I have started to keep notes of important people, places, things, and Easter eggs in my Family Feud stories. This is helpful to me, so that I do not have to hunt for these things and I may not forget them while I am writing.
I
thought it may be fun and appreciated if I shared my notes and
insights with you. This could contain spoilers,
especially if you have not read the stories yet.
Family Feud
to me is a really fun story to write. Stories like this usually have
“Bad Guys”, but I tried really hard to give motivations
to the characters that not only help the reader see that things
aren’t always black and white, good and bad, but that over the
course of the story, people will change.
I think for me part
of the joy of writing about them is to simply create the characters,
create the situation and then play out what happens, without too much
of an outline. Things just seem to organically go from there. At
times, I’ve had to rewrite when I wasn’t satisfied with
where things had gone, but in general this method has served my
purposes in writing the characters. They seem to naturally evolve.
I
don’t like stories that are over just as soon as I get to know
the characters. I enjoy the concept of a serial of stories about
these people. I think that helps me connect to them, gives me an
emotional response when they face a challenge, overcome an obstacle,
get beaten up, beaten down and ultimately triumph (or fail) by what
is thrown at them in the course of the story.
Updated
through Chapter 37 Family Feud Book III
SECTIONS:
1.
MAIN CHARACTERS
2. MINOR CHARACTERS
3. MISCELLANEOUS
4.
EASTER EGGS
MAIN
CHARACTERS
Bill
the husband a former high school athlete in his early 40s. He hasn’t
been employed for a while, let himself go a little, and had a strong
porn/internet addiction. He drives a beat up 2003 Black Ford Ranger
Pickup.
Author’s
Note: I wanted
Bill to be the typical “every guy”. A flawed but
relatable kind of guy. His glory days behind him, he starts off the
story very irresponsible and blaming everything else but himself for
his problems. I hope it becomes obvious that he is changing in often
subtle but observable ways as the story progresses.
Wendy
his wife blossomed after she attended college, built a dynamic career
as an executive, has an interest in Pilates and aerobics, chicken
soup for the soul books. She considers herself the glue that holds
the family together. She drove a sporty convertible Dodge Camry. It
is wrecked at the end of FF1.
Pet name: “Cow
tits”
Author’s
Note: I would say
of all the characters, I identify with Wendy the most. You will find
that even though I narrated the story from a neutral observer’s
viewpoint (Except in some rare cases where I intentionally shift to
someone else’s view), that I am often really seeing through
Wendy’s eyes. If I had it to do over, I might have written the
story entirely from her viewpoint, but then I couldn’t have
explored the motivations of other people.
Chris
the eldest son, is a slacker’s slacker. Lazy, out of shape,
geeky, loves to sleep in, and half-asses just about everything he
can, shirking responsibility whenever it is offered him. His ‘five
year’ plan in high school is to stretch it out to the 6th
year.
Chris had a goldfish named “Milton” that
he seldom took care of.
Author’s
Note: When I
created Chris, my inspiration was Chris from the show “Family
Guy” and when I hear his dialogue in my head, that is the voice
I hear. Chris comes across as sometimes reckless, short-attention
span, and not very bright. However, I think everyone knows someone
like Chris or IS like Chris themselves in that if he finds something
that interests him, he will apply himself to it. He is often the
only one laughing at his jokes, but that doesn’t stop him from
laughing.
Jamie is more like her mother, a high school honor student, captain on the cheer leading team, strawberry blonde long hair, with a very positive although perhaps naïve outlook on life.
Pet
name “Ass face”
Jamie's High School Schedule:
1st
Period: Home Room with Mr. Love
2nd
Period Math, female teacher unnamed.
-Checkpoint with Chris.
3rd
Period English with Mr Young
Lunch
4th
Period Health and Social Studies
5th
Period Physical Education Studies, Coach Andretti
6th
Period Art, Mrs Judy Morgan, idealist teacher.
Author’s
Note: Jamie
represents a lot of different things to me, youthful exuberance,
positive attitude, someone who is an over-achiever. She is someone
who has been brought up to believe in following the rules/doing what
is right who is starting to learn more about reality and how some
times you have to break a few rules. One of my inspirations for her
was Taylor Swift, saddled with a kind of goody-two-shoes persona, she
is everything everyone wants her to be.
MINOR
CHARACTERS
I
would consider a minor character to have at least a speaking part,
and can possibly occur in more than one chapter. There are some
people so trivial as to be pointless. I will group some as a
collection to make the list easier to manage.
Buford:
Owner of Metro
Adult MegaStore. Buford is a former electrician who shocked himself
on the job and ended up with a large cash settlement. He is at times
very excited and other times severely depressed. He is rarely
completely lucid.
He has at times a photographic memory, and
other times no recollection of recent events. He often tries to buy
things for a “Hundie” (hundred dollar bill) regardless of
their actual value. He has a child-like innocence about him at times
that can be unnerving. He often jams out to beats and rhythms only he
can hear.
He is introduced in FF3 ch.27
Cherry
Lawn Cheerleaders: The
cheerleaders represent some minor characters that are very tall,
attractive girls from the Cherry Lawn high school. Their team is the
Trojans and their colors are red and white. The most important
character from this group is Cathy Griffin, who is mentioned in the
section for her family.
There is also a “Janet”
who is a co-captain (with Jamie) of the cheer squad we meet in ch. 6
of FF1
In Chapter 5 of FF1, we learn that Bill apparently
really enjoyed photographing “Veronica”, one of Jamie’s
bests when he thought she was modeling for him (although it was
because she was one of Cathy Griffin’s puppets). We meet her in
ch. 1, when she is mocking Chris. She has a car.. She has known
Veronica since 3rd
grade.
In FF2, we hear of “Latisha” an attractive
black girl, who is also the Principal’s daughter, although she
is de-enrolled following her father’s sudden resignation from
the school. She is only briefly mentioned.
In FF3 ch. 24 “Hope
Miller” is mentioned as one of “Cathy's Girls”. She
will be later featured when she has a melt down and tries to get out
of her arrangement. Her father is apparently submissive to Cathy as
well.
The Rival high school is called the Union County
Rams.
If FF ch. 33 Nadia, a raven haired girl is at Dave
Stravosky's party.
Cherry
Lawn Football Players:
In Ch.14 of FF3 we meet three of the star players of the Trojans;
Dave Stravosky #31, Noah #82 and Thad who take a picture with Jamie
in the medieval stocks.
Duncan:
A precocious boy who likes to grab tits, or butts when he can get
away with it. Acts innocent. He was introduced in FF3 at the
Spongeboob event, and then later at the pillory (sticking Ice Cream
in Jamie’s face).
Cherry
Lawn Teachers:
Coach
Andretti is a the male PE teacher in Jamie's Gym class.
Mr.
Dragovich was the lunch monitor. He caught Jamie red-handed
masturbating with a banana in the boy's bathroom putting on a show.
The issue was quietly dropped. He is a tall brick of a man, with a
stern demeanor.
Mr. Love is Jamie's homeroom teacher. He is a
middle aged educator with a beard and glasses.
Mr. Young is a handsome math
teacher, who bears a resemblance to Jon Hamm and Mr Schuster from
Glee.
Mr. Murphy is a thirtyish teacher who took Jamie off the
football field in Chapter 32 of FF3.
Cooper: Jerry, Sheldon.
Jerry
Cooper: In Accounting at Wendy's office, a fat, out of shape
paper-pusher, who is often shunned in social settings. His son is
Sheldon Cooper, A friend of Chris introduced in Ch. 16 of FF3, very
nerdy 9th
grader. Jerry doesn't have full custody of his son after a bitter
divorce.
He is the night manager of Metro
Adult MegaStore.
Jerry's ex-wife lives on 42nd
Street where she has a boyfriend and Sheldon resides most of the
time.
Chris's
Nerdy Friends: Some
like Gerald Jenkins or Sheldon Cooper have their own entry with their
family. There are others that are notable.
Tsoong:
This
is one of Chris’s nerdy Asian friends from school, he gets to
date Jamie one night as part of the new arrangement she has with her
family.
Dalton: A Best Buy employee introduced in FF III ch.
25 who also shares an English class with Jamie. He has a friend named
Reginald who works with him. We do not learn if Reginald also goes to
Cherry Lawn.
Griffins:
Cathy, Jarrod, Nick and Heath: Cathy
Griffin is a cheerleader who could be something of a sadistic
mastermind. She could also just be a confused teenager who uses her
sexuality like a credit card to get what she wants, and when she
can’t charge it to that, she uses manipulation, blackmail and
her brothers to help her get her way. Her brothers appear in FF1, and
the reader is left with the impression that there is an entire
sub-story to the cat-and-mouse game they play with one another for
control.
Author’s
Note:
Intentionally chose the name “Cathy Griffin”, because I
like the idea of when someone finds out your name is similar to a
famous celebrity they assume you must like that celebrity. “Oh,
like Kathy Griffin the comedienne?” and then she can roll her
eyes and be “no, not like her at all!”.
I
especially thought it would be funny to give her red hair and make
her look a little like the comedienne, to further the joke. In the
movie Office Space, one character’s name was “Michael
Bolton” and even though he was clearly named long before the
singer ever performed, people would ask if he liked Michael Bolton’s
music. It only served to irritate him, and he had to either politely
say he did or give them the truth. It was cute, so that is why I
picked that name when creating this character.
Hard
Times Cast: Ellen, Savannah, Conner, Lloyd, Aunt Crystal:
Ellen is the main character in another story called “Hard
Times”. She once lived in the same neighborhood as the Taylors,
but has moved a good distance away to the “Buckman” a
trailer park in a much more rural area. The closest “Town”
to them is the poor side of Town where the Taylor’s live.
Author’s
Note: Life is full
of silly coincidences. I think it is fun to have characters bump into
each other. It is also fun to take a minor character from one story
and then write this really epic saga concerning their own life.
Fair Boys:
There are a few boy’s at the fair who are mentioned in ch.8-9
of FF3, Clint, Chuck and Millhouse are about Gerald’s age. They
are running with Clint’s older brother “Bobby Glenn”
who knows Jamie from High School.
Millhouse has become the
'bar' for how wide someone's eyes when they are shocked or scared (or
have something unexpectedly shoved up their ass).
Todd is
introduced in FF3 Ch.31 when the fair boys are playing 'Magic the
Gathering' with Sheldon Cooper.
Author’s
note: I kind of
based the boy’s on three characters from the movie “Stand
By Me”. Obviously, Millhouse was nicknamed after the cartoon
character on the Simpson’s because he is geeky an fragile like
his namesake (real name 'Levi'). Bobby Glenn is probably influenced
in equal parts by sarcastic jackasses I knew growing up, and the
bully “Nelson” also from the Simpsons.
Fair
Guy: (Ted) One of the
more notable characters who kisses Wendy in ch.8-9 of FF3 is not
named. He is very skeptical of what they are doing, and assumes it
may be some sort of scam. He also thinks Wendy may be his friend
Bill’s wife (and he is right), but he assumes there is
absolutely no way his friends wife would be basically naked selling
kisses at the county fair, so he buys one of her kisses.
In
Ch. 14 of FF3 he runs into them again and spanks the girls hard in
the renne faire pillory.
Hector:
He also briefly
appears in Hard Times, he is a heavy set tattoo artist who works at
“Chicos” on the poor side of town.
Jenkins:
Brad Sr, Brad Jr, Janet, Gerald, Gloria: This
is a family that lives in the same neighborhood as the Taylors. We
first meet Gerald in FF2 (he has a small part in FF1, but is never
‘seen’ by the reader). He is a much younger but very
bright geeky friend to Chris.
Brad Sr and Janet are typical
yuppie suburbanites, upwardly mobile, judgmental, not particularly
proud of Gerald, extremely proud of their other two kids.
Brad
Jr is based loosely on Paul Rudd, Brad Cooper, John Krasinski and all
those young leading men romantic heartthrobs. He attends Dartmouth
and seems to have an attraction to Jamie, that he feels bad about,
since he believes his brother is apparently dating her. Brad jr
doesn’t prefer it, but he is sometimes known as “Bradley”
when his father is present.
Gloria is mentioned briefly in
FF3, she is apparently a very attractive girl who is NOT on the
cheerleading team.
Madam Chang and the Twins, Short Round: The work at “Madam Chang's Discount Novelty Emporium” in the county fair, and are introduced around Chapter 6 of FF3. In the beginning, the twins are known as Yuki and Kiko, but we later learn that is an alias and they are Robert and Neil. The reader never really knows where these people come from, as they seem to speak a smattering of Chinese, but some of the references they make are Korean, Japanese are just completely made up.
Medieval Steve: In Ch. 14 of FF3, he is introduced running a medieval side-show/tomato throwing booth. He is a businessman trying to make a profit, selling over-ripe produce to gullible fair-goers in need of some old fashioned fun. The kind that the puritans and medieval villagers probably took for granted when someone was locked in the stocks for real.
Author’s
Note: I’ve actually seen booths like these, and people happily
walk up and pay to have their pictures taken inside them. I’ve
seen people smush their ice-cream on someone’s nose, or tease
each other. The pillory isn’t locked, but sometimes it’s
heavy enough that you can’t get out without someone’s
help. I’ve also seen ‘escape artist’ shows where
the guy escapes from a straight jacket. Medieval Steve is sort of my
hybrid of all these showmen. I wanted someone who dressed the part,
but by looking at his face, he just didn’t look like he came
from that time period.
Mikey:
A tattoo artist who
works at the county fair, he is introduced early in FF3. He is a
funny and affable guy. Quick to laugh, his personal motto is “I’ll
do anything but Nazi stuff”.
Pooper
Snoopers: There are
some kids who come to the fence when the girls sunbathe in FF2, who
do not identify themselves. They do not want to climb over the fence,
just peep at the girls. The girls have nicknamed them the “Pooper
Snoopers”. In Chapter 37 of FF3 we learn their names are Jimmy,
Gordon and Zeke (Ezekial) and they are Mrs. Waxerman's nephews. There
is someone named Gary who 'takes stinky shits' that they
know.
Principal
Banks: We never learn
the first Principal of CherryLawn’s name. He retires in FF2,
but he is described as a black man with a deep voice in his late
fifties immediately reminded Bill of “Phillip Banks” the
Dad on Fresh Prince of Bel-Air.
Old
Man Arcade: Early in
FF3, I introduce an elderly veteran who runs an arcade of old games
that are relics like he is. He has a novelty electric chair the girls
use. He is never named.
Rahjid:
He is a motel owner on the bad-side of town. He has a brother-in-law
who is far more successful than him, and a wife who has no speaking
part in the story. The family owes him a great deal of money to get
Bill’s stuff at the motel out of “Hock” when he was
locked out for non-payment.
Rapists:
The three bullies introduced in Ch 32 of FF3 are named Anthony,
George
Reggie
and Reggie’s Dad: Reggie
is a black high school student who lives on the poor side of town and
works at a Wendy’s restaurant. We meet him in FF2, and in FF3
we meet him and his Dad who confront the family at a goldfish booth.
Reggie’s dad believes he is defending the girls.
Rosco:
Poor Rosco, the Taylor family’s lonely dog. He is almost always
chained out in the Taylor’s backyard.
Steve
(AKA Work Steve): a
young executive, who works with Wendy. He was placed in charge of
Wendy (by Bill) to supervise her at the office. He has been picking
her up and dropping her off at work (since Wendy’s car was
wrecked in FF1). He sends regular status reports to Bill, believing
Wendy to be a ‘nymphomaniac’ who is learning aversion
therapy. He may actually not care why Wendy is willing to let him
boss her around, give her his work, use her office and piggyback on
her career, since he is regularly fucking her.
Taylor Family
(Distant relatives): Early in FF2, the girl’s must make
“Affirmation movies” that are going to be used if they
don’t follow through on the agreement. They are going to be
sent to ‘distant relatives’. This is where we learn that
Wendy has family out in Indiana who would probably very much
disapprove of how Wendy is living. We learn that Wendy was raised on
a farm when she was much younger. Her parents are hard working,
pragmatic farmers. She has a brother who she believes was in real
estate or a broker of some kind. She has an older sister who is a
former beauty pageant winner named Lisa.
“Bill’s
Mom” is mentioned in FF1, leading the reader to conclude his
dad probably isn’t in the picture with her any more. She
apparently lives close enough that he could go to her house by truck,
but further away than his own house from Rahjid’s motel.
Author’s Note: The real scoop is Bill’s mom babied him, her perception is Wendy has ‘taken him away from her’, and that he may have been a star athlete had he not started working early to support raising a family. Bill did work for his dad’s business, but we are never told anything about his father. Could there be some reason Bill feels he has has insecurities about his manhood that are related to him? Probably.
Uncle
Creepy: This is one of
my favorite characters; he is very endearing to me. Spooky and quiet,
he seems to have glommed on to the family like a puppy in FF3. He
claims to be a security guard, although if he is, no one could tell.
He always seems to be lurking around quietly, and he is so innocuous
you often don’t notice he is there (or that he has gone). He
has not given his name in the story, so he is only known as “Uncle
Creepy”.
Vicky
Larson: “Icky
with a V”, we have yet to meet Vicky, only hear about her. She
is apparently a peer and rival to Wendy at her place of work. She
would delight in Wendy’s downfall and destruction.
Author’s
Note: I wrote
Vicky based on the concept that whenever a woman works in an office,
she often finds herself with a bitter rival, who she must work
closely with. “Oh she is trying to destroy me!!”. This is
often a little dramatic hyperbole.
Waxerman,
Victoria: Neighborhood
gossip and busybody where the Taylor’s live. She is often seen
walking her dog “Mr Snips”. She has disapproved of Wendy
for many years, but most likely this is due to a certain amount of
jealousy that Wendy seemed to have a great career and an active
lifestyle. Victoria was raised in the mountains but speaks like a
walking thesaurus.
She thinks the world of Bill Taylor, who
she considers to be a simple man trying to do what is right for his
family. She thinks Chris is a simpleton, but she seems to like him.
She thinks Jamie is salvageable but has fallen under her mother’s
“Jezebel” influence.
The family discovered that
it was kind of amusing to push her buttons, tell her things to see
how she reacts. She generally reacts with disgust, but she continues
to stay seated, demanding to hear more, leading one to believe she
secretly enjoys hearing all the sordid details. She introduced the
family to what has become known as the “patented Waxerman
Tabasco Colonic”.
Author’s
Note: I based this
character in part on a few influences. I describe her as half
“Granny” and half “Mrs. Jane” from the
Beverly hillbillies. She has equal parts “Mountain justice/old
fashioned/fundamentalist” and the snooty intellectualism of
Mrs. Jane. I would also say she makes me think about “Tammy
Faye Bakker”.
Weird Larry: Homeless man who lives behind the Best Buy near the Taylor Household. He is introduced in Ch.25 of FFIII. He looks like Uncle Creepy except with a beard.
Wilbur: Powerfully built, almost seven foot tall employee of porn store of Metro Adult MegaStore.
MISCELLANEOUS
This
is a section for me to stick some notes about some of the rules and
things that I think may be worth noting, that are not people.
The
Taylor Women’s Bill of Rights
(AKA Declaration of Independence) is introduced in ch. 1 of FF1. It
contains nine articles that outline in broad terms the rules of the
house. It never specifies anything kinky or sexual in nature. The
intention was to use this to illustrate how structured and detailed
Wendy could be, how organized in her thinking.
I find that
sometimes people really enjoy it when I put specific rules or bullet
point things in my stories to make them stand out.
“Bill’s
Bill” In ch.9 of
FF2, we read about “Bill’s Bill,” it is Bill’s
attempt at being organized for his wife’s benefit. He hasn’t
had a lot of time when he puts it together to change his nature as
more of a ‘play it by ear’ kind of guy. He does a good
job of trying to cover all his bases and outline the rules for the
girls, but by contrast to the Taylor Women’s Bill of Rights,
his work is a sloppy, disorganized mess, with coffee rings and
cross-outs on the papers he was working on.
It
was my intention that it not be iron-clad and complete. Their journey
is about realizing some of the loopholes and open for interpretation
clauses. The family has had a discussion about amending the bill, to
clarify some things that they needed to do.
The “Red
Flag” is a clause where the family has a ‘safety valve’,
it works kind of like a ‘safe word’ but is geared more
towards discussion and resolving a conflict of rules.
One of
the other aspects of Bill’s Bill is the three tiered punishment
system.
1. Infraction: There are 10 kinds of infraction
punishments that can be administered, they are light punishments
intended for day to day corrections. They have almost no oversight,
and can be doled out at will. The best analogy I have for these, is
they are like the spurs, riding crop and reins on a horse, intended
not to be abused, but for use to get things done.
2.
Correction: There are cards in a fishbowl that represent much more
difficult punishments (although a tiny few are actually treats, so
that the girls can hold out hope). The correction is for more serious
rule breaking and follows a more formal process. At this point in the
story, the girls have been such good girls, they haven’t had
many corrections.
3. Judgment: This is the highest level
punishment. It is for the biggest issues there can be, sort of Bill’s
idea of a “Supreme Court” except only he gets to decide.
(Which is interesting, because he told Chris they were equal in all
things). So far, this has not come up in the story.
“Bill's
First Amendment” introduces new rules and refinements to
“Bill's Bill” in FF3 Ch. 23. It includes the concept of
W.H.O.R.E as it relates to the core values of the house to be
instilled into the taylor women.
W - Working. Producing tangible goods and services for the Taylor Men. Dates who pay to be escorted by the Taylor women can “Tip” a number of W’s at the end of the date equivalent to the courtesy they were extended by the females.
H - Humiliation. Acceptance and participation in both humiliation dares, and living a life that recognizes and encourages your humility.
O - Obedience. Demonstrating a willingness and desire to obey your betters.
R - Respect. Show your respect to those in authority. This should not be confused with normal expected protocols of Taylor women. Saying “Sir” is a sign of respect, but this letter is awarded when sluts go above and beyond normal expectations.
E
- Enthusiasm.
Taylor Men don not want robots. We expect you not only to
participate, but to participate enthusiastically. To earn this
letter, you should be suggesting your own dares, or helping in your
own discipline. You should do your chores and complete your
assignments, no matter how unpleasant with a pleasing face and
attitude.
POSITIONS:
There
are a few regular positions that come up every now and
then.
Attention: This is a type of parade rest that was used
in FF1, and is based on something Wendy had posed for in college. It
involves standing straight up, eyes straight ahead, legs apart, hands
behind you, resting on your ass cheeks.
The
rest were introduced in FF2 or later:
Inspection position one/ “First Position”: Stand up with legs shoulders width apart, chest out, head straight. Hands placed on ass cheeks pulling them both apart, and knees slightly bent.
Inspection position two/”second position”: Bent at the waist, knees more bent, and holding ass apart,
Squat: Spread knees apart squatting, cup her tits with her hands, and look straight ahead. Ass should be parallel to the ground. This is the default position for “ringing the bells” at the house (under green alert).
Curtsy:
This is a formal curtsy, involving dropping the head (submissively),
bending at the knee, and pulling one’s skirt out (or imaginary
skirt if naked).
Spread-Clench-Release: Are one word commands
that Chris taught the girls to pull apart their breasts or ass cheeks
and take some object to deliver it some place else. The context
depends on which way the girl is facing when she gets the order and
what he has in his hand at the time.
CATCH
PHRASES
Just a few
of the more commonly used ‘catch phrases’, that people
often find themselves using.
"pulled a Jamie!" – If you really like something, fudge ice cream, then Chris intends to say “Pulled a Jamie”, he is looking forward to running into someone who really likes something so he can use the expression. This a reference to Jamie's uncontrollable mega-orgasm in FF3 due to over-stimulation on many levels. The scene was the equivalent to the diner in when Harry Met Sally, except picture Meg rolling around on the floor mewling and writhing for real for about 10 minutes.
“bros
before ho's” The Taylor men like to fist bump and say this.
The girls have adopted a cute “ho’s after bro’s”
fist bump in ironic solidarity with one another.
“Taylor
men come first” intended as a double entendre, for cumming
first in sex, this is one of the new household mantras from ff2
“boys rule, girls drool” this is based on a t-shirt that Jamie used to wear (which had the opposite sentiment) as a little girl. Apparently, it bothered Chris enough to remember it, and the guy’s adopted it as their official house motto in FF2.
“You think your shit don't stink” – A common accusation of the girls, so much so it deserves mention. It is speaking to the fact that the girls really aren’t as critical of themselves as they are the men.
“Give
it the old college try” – A saying that Bill thinks is
intended as an insult towards him, since he did not go to college. In
FF3 we learn it’s real meaning has been lost over time, and
that Wendy originally told herself that when struggling to get
through college, overcome difficult odds and be a good wife. Say
something long enough and it’s original context gets
forgotten.
“Cock is Cock” in FF3 in CH. 21 Wendy
reveals this is a slogan she has to pretend she lived by, to keep up
the pretense that she is a sex addict to Steve at work.
EASTER
EGGS
Easter
eggs are a way of hiding little inside jokes, homages, “thank
yous”, and inspirations in a story. They are not supposed to be
‘obvious’, hence the reason you would have to hunt for
them. I may have actually buried some other Easter eggs and simply
forgot I did that. You will also find quotes (and famous misquotes),
jokes and pop culture references throughout the story. I am not sure
if those would really qualify as “Easter Eggs”. I did try
to cuss in several different languages (German, Chinese). I’ll
keep at that.
I have enjoyed slipping in actual information
into the story, the history of enemas for instance. Some things.
Here is a list of some of the Easter Eggs that I can remember
including by story:
Family
Feud One:
The
Griffin brothers are named for the brothers in "Big Valley";
Jarrod, Nick and Heath. I am not a fan of the show or anything. It
just seemed humorous to me.
Family
Feud Two:
In Chico’s tattoo parlor, the kids in the waiting room are from another story I wrote called “Hard Times”.
Family
Feud Three:
At
Mikey’s tattoo gazebo, the woman who is finishing her tattoo is
from another story I wrote called “Hard Times”, she is
“Aunt Crystal”. She is also apparently an ex-girlfriend
of Mikey.
The Chang Twins, Robert and Neil are a play on
words, for “Bob and Kneel”.
Some of the people who
talk to (or avoid) the girls when they are dancing in front of
Chang’s are based on people who have written to me about the
story. At least, their alter-egos are what I think they may be
like.
In Ch. 7 of FF3, I refer to something that happened
verbatim in Ch. 7 of FF2.
In
Ch. 12 I mention a fight breaks out between two girls. I plan to
have this to appear in a future story from the perspective of the
girls fighting.
In Ch. 14 I quote a lot of Shakespeare in
context of the story. The title is actually a famous misquote of
Shakespeare. I find that ironic, but considering it is a kind of
mini-Renne Faire, and Renne Faire is more about fun than historical
accuracy, the misquote is apropos. It also sums up the chapter
nicely.
When
thinking of a rival high school for Cherry Lawn, I picked the name
Union County Rams because;
Union County High is an actual high
school where the students tried to film porn between classes. Who
knows if their reasons were an aspiring blackmailer like Cathy
Griffin, or just young, dumb and full of cum girls were willing to be
filmed and people can buy video cameras on the cheap. I named their
mascot the “Rams”, since the Cherry Lawn Trojans are also
a brand of condom.
In both Wendy and Jamie's journals I
reference some of the same events from two different perspectives. I
also have them express the exact same sentiments about each other
helping “Be their rock”. I assume they talked about this
at some point, and came away with the shared opinion.
I also
have Wendy describe her dream in detail, while I have Jamie talk
about having a dream and saying only a truly wicked bitch would write
down the sordid details of a dirty dream. It is funny to me, since
neither are privy to each other's journals (or know about each
other's dreams).
In Ch. 24 “Spanker in the Rye”, I have done an homage to one of my favorite books, Catcher in the Rye. I have taken quotes or themes from the book and incorporated them (in context) to the chapter. I also write the journal in a style similar to the way that book was done.
As an interesting aside, I also did something I wish more stories would do. I had the girls find out their punishments, but they will be left to stew and think about them for a while before they are carried out (in another chapter). This also means the reader can contemplate them for a little while, instead of just hearing what the punishment is and immediately reading it. A little more suspense and tension.
In
Ch. 25, I add “Korean” to the list of languages that have
made it into the
story.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bw9CALKOvAI
This
is the link to the song “Bubble Pop” by Hyuna if you want
to hear it.
CHAPTER
9 of FF2 – FULL RULES
“Bill's
Bill”
Was
illustrated, in the margins, penis's shooting off dashed lines into
stars, and boobs with big round nipples, words like “ASS”
underlined. There was an almost artistic modern calligraphy to the
margin art. Cornucopia with fruit, and dildos, it was kind of garish,
but it really was creative.
READERS
NOTE: The
organization of Bill's Bill is all over the place and a bit of a
mess. Hand written notes with scratch out marks. What follows is a
taste of some of Bill's Bill in the patch-work style he wrote it in
but summarized for your benefit. This is in direct contrast to
Wendy's “Bill of Taylor Women's Rights” from the first
Family Feud story which was organized and followed a more analytical
line of thinking.
The outline/highlights were as
follows:
This will be written in plain legible lettering
by the women, and placed on the doors.
“We are a often times nude household that also involves BDSM (Bondage Discipline, Sadism and Masochism) relationship, where the women living here are submissive to others within the house. The women of the house MUST be respectful and subservient at all all times. This is a consensual relationship and NOT required of any non consenting females.”
It also outlined that the old Taylor women's bill
of rights will be torn in half, by each of the Taylor women, who will
then wipe it thoroughly with their own asses, and pussies and they
will then both be required to eat the paper. They will then admit it
was a bad idea to EVER try to be above a man, because in the Taylor
Household, Men rule and girls drool! This will be filmed on
webcam.
The Taylor women will also each pose with a copy of
bill's bill and a sign saying “I agree” for 5 pictures
that will be stored digitally. These poses will be naturally
humiliating so that the viewer can easily tell that the women
willingly put themselves into this predicament in order to confirm
their willingness to carry out the terms. If they should fail to meet
their end of the terms of the agreement, then the pictures of both of
them may be released to friends, and family members through the
internet. This includes Wendy's mother and father who live in
Indiana.
If the women complete the terms of the agreement,
they will be granted the only copies of these pictures and any other
confirmation evidence held by the men.
The Men were defined as
Bill and Chris Taylor, AKA “Masters”, “Sirs”
and “Owners”.
The Women were defined as Wendy and
Jamie Taylor AKA “Sluts”, “Skanks” and
“Whores”.
Family Motto: “Boys Rule, girls
drool.”
It then went on to define
Speech
protocol:
-That there would be verbal as well as
physical humiliation, in the form of rude awakening affirmations in
both public and private.
-Rules about honesty, and lies and how the women were natural schemers and manipulators and had to be kept under tight scrutiny to avoid it.
-Rules and examples, about having to say what you
mean, and mean what you say. A good example, was having to ask to
shit or piss, because the vulgarity amused the owners. It also talked
about just keeping your word and finishing what you
started.
Punishments:
-The most detail was reserved
for this section of the document. There were three tiers or levels of
punishment.
1. Infractions
2. Corrections
3. Judgments
There were ten kinds of basic
day to day punishments. Called “Infractions”. These
were simple tools they could use to help motivate and control the
women, affirm their position, and as long as there was no over use at
home the men were free to use any combination of the
following:
1-Time Out/Restricted movement
2-Shock- things that go buzz
3-Elements - Freezing bra/thong, ice cubes held in mouth, ice, heat, water, air, various low level versions of using the world itself and mother nature to teach us a lesson.
4-Beating- Blunt pain/whips/floggers
5- Food -diet control, eating something nasty
6- Bathroom -bathroom control
7- Sexuality. - using tits/ass to punish sluts, holding self open obscenely/wiggling
8 Endurance -jumping jacks, high stepping
9 furniture - Be furniture
10 Dance - Dance in place for a period of time
Bill hadn't explained the detail around these in the document, assuming that the bullet points stood for themselves He did however explain verbally that his use of the bathroom, was to deny them a privilege of privacy, that women enjoy. Citing that men piss in urinal troughs, or on tire trucks, they enjoy farting in elevators with their buddies and then jumping out right at their floor, leaving them stuck with the smell.
He said women generally like things tranquil and
peaceful, and can enjoy a satisfying time alone. So just like denying
a man sex, he felt denying them a satisfying shit alone on the
toilet, or something delicious to eat, was as close as he could
come.
The sexuality he said, that even though his daughter was
“theoretically” a virgin, she obviously knew how to tease
and taunt boys, to get what she wants, just like her mom, and so the
power and control of being attractive wouldn't be denied her, as much
as it would be turned back against her, so she could see the opposite
point of view.
Men view sluts with a certain disdain not reserved
for angelic pretty young things, so it suited him just fine his
daughter would have herself taken down a peg or two, or three and be
seen as a slut. This would make her powerless, unable to summon the
white knights who so often come out to stand up for a girl whose done
nothing but manipulate with her beauty. “Helen of Troy”
he said without explaining why.
Bill explained two other tiers
of punishment, and that infractions could under certain circumstances
be applied in public places. He gave examples of how that would have
to be done in a way that suited the crime at hand, feeling that
addressing a discipline issue when it happens was much better.
The other two tiers of punishment were a little
fuzzier. They had created “Corrections” on index cars.
Some of them were actually going to be treats, but most Bill
explained, were going to be much harsher forms of infractions. These
were for much more harsher situations, when the girls tried to defy
them, or had a severe discipline problem. They would have to
apologize for what they did and then ask to draw from the correction
bowl (Which had at one time been Chris's goldfish bowl, but he had
long since stopped feeding that fish).
The third tier of
punishment, was called Judgments and only Bill could hand them out.
They were for the most severe issues, extreme defiance or neglect.
Bill could terminate the service of either girl, and elect to send
out all their dirty photos and videos that had been taken as
confirmation they were willing to do this, if the girl did not agree
to the punishment that Bill felt suited the situation. This was a
type of check and balance.
Bill having actually listened to his wife a time
or two, knew that she would like a couple “Safety valves”
in the contract. This was one of them, so that should his solution
punishment not suit the girls, they had the option of basically
ending things as long as they were willing to endure the photos out
in the internet.
Bill also defined a “Naughty Book”
that would be used to record wrong doings the girls did. It was
really a sheet of paper to be placed on magnets on the fridge.
However, each man was also going to be able to carry a sheet of paper
in his back pocket to write down things, he may not have time to
address or been able to address. These will be gone over at family
meetings and sentences carried out accordingly.
Apologies:
Bill outlined a three step apology process where
the woman would first admit her mistake and apologize for it. Then
she would beg forgiveness, and then be punished.
Dating
and Fidelity:
Any and all marriage vows of monogamy will
be completely overlooked during the education period. The women are
to think of themselves as sluts, but sluts in the service of their
owners, and will always first have to gain permission when anything
kinky happens.
There were some scratches around the word
“Dating?” and “$$$”, with a lot more drawings
and doodles in this section making Wendy think Bill sort of skimped
on this section.
Red Flag:
As the Taylor women are by their very nature
skeptical and not trusting of their betters, the women would be
likely to question and potentially hesitate in carrying out their
orders.
There were some lines scratched through explaining
examples from the previous day where the girls seemed in doubt about
going through with this entirely.
This section outlined an
opportunity for males or females to call “Red Flag” for
rare conditions, when they feel things have gone too far. Things will
be backed down, people will cool off and within 72 hours a family
meeting will be had to address it. If the females are doing this to
get out of something that has already been resolved, then shall
receive at the very least a correction, and more likely a judgment
against them. Nothing was specified if the men needed to call a red
flag and it turned out to be unnecessary.
Limits:
Bill didn't put a lot of explanation here, at
least not enough for Wendy's liking. They had incorporated the
analogy of the “radio dial” from the night before, except
the drawing of the dial looked suspiciously like a big fat nipple.
In his example, he made several lists and numbered them 1-10,
each number on the list grouping like behaviors
together.
-Humiliation
At level one, it was flashing a nipple to a
stranger, at level two a pussy, and so on up to level ten where
several implausible scenarios outlined being naked at a circus,
beach, “and so on”, making Wendy wonder what and so on
was.
-Bondage/Pain
At level one this was simple hand cuffs, or a whip to the boob or butt, by level three it was it was being in a cage, or having a gag in, and it went up to ten with more over the top scenarios such as being hung upside down on a cross while a motorcycle gang beats you. There were dozens of examples at every level on the radio dial all increasingly harsher.
-Sexuality
At level one it was sort of first base,
kissing and hugging, and the next level second base with being felt
up, and groped, and on it went, up to and including sex with dogs,
gangbangs and the like at level ten. Wendy wondered if Bill just felt
the need to be complete, or did he have any intention of doing these
things?
Bill didn't actually define where the line was drawn,
as much as he simply seemed to be defining his terms here. So he
could refer to “Bondage at about a level four”
He
seemed to be indicating there would be a balanced three-pronged focus
to address shortcomings using tools of scorn and ridicule for
humility, pain both physical and mental and that the sexuality seemed
to address the shrew-fulness of the women, their frigidity.
This
seemed kind of odd to two girls who had strings tied around their
clit hoods, naked on the carpet, that THEY would be considered
shrewful, but Bill explained before they could ask that it was all
BEFORE their education would begin he was referring too.
Hygiene
and the importance of women being women:
Here Bill outlined his belief in a 1950s style
household, which he described a bit like walking with books on your
head to gain perfect posture, to become a June Clever/Tv Land
style/Norman Rockwell's version of a stepford wife.
This
seemed to be a philosophy in direct contrast with the harsh and often
brutal trainings on the radio dial above.
This part of the
document then went into exact specifications about everything from
make up, to brushing teeth, to bathing, and menstrual cycles. He
underlined “Why are they always in Synch??!?”
Reading this caused Jamie and her mom to
giggle a little.
There was a little more on the panty rags
used to gag them, and the bitch box, and some other rules and
regulations about street legal clothing and appropriateness. Although
it seemed to suggest it was appropriate for sluts to be dressed like
sluts.
Work/School:
This explained that the
women would continue to go to work and school as normal.
It
explained that there would be dietary/dress restrictions and certain
motivating forces at school but failed to go into a lot of detail.
Jamie got the impression that she was going to
have to report to Chris throughout the day, and he would be checking
up on her.
Wendy wasn't sure how she would manage her job as
an executive project manager, and still play Bill's games. This was
an area that put a lot of butterflies in her stomach and questions in
her head.
Virtues of the Good Slut:
This was interesting, to Wendy. it was
surprising it was so far down in Bill's list, but as he had hand
wrote it, it probably was stream of consciousness as he wrote his
sections.
Humility
Obedience
Patience
Endurance
He went on to outline
them, pointing out the acronym “HOPE”
Humility:
Humility means the absence of Pride. A slut with Pride is a slut who
holds herself above others, who feels slut is ‘too good’
to grin and bear the daily grind. To this end, a slut must be willing
to be subjected to Humiliations and embarrassments designed to remove
her of this vanity called Pride.
Obedience: Obedience means that the slut is not only required to do what slut ‘likes’ to do, but that slut must submit to truly obey even when the tasks contains some element of hard work, disgusting or even silly. To obey is the purpose of the slut, and slut must exhibit the traits not only to her Owner but to those around her who are themselves not sluts. slut must be willing to undergo the trials and tribulations and present herself for this work despite her hardships and suffering for her Owner will offer her no sympathy.
Patience: Fast Paced short attention spans are the way of the world in our vanilla societies, but a slut must exhibit the patience to wait, and listen. slut must be prepared to invest the time to do a job correctly, but by the same token slut may not ‘drag ass’ and should not purposely move too slowly in her duties.
Endurance: Endurance is not unlike
Obedience, with the exception that the slut realizes slut must endure
much suffering and hardships to serve in this life. The slut will
have to endure serving others with her body and time.
Then he
went on to outline the shortcomings of HIS
slut.
Anal-Retentive
Perfectionism
Too
Critical
Selfish and Self-absorbed
Manipulative
Can't
be wrong
Stingy with time, affection and attention.
Favoritism
(Both sluts stick together).
CHAPTER 23 of FF3 - FULL
RULES
Bill’
and Chris’s First Amendment
We the Men of the Taylor household, in order to form a more Perfect Society, and to insure our Domestic Tranquility have decided to enhance the original Bill with this amendment.
While this amendment is designed to clarify the original Bill, where there is conflict between the Bill and this amendment, this amendment takes precedence.
As the girls are to be treated equally under the rules of the house, any and all females shall endure them equally while under training.
Article One – Terms of Chastity
Chastity
devices will be offered to the girls at meaningful times when it is
appropriate for them to wear them.
If the girl’s want to put them on, then their bottom holes are essentially off limits for training, games, dares, or play by anyone (including themselves). They can only remove them by getting permission from “key holders” who will supervise the removal and prompt re-application of the device so that they do not play with themselves while it is off.
If the girls do not put them on when given the opportunity then bottom holes are in play. This includes being touched, inspected and played with when instructed by Taylor men or authorized supervisors. It will still be punishable for sluts to play with themselves without permission and may be considered an “correction”.(2nd level punishment)
Stretching and kegel exercises may be ordered when chastity belts are not worn. Girls go without them at their own risk.
The girls do not have to take more than one finger of penetration in their holes if Chastity belts are not worn.
Exceptions:
Willingly choose a game, contest, dare or other
activity that is understood by her to include a cock, she will be
required to finish the activity including servicing the cock, or
suffer an appropriate penalty.
As part of marital
obligations.
If there is no practical way to wear the
chastity belt, due to swimming or showering, the owners will notify
the girls they have “Free Hole Time”. They will be
treated as if they had on chastity belts, but they do not have to
wear them. Girls are still forbidden from playing with themselves or
touching themselves without permission.
Free Hole Time may only be granted by Taylor men or handlers.
Article Two- Letters
While stars can still be earned by performing a specific dare that has a star as a reward, those are designed to be hard to do, and failure is expected for most dares ( anything worth doing is never easy). The Stars chart the progress towards the completion of the training program.
We shall introduce a letter system that will provide the Taylor men with a more flexible incentive system for moderately complex tasks. Letters will be awarded for specific, measurable tasks and dares, and contest awards, but also when a Taylor girl is caught “doing something right”
When she demonstrates the spirit of submission, that is spelled out in the letters she can be awarded the appropriate one. Each letter corresponds to a different Taylor woman value.
Trivial activities of little consequence or normal protocol will carry with them no letter reward.
There are five letters, each symbolizing a
specific core belief that will be instilled in the training. Once a
female collects a set of all five letters, they will immediately
be converted into a star. The letters (and what they symbolize)
are:
W - Working. Producing tangible goods and services for the Taylor Men. Dates who pay to be escorted by the Taylor women can “Tip” a number of W’s at the end of the date equivalent to the courtesy they were extended by the females.
H - Humiliation. Acceptance and participation in both humiliation dares, and living a life that recognizes and encourages your humility.
O - Obedience. Demonstrating a willingness and desire to obey your betters.
R - Respect. Show your respect to those in authority. This should not be confused with normal expected protocols of Taylor women. Saying “Sir” is a sign of respect, but this letter is awarded when sluts go above and beyond normal expectations.
E - Enthusiasm. Taylor Men don not want
robots. We expect you not only to participate, but to participate
enthusiastically. To earn this letter, you should be suggesting your
own dares, or helping in your own discipline. You should do your
chores and complete your assignments, no matter how unpleasant with a
pleasing face and attitude.
Taylor women must have a complete
spelling of WHORE to obtain a star.
Taylor women will
memorize the core values and when asked about their tattoo will admit
they are whores to their Taylor Men. They will also volunteer
enthusiastically that each letter is to remind them of one of the
core values and if the person wants to hear it, they are to explain
each letter patiently.
The Taylor women are also to understand the
principles of “HOPE”, Humility, Obedience, Patience and
Endurance from the original rules. The WHORE values reinforce and
overlap those core principles.
Article Three- Hierarchy
In the Taylor Family, men come first, women come second in all things.
In order to establish a more orderly household,
the Taylor men may now promote and demote individuals to the
following roles. The roles are listed from highest to lowest.
Owner:
The Taylor Men, Bill and Chris own the Taylor women equally. This is
the highest rank within the house and entitles them to all privileges
and authorities jointly. They will make decisions together, and
handle judgments together. It can be assumed that when one Owner
speaks, he speaks with the authority of both owners on all matters.
Handler: A Handler will be
granted a silver key that they may present as proof of their status.
This key will unlock the chastity belts worn by the females of the
house. The Handler is a supervisor who has been entrusted to act as
an agent of the Owner. They can oversee and conduct infraction,
inspections and report all behavior warranting corrections and
judgments to the Owners if they are not present. Handlers have
permission to enforce “infraction” level discipline and
correct all Taylor females . Handlers can award no more than 10
letters per day(in total). Handlers may change alert levels
(see article six).
To be a Handler, one must prove they understand all ten types of “infractions” and be a trustworthy individual. They must show sound judgment when changing alert levels and instructing the females.
Steve and Cathy Griffin are Handlers.
Key Holder: A key holder may be a temporary title granted for a period of time, or a person may hold that rank permanently. A key holder will be granted a bronzed key that they may present as proof of their status. This key will unlock the chastity belts worn by the females of the house. Key holders may not punish the Taylor women, but they can report their behavior and award no more than 5 letters per day (in total). Key holders may not change alert levels.
This is a role primarily intended for men who will be dating the Taylor women. They have direct supervisory capability even though they may not punish. They may inspect at appropriate times under the right protocol.
It is the responsibility of the owners to fully discuss the rules for taking our sluts out in public. This includes the “Seven Rules for Dating” (Article Four).
Owners can require a cash deposit and ID from any key holder they do not personally know before permitting them in this role.
Key holders may not forbid the girls to put back on their chastity belt. If the chastity belt is on they may not play with or insert objects or fingers into any of the slots or openings in the belt.
Authority: A special role for principals, teachers, fire men, employers, police officers, and any one in a position to arrest, obtain, suspend, or fire someone. An automatic condition of “Red Alert” (See Article six) applies when they are present unless otherwise implicitly ordered by an Owner.
Sir/Ma’am: Any one over the age of nine years old, who is not in any of the other roles. They will be treated with respect as the better of the girls. They will only be referred to by their name if they request it, or as ordered by a key holder or higher.
Child: Anyone nine or younger, who
is not in any of the other roles. They will be treated with respect
as the better of the girls, however they will be referred to by their
name.
Whore: The females of the house,
who are owned and trained by the males of the house. They will labor,
serve and amuse their betters whenever possible and live the virtues
of WHORE and the values of HOPE whenever possible.
Pig: A role reserved for females of the house who have proven they are not benefitting from our generous education and discipline program. This role requires stricter discipline, harsher penalties. The Pig will not walk on two legs at home without special permission except during red alert protocol. The pig role will automatically be applied if either Taylor girl fails to get all of her stars within 30 days of the start of her training. It is intended to be an incentive to hurry up.
It will be the duty of all Taylor women to recognize and respect each role according to their status.
Article Four – Rules for Dating My Wife or Daughter (key holder rules)
(Formerly the “Seven Rules for Dating My Teenage Daughter”)
ONE-No back talk from her, she'll eat what you order her, she'll watch any movie you want without complaint. She'll listen to anything you say, and let you finish your thoughts completely before she speaks.
TWO--She'll show deference to you, she'll call you and any male she encounters Sir, and any female “Ma'am” with few exceptions. She is not to flirt with others unless you want her too while she is under your supervision.
You may ask her questions about her discipline, and the core values of the house if it interests you. She is not to bore you with those details and protocols unless you explicitly ask for explanations. Please understand the girls are being trained in ways of humility, obedience, patience and endurance. They will remain submissive for the entirety of the date unless you act in an unstable or dangerous manner or violate any of the conditions of these rules.
Then they have my permission to contact me, and
there will be repercussions, including the possible loss of your
deposit.
THREE--She is to sit without crossing her
legs. She isn't a proper lady, so don't expect that.
FOUR--She is to sit and walk straight up, not slouch.
FIVE---She'll ask permission to piss or
shit, and she needs to tell you which. You can only make her wait up
to 15 minutes, and you can't make her do it in public places.
SIX---
Other than the bathroom, you are not to let her out of your sight. If
she does have to go to the bathroom, or you have to excuse yourself
to go, you should stuff her panties into her mouth so she doesn't
talk to anyone else. She may require you to let her out of a chastity
belt. You should observe her the entire time. She is not permitted to
play with herself. She can wipe quickly and promptly put the belt
back on.
You may not touch her pussy or ass, if she removes
her chastity belt for this purpose.
SEVEN---You may not
discipline them, or have sex with them. This includes playing with
her tits, mouth or ass (see exceptions). You may however handcuff her
hands behind her back as long as it is done discretely especially if
you feel she is up to any sort of shenanigans. You may make out with
them for up to ten minutes on my porch before you drop them off, if
you are dropping them off on time and have time left. You may
pinch/twist, play with tits, or kiss open mouth during the ten minute
“good bye session” even if she has on a chastity belt.
You may want to keep a running list of things you feel they did wrong, that were not pleasing or in the spirit in which you rented them. We will cheerfully correct their behavior when they get home, but no refunds will be issued under any circumstances.
Exceptions: If the girl did not wear a chastity
belt to the date, you may pinch, twist, touch tits, mouth, clit or
ass. You may not penetrate the asshole or cunt with more than a
finger.
Article Five- Bells
There will be two distinct bells purchased for the whores of the house. Each Taylor woman will learn the sound of her bell and will come immediately to the source of the bell.
In Green Alert (See article six)
When she arrives, unless otherwise instructed she is to take the “Squat position”. Spread knees apart squatting, cup her tits with her hands, and look straight ahead. Ass should be parallel to the ground.
In Yellow Alert
When she arrives she is to kneel on the floor, legs apart, palms on thighs facing upwards.
In Red Alert
When she arrives she is to stand with hands behind back, eyes straight ahead, chest out.
This is the summoning bell, and failure to arrive promptly can result in an “correction” level punishment for extreme tardiness.
It will only be a correction for arriving when
someone else’s bell is rung.
The slut should arrive cheerful and pleasant, ready to carry out the order of whoever rang her bell.
Article Six- Alert Levels
In order to respond in agile and appropriate manner to changes in social settings, owners and key holders may change the “Alert Level” in their immediate presence.
With a single phrase everyone must conduct themselves according to the new alert and their role. It is imperative that everyone appear to be consistent in their behavior and not disagree when an alert is changed. This is for the benefit of outsiders who may not fully understand or appreciate our agreement.
Green Alert- This is the assumed protocol unless otherwise stated.
At home: Taylor women are to be naked
(unless ordered otherwise). They should not talk out of turn. They
will behave in the generally accepted manner according to the
whore/hope value system. They are not permitted to use the toilet,
and should ask permission whenever in doubt for anything.
Infractions, Corrections and Judgments can be administrated. They can
be ordered to openly masturbate others or themselves. They should sit
with legs apart, and may not use furniture.
In
public: Taylor women will be braless, without panties, in collars and
heels (unless ordered otherwise). They should not talk out of turn.
They will behave in the generally accepted manner according to the
whore/hope value system. They are permitted to use the toilet, and
should ask permission whenever in doubt for anything. Infractions,
Corrections and Judgments can be administrated. They can be ordered
to openly masturbate others or themselves only in private or
semi-private surroundings. They should sit with legs apart, and may
use furniture.
Yellow Alert- This is a protocol of caution, behavior is limited. Taylor women will be trained how to behave under Yellow Alerts so as not to embarrass their owners with their crass and slutty manners.
At home: Taylor women are to be clothed (unless
ordered otherwise). They should not talk out of turn. They will
behave in the generally accepted manner according to the whore/hope
value system. They are not permitted to use the toilet, and should
ask permission whenever in doubt for anything in a quiet manner
without alerting anyone “Authority” level or lower.
Punishments will not be openly discussed, and will be administered
later. They should sit with legs apart, and may not use
furniture.
In public: Taylor women will be braless,
without panties, in collars and heels (unless ordered otherwise). In
all other ways, this functions as the “At Home”
protocols. They should sit with legs apart, and may use
furniture.
It will be assumed at work or school, Taylor women
are at Yellow alert unless otherwise specified by a Handler or higher
level authority.
Red Alert- This is the highest level of discretionary protocol available. This is reserved for special situations where decorum and modesty are expected, even of sluts and whores like the Taylor women. Court appearances, parent teacher conferences, church ceremonies, etc.
At home: Taylor women are to be clothed. They
should not talk out of turn. They will behave in the generally
accepted manner according to the whore/hope value system. They are
not permitted to use the toilet, and should ask permission whenever
in doubt for anything in a quiet manner without alerting anyone
“Authority” level or lower. Punishments will not be
openly discussed, and will be administered later. They should not sit
with legs apart, and may use furniture.
In public:
Taylor women will be braless, without panties, in collars and heels
(unless ordered otherwise). In all other ways, this functions as the
“At Home” protocols for red alert.
White Alert- This is a “fun status”. The Taylor women are to behave as if they are wanton sluts in need of correction and guidance. It is intended for use when Mrs. Waxerman visits or in her presence in order to shock her.
The Taylor women will practice and be trained how to behave in the most amusing and generally outrageous way, in order to push buttons.
The “Alerts” were all Chris’s idea. I had to admit they seemed like a good addition. I am sure the girls would have a lot of questions about when, what, where, and how often and with who. They always did. That being said, I added them down to my amendment and decided I would demonstrate the protocols with them when we were in public.
I would also have a “Black Alert” for Wendy. I wouldn’t write that one down, but I’ll go over it with her when we are alone. This is for when she is at work, and she needs to maintain her cover story with Steve and her co-workers.
Under that protocol, no chastity belt is allowed, and she won’t have to call her co-workers Sir. We’ll keep Jamie and Chris from finding out about it, as long as Wendy keeps up her end of our little bargain . She’ll need to purposely sacrifice stars so she never exceeds Jamie, and of course do all those extra things that a cum gobbler like her has to do.