his stories. It provides a context for readers' fantasies -- and for possible sequels. In my own stories, I have likewise tried to provide a resolution, but not necessarily a conclusion. (While on the subject of sequels, I should remind everyone of JD's extraordinary literary generosity in allowing members almost carte blanche to do sequels. I started out writing a couple, in fact, and at least one group member -- Arty -- has, in my opinion, done some of his best work writing them.) But, for me, JD's core concepts are contained in items 4, 5, and 6. Power reversal is key. One doesn't have to be a nihilist to enjoy seeing an arrogant fat cat getting her comeuppance. (A few years back, the great Parker wrote a story entitled "Charlotte," in which a ruthless, self-absorbed, super-rich bitch dominates and, for all practical purposes, destroys a poor, young, female hotel desk clerk. This story, while not without its moments, is ultimately unsatisfying. How much more powerful it would have been if the Domme/sub roles had been somehow reversed.) Aspiring porn writers can learn a lot from reading JD -- I know I did. The pacing, the paragraphing, the twists and turns (sometimes surprising and often humorous), the tidy but "open" endings (number 7 on his list) are all worthy of study. Indeed, he explained the reason for that sort of "teaser ending" -- which is now a hallmark of his stories and which often goads readers into screaming for a sequel. In a message that appeared in January 2003, titled, "Response to Various Authors and Critics," he pointed out that "the mechanics of the searches tend to be very similar: the setups, scenarios, and mental state of the characters are what make the stories unique.... I think the 'teaser' stories allow me to explore various fantasies without becoming overly repetitious." It works for me. But his stories are certainly not perfect. There are plenty of things in his originals that the more punctilious among us would certainly consider defects. (Many of these, however, have been corrected in the edited versions, and JD's mechanics have improved significantly of late.) But, in my opinion, all of the blemishes -- the inadequate proof-reading, homophone errors, metaphorical and often corny names (Mr. Codger, Ms. Dyke, Coach Leer, Capt. Gropem, Mrs. Spite, Judge Dithers, etc.), questionable demographics (half of Doeville seems to be named "Johnson," for example), misused quote marks, bad punctuation, over-used proper nouns and under-used pronouns, historical inaccuracies, occasional plot glitches, etc. -- do not alter the fact that he remains, indeed, a "master storyteller." ****************************** Numerology Notes The curious numerical patterns found in JD's stories are intriguing. Consider the numbers assigned to various characters... Ashley Marsh ("Harsh Judgment"): 288-38377-7378 (Prison) Brittany ("Visit to Doeville"): 3733-58583-3838 (Prison) Carrie Paris ("12 Days of Christmas," Pt 11): 338-3838-3484 (Prison) Chris Kelly ("Pacific Blue Riddle"): 3738-3838-84478 (Prison) Chris Monday ("Earn What You're Worth"): 5748-383483-84488 (Slave) Cynthia Jackson ("Photo Analysis," Part 3): 3738-3843-3838 (Prison) Debra Norton ("TV News Babe in Jail!"): 8848-4848-A8 (Prison) Heather Grant ("Pending Arrest"): 18383-8383-47478 (Prison) Jennifer Lowe ("Santa Search"): 85585-83383 (Prison) Miranda Gray ("Gothika"): 337-3838-5757 (Asylum) Natalie Natt ("12 Days...," Part 2): 7383-38383 (Prison) Nichole Blunderprone ("Bug in...System"): 338-3834-3887-383 (Prison) Susan Price ("Robosearch"): 18383 (Badge number) Terri London ("The Neglected Note"): 138388 (Refugee camp) and ("L.U.R.D"): 5875-4844-8789 (Prison) Tracy Smith ("Newsbabe Tracy's Halloween Scoop"): 3838-3738 (Prison) Wendy Wicker ("Figurines," Part 1): 7338-3838-4747 (Prison) And to laws ("12 Days...," Part 2): 738-383, 3883-383, & 38383-3838. The 3s and 8s suggest a mammary fascination, perhaps; what the 4s and 7s mean, though, is anybody's guess. ****************************** My Story Ratings The list below is highly idiosyncratic, and most of the ratings are subject to change. If I were making a list sometime in the future, for example, I probably would pick the same stories (almost all of them, anyway). I'm sure that "Bug in the System" (in my estimation, JD's masterpiece) would be at the top, and that the 4-star stories would still have four stars, but there would undoubtedly be some shuffling of titles amongst the other three categories. (A couple in the 1-star group might not be included at all. Indeed, "House Call" has been on and off the list several times. Several others have repeatedly just missed the cut, for one reason or another.) And note that this is a list of the stories that I personally consider most exemplary; just because I omitted a story, don't imagine that I necessarily think it's a bad one. But it is true that you won't find any of the sci-fi, time travel, or superhero stories here -- and only one historical. While trying different contexts is commendable, I just don't think these stories quite measure up. His métier is elsewhere. In compiling this list, I considered every Joe Doe story so far posted -- from the first one in the "Strip-Searched" group (SS1), which appeared 10 September 2001, through those in Stripsearchtwo" (SS2), from autumn 2005 to 31 March 2008 (the end of SS2), and then in "Stripsearchthree" (SS3), very briefly in 2008. (The stories posted to SS3 from 10 October 2010 are included in a separate list.) 5-star Bug in the System 4-star 75% Off (pts 1, 2, 4; pt 3 by Ashley Marsh; 5 by Lakewood & friend) Foreign Forms Gothika Open Book Exam Other Side of the Mirror 3-star Back in School (Joe's 3rd story posted) Drive for Humiliation, version 2 Inspection Just Like Old Times Lost in the Translation (the 7th post) Repeat Offender Trick or Treat 2-star 12 Days of Christmas Bimbo Barbie's Close Shave (+ sequels by Kopema and by Deputy Duffy) Costumes and Pumpkins Crazy Mistake Linda's Labor Day Lesson Memorial Day Was No Picnic Pacific Blue Riddle Searching Sara Test Drive (pts 1 & 3; pt 2 by Wraith) Virtual Search Visitor Policy Q&A What Happens in Mexico... 1-star Boring Party Brewbottom, Letter Perfect, Parole (+ a sequel by Lakewood) Doughnuts House Call Justice for Judge Tracy Lakewood's Costume Shop III: Denise Takes Her Medicine One Question Too Many (Joe's 4th story posted) Phone First Revolutionary Inspiration Uninformed Then Uniformed (pts 1, 2, 3; pts 4-5 by FatherJim and Lakewood; pt 6 by Lakewood) Worst Part is the Waiting (+ a prequel and 3 sequels by Arty) Also getting one star are two special groups: First, both for merit and (especially) for originality... Charlie's Angels Unthrottled and Commercials We'd Like to See More Commercials We'd Like to See Still More Commercials We'd Like to See Second... Calendar Girls (30 & 31 December 2005) and Ornaments (23 December 2005) I originally included these last two primarily because at the time I feared they might well be the last brand-new stories we ever got from JD. Happily I was wrong, but take another look at them: he brought together a host of his favorite characters...perhaps for a final reunion. Because of that, I was reminded of Parker's farewell story, "(fore)Closure." Ratings Update, 2010+ I hesitate to mix the following in with the rest, for, after the passage of some 5 years, I'm just not as familiar with all the stories as I once was, and I'm pretty sure that I can't apply the same criteria in the same way. So 3 stars, say, in 2010 may be a bit different than 3 stars had been in 2005. 3 or 4-star Friendly Mailman (pts 1-2; pt 3 by Lakewood) Full Employment Act (pts 1-2; pt 3 by Lakewood) 3-star (at least) Harsh Judgment 2-star Sucker Bet (pt 1; pt 2 by Lakewood) Rationale: Both "Mailman" and "Act" were developed in fine fashion from fresh plot ideas. "Bet" is also promising, but it needed a Part 2. "Judgment" was, I think, longer than it should have been, but Part 7 was so extraordinarily good that, in my estimation, it elevated the entire story to 3-star rank...at least. ****************************** I hope this article prompts people to go back and re-read JD's work -- not just those stories above, but as much of the entire canon as possible -- and judge for themselves. And, if one consolidates separately posted chapters, the "entire canon" consists of 150 titles, to date. It includes some very long, complex stories, like "Harsh Judgment" and "Twelve Days of Christmas." All can be found on my ASSTR site. To put this into perspective, in the mid-90s "deirdre" wrote and posted 156 rather minimalist stories, She is considered extraordinarily prolific and has been acclaimed by some as "the Internet's greatest writer" (which she certainly was not). All these stories are short, and many are really mere fragments that end abruptly and, for me, unsatisfyingly. Moreover, many of those that might be considered more or less "complete" are wildly improbable. One -- "Company" -- is utterly absurd. Others are sort of twisted "slices of life." Though she did write a few memorable stories, I think her work pales in comparison to JD's, both in quantity and quality.